Tags : | Pop | 4.82 MB

Description : I've been keeping this to myself for a while since I just did it for fun, but oh well.

The real title is "W#ore."

It tells a story of a young woman in a relationship with a man that's only sexual in nature though she is also emotionally and mentally invested in him. These are her thoughts and feelings as she struggles with the fact that he doesn't love her while justifying her own actions like:

"What am I doing...
I'm so stupid...for him...
It may not make sense...
My excuse is...still I'm young"

Instrumental:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/124210

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  1. DesignedImpression
    DesignedImpression on Mon 18th Feb 2013 - 11 years ago

    I can imagine this young girl you sing of. Lost in a world of uncertain certainty. I can see how feelings can bend reality to a certain degree that makes us believe in things that we deny our gut instincts. This piece has a moving picture. While trapped in a fantasy reality is kicking up dust then clears for a different view. What I heard is a very interesting story sure many out there could relate in some way. Chin up feet forward and thanks for sharing with us. Take care.

    LightAs1Feather
    Reply by LightAs1Feather

    You seem to understand this story. Not only the surface, but the hidden aspects as well. Thank you for commenting :)

  2. deciBel
    deciBel on Mon 18th Feb 2013 - 11 years ago

    well it's the first track which I've listened to from you (random but honestly I should say your avatar was the reason because of my own avatar ! & I was curious to hear a male vocal when I heard a young girl was singing )

    = aobut lyrics: I think it was an innovative storyteller song ,more advanced than a college student normal perception .

    = about Vocal & singing style : I think it was a tallented voice , capable larynx which shall know better about music theories,tonality in harmony & notation tune ,to never gone false & get a better performance number in performance evalution , but undeniable the larynx ability could get a good number in potentio meter .

    & about vocal melody ( melody notation as a separate opinion & harmonize pursuant Instrumental version ):
    I listened to a heartfull melody which was in a harmony & proper for Instrumental version from (Quavor) , it's hard work U'd done & have such a set melody line , pursuant the instrumental version .& I think it was good .

    my appologize for such a long commenting .
    Regards

    _BehnaM

    LightAs1Feather
    Reply by LightAs1Feather

    Please never apologize for long comments :)
    They are always welcome. I love feedback, so thank you for taking the time and giving me kind words.

  3. MStokes
    MStokes on Mon 21st Jan 2013 - 11 years ago

    a devastating track - so many are damaged by love/hate user-based relationships - this is a horrible and sympathetic scene - powerful and dark verities - how does brightness become so degraded? a grim and soulful exploration that is artless and naked in the best sense of musical expressionism.
    also, while i am certainly no producer, the sound qualities are chilling and 3D.
    bravos, sister

    LightAs1Feather
    Reply by LightAs1Feather

    WOW I'm late..but it's always good to hear from you and it's funny how "powerful," "best sense of musical expressionism" and "soulful exploration" are ways that I would describe you :)

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