Paper Moon - EVRiM

20th Jun 2011 05:12 - 15 years ago
Description : Song I wrote, recorded and arranged. Used some awesome loops from Minor2Go. I love his emotive guitar recordings. Anywho, it's called Paper Moon.

Comments (9)

If you have time take a listen and give EVRiM some feedback.

gokcen
gokcen 25th Jun 2015 15:09 - 11 years ago
I want to remix this song?
Not for commercial use.. I can't make money off my music..
Beraber sarki yapsak olurmi?
Senin vocallarini kunlanmak istiyommm!!!
AllenV
AllenV 16th Feb 2012 23:29 - 14 years ago
This is wonderful,so glad I found you!

Allen.
SBzilla
SBzilla 3rd Jul 2011 16:32 - 15 years ago
the 2nd one sounds clearer.
SBzilla
SBzilla 29th Jun 2011 00:50 - 15 years ago
it sounds like the same version, when did u reupload it?
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Ok try it now.

I had that day, but I changed it up a bit more now. Better 1, better 2? :)
GEOram
GEOram 28th Jun 2011 17:30 - 15 years ago
Nice track vocals are smooth and on point, no to mention that the lyrics are real great quality
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanx GEOram. That means a lot b/c I take my songwriting very seriously. Meaning, I work at honing in that skill a lot. As well as gaining more and more accurate delivery of my vocals. Good to know it's makin' a difference.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 22nd Jun 2011 11:03 - 15 years ago
Beatiful track. Almost as beautiful as your voice :-)

Love the track.

Faved

John
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanx John! That's sweet. :)
SBzilla
SBzilla 21st Jun 2011 00:20 - 15 years ago
Nice Song! love the guitar loop.
you have a great voice but u should have amped it up a little.

other than that it's a great song.
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yeah that's a really good loop. Minor2Go has some great ones. Well, i tweaked the mix some an reuploaded. Can you tell the difference? Improvement?
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 20th Jun 2011 17:23 - 15 years ago
This is a very good song! Reminds me a bit of Kate Bush, which is meant as a compliment! Creative use of those guitar loops! Really nice arrangement and mixing! Good lyrics! Well done!
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Ya know, I did not even know who Kate Bush was until about 2 years ago when people started telling me I sounded like her. I looked her up and I LOVE her now. Her live version of Running up that Hill w/ David Gilmore on guitar is A-awe-sum!

Take care, Spiv! & Thanx!
TurboXclusive
TurboXclusive 20th Jun 2011 09:31 - 15 years ago
I actually enjoyed this. Great lyrics. Only thing I could hear is the sustained notes on the guitar kind of starting bleeding in with each other too much and distracted me from the lovely lyrics. Great track tho, good job
EVRiM
EVRiM replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hi Turbo. I actually went in and lessened the sustain on the guitar. Thanx for the suggestion! I reuploaded if you want to listen.

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