Smoothness DEMO - Samoi08

12th Dec 2011 13:57 - 14 years ago
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Description : Quick track in D - Minor, not sure if i like the guitar yet...

critical reviews pls

Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give Samoi08 some feedback.

CAUSBIE_RECORDS
CAUSBIE_RECORDS 13th Dec 2011 06:56 - 14 years ago
great guitar its d tuned a lil but thats nice good vibe just need them 808's and your good besides the snare echo just like codemiester said let the volume on it fade do some tweakin
jmcbeats
jmcbeats 12th Dec 2011 17:46 - 14 years ago
well the guitar is a lil detuned . but other than that its coo .. try another guitar .. dont stop till u find the rite one .. hala back ...
Samoi08
Samoi08 replied 12th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
yea i figured i mite try strings instead or a diff typr of guitar or even a synth, still got alot of work to do on this 1, deff wont b stoppin anytime soon...thanks 4 d comment
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 12th Dec 2011 16:55 - 14 years ago
Thought i'd better stop by and tune in since i dropped such a sarcastic remark on the notice board.
I have to say i hear where your coming from. The bassline, the beat and the synths are great but that guitar part could either use something to fill it out a bit or just changing. For me personally the tune lost the vibe a bit when that came in and the rest of it is too good to just settle for it as it is.
I like the vibe your on here though, It's a bit Massive Attackish (been listening to them a lot just lateley)
Good work man.
Samoi08
Samoi08 replied 12th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
haha good forum post.....thanks man, yea i might remove the wah-guitar all together and come up with something new instead, time will tell..
Codemiester
Codemiester 12th Dec 2011 16:04 - 14 years ago
not bad guitar is diferent sounds a lil de-tuned which is cool seems like in ur pattern u need a nother snare sounds like 1 snare per bar jus in the begining, and the lil snare delay could work if u wanna go that way just sorta make the volume fade a lil after it starts to echo... jus my opinions... I know it helps ha ha feel free to knock my stuff too lol
Samoi08
Samoi08 replied 12th Dec 2011 - 14 years ago
thankz man, yeah i'll look into to it...i personally thought the drums were good, d melodies jus disappointed me...but ye thanks i'll certainly experiment with dat in mind.

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