Description : Quick track in D - Minor, not sure if i like the guitar yet...
critical reviews pls
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great guitar its d tuned a lil but thats nice good vibe just need them 808's and your good besides the snare echo just like codemiester said let the volume on it fade do some tweakin
yea i figured i mite try strings instead or a diff typr of guitar or even a synth, still got alot of work to do on this 1, deff wont b stoppin anytime soon...thanks 4 d comment
Thought i'd better stop by and tune in since i dropped such a sarcastic remark on the notice board.
I have to say i hear where your coming from. The bassline, the beat and the synths are great but that guitar part could either use something to fill it out a bit or just changing. For me personally the tune lost the vibe a bit when that came in and the rest of it is too good to just settle for it as it is.
I like the vibe your on here though, It's a bit Massive Attackish (been listening to them a lot just lateley)
Good work man.
not bad guitar is diferent sounds a lil de-tuned which is cool seems like in ur pattern u need a nother snare sounds like 1 snare per bar jus in the begining, and the lil snare delay could work if u wanna go that way just sorta make the volume fade a lil after it starts to echo... jus my opinions... I know it helps ha ha feel free to knock my stuff too lol
thankz man, yeah i'll look into to it...i personally thought the drums were good, d melodies jus disappointed me...but ye thanks i'll certainly experiment with dat in mind.
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I have to say i hear where your coming from. The bassline, the beat and the synths are great but that guitar part could either use something to fill it out a bit or just changing. For me personally the tune lost the vibe a bit when that came in and the rest of it is too good to just settle for it as it is.
I like the vibe your on here though, It's a bit Massive Attackish (been listening to them a lot just lateley)
Good work man.