FINISHED VERSION - Navarez

You've got some really nice ideas here :) the potential is definitely there - I wouldn't call this finished though... You need to do more

As nice as that arp melody is, there's too much of it. Try adding some variation to the loop so it doesn't become tiresome to the ears, chop it up a little or something. And maybe add another motif too so there's more variation.

This track needs more bass. Particularly when the track drops. I don't think I hear any bass besides during the build up's... (I also think I hear a note or two that clashes with the pad)

I see you're new to the game of producing so nothing's going to be perfect yet. You may want to read some article's/watch some tutorials about Equalizers (EQ). Learning how to do mix down properly is a good skill to have and really bring your tracks to life...

Like I say, this has a lot of potential to be a great track, but it's not finished yet, so keep at it ;)

Toonz