Description : I've been keeping this to myself for a while since I just did it for fun, but oh well.
The real title is "W#ore."
It tells a story of a young woman in a relationship with a man that's only sexual in nature though she is also emotionally and mentally invested in him. These are her thoughts and feelings as she struggles with the fact that he doesn't love her while justifying her own actions like:
"What am I doing...
I'm so stupid...for him...
It may not make sense...
My excuse is...still I'm young"
I can imagine this young girl you sing of. Lost in a world of uncertain certainty. I can see how feelings can bend reality to a certain degree that makes us believe in things that we deny our gut instincts. This piece has a moving picture. While trapped in a fantasy reality is kicking up dust then clears for a different view. What I heard is a very interesting story sure many out there could relate in some way. Chin up feet forward and thanks for sharing with us. Take care.
well it's the first track which I've listened to from you (random but honestly I should say your avatar was the reason because of my own avatar ! & I was curious to hear a male vocal when I heard a young girl was singing )
= aobut lyrics: I think it was an innovative storyteller song ,more advanced than a college student normal perception .
= about Vocal & singing style : I think it was a tallented voice , capable larynx which shall know better about music theories,tonality in harmony & notation tune ,to never gone false & get a better performance number in performance evalution , but undeniable the larynx ability could get a good number in potentio meter .
& about vocal melody ( melody notation as a separate opinion & harmonize pursuant Instrumental version ):
I listened to a heartfull melody which was in a harmony & proper for Instrumental version from (Quavor) , it's hard work U'd done & have such a set melody line , pursuant the instrumental version .& I think it was good .
my appologize for such a long commenting .
Regards
a devastating track - so many are damaged by love/hate user-based relationships - this is a horrible and sympathetic scene - powerful and dark verities - how does brightness become so degraded? a grim and soulful exploration that is artless and naked in the best sense of musical expressionism.
also, while i am certainly no producer, the sound qualities are chilling and 3D.
bravos, sister
WOW I'm late..but it's always good to hear from you and it's funny how "powerful," "best sense of musical expressionism" and "soulful exploration" are ways that I would describe you :)
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Description : Spacey and Dancey and Synthwavey and Dreamy
Please leave your opinion if you have one
:)
This is the rough draft. To hear the final version, you can find the official release on streaming services and bandcamp.
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Description : UPDATED 01/03/2023 better volume level
hi guys this is my comeback song, never let them haters beat you.
as you know ive not been around much having gained a successful job and giving that all my attention. ive some catching up to do
this is to CreativeStudios great track The Ride, see what ive done :)). its 5 mins plus. thanks for letting me loose on it Jan.
Description : messed around on my piano, came up with a good idea, and put it in fl studio. I think it turned out pretty great. It would be awsome to get some vocals to this. if you do, feel free to change up the title or whatever. tempo is at 105 if ya need to know. review it and enjoy.
Description : Prod. by Louie Jun and Marbs Music. Diamond Star is the singer. It's on YouTube and SoundCloud. Check out my social media @diamondstarsy.
Description : My original vocal composition with an array of fantastic looperman samples.
Credits;
Production and Mix - 2nick8
Lyrics and Vocals - 2nick8
Music from Looperman Samples
midnightkayaking-sound-of-walking-away-guitar-2
sushilbawa-pluck-punchy-90
simsa105-vigorous-piano
sushilbawa-synth-stroke-90
hnstracks-piano-chords-oh-well-90-bpm
fanto8bc-liuru-piano-synth
willaman-xxxtentacion-drama-drums #2
krolbeats-lo-fi-drum-loop
angelwtf14-grand-808-slide
mamagbeats-80s-future-synth-90-bpm
yourboyhs-lovely-pads-90-bpm
krolbeats-synth-percussion-loop
josephfunk-fresh-and-clean-electric-keys-90
djole94hns-smooth-bass-for-beats
alabafruit-simple-hip-hop-drums-90-bpm
thenerve-chill-trap-90bpm
dannyhonestly-peezo-pixies
designedimpression-bass-loop-hip-rap-bass-guitar-90
Description : This one has been sitting on my computer for a bit now but didn't really like it. My friends say it can use some vocals and I think that is what this one needs. If there is anyone who wants to put some vocals on this, send me an email at .magic41151@yahoo.com. or post below. Thanks for tuning in and have a great day!
Description : Something different from me!
Emotional song about Balkan.
I worked on it with many pauses for a long period but i think its ready now!
Love and peace!
= aobut lyrics: I think it was an innovative storyteller song ,more advanced than a college student normal perception .
= about Vocal & singing style : I think it was a tallented voice , capable larynx which shall know better about music theories,tonality in harmony & notation tune ,to never gone false & get a better performance number in performance evalution , but undeniable the larynx ability could get a good number in potentio meter .
& about vocal melody ( melody notation as a separate opinion & harmonize pursuant Instrumental version ):
I listened to a heartfull melody which was in a harmony & proper for Instrumental version from (Quavor) , it's hard work U'd done & have such a set melody line , pursuant the instrumental version .& I think it was good .
my appologize for such a long commenting .
Regards
_BehnaM
They are always welcome. I love feedback, so thank you for taking the time and giving me kind words.
also, while i am certainly no producer, the sound qualities are chilling and 3D.
bravos, sister