Scratch That - MOAB

10th Apr 2012 03:51 - 14 years ago
Description : I thought I would give Electro a go, not many people have heard my songs, please leave comments and let me know what I can do to improve! Hope you enjoy!

Comments (1)

If you have time take a listen and give MOAB some feedback.

FreeRadical
FreeRadical 11th Apr 2012 11:13 - 14 years ago
Well you said in the review you gave me that you're pretty new to this so i'll kick off by saying you're off to a good start. You've clearly got a good understanding of filtered sounds, pitch shifters and making subtle changes to keep the track interesting.
I like the way you haven't over saturated it with sounds and the acid box lick has clearly had a lot of time and attention to detail spent on it. i don't normally find that many positive points to kick off a review with so you should be proud of yourself there.
Now, I don't like to just a$$ kiss with my reviews so what i would suggest you could do to improve this is concentrate on getting the stuff that's going on in the background up another level. What i mean is the drum section seems to rely on just a kick and a hat. I reckon a nice filtered breakbreak over the top of what you've done would fill it out niceley and give it that extra bit of "bite" that it deserves.
Oh and i'd definitely say this is a "techno" track as opposed to electro.
Nice work, keep it up and you'll get where you want to be.
FR
MOAB
MOAB replied 11th Apr 2012 - 14 years ago
Thank you so much for the response, it is great to hear another voice on it! I am working with the drums and snares right now, trying to add a little more for change up. I am finding it hard to keep my tracks consistent. I struggle coming into drops or change-ups using the same same rhythm and similar sounds. I, again, really appreciate the feedback, I have been listening to more of your tracks, they sound awesome. I'm picking up some good ideas. I will be sure to comment on more of your songs, though my advice may not be as helpful being newer to music than you. I uploaded a new song, this time to techno. If you have the chance and want to listen to it I would greatly appreciate it!

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