Tags : | Pop | 4.04 MB | Has Lyrics | Featured

Description : Song I wrote, recorded and arranged. Used some awesome loops from Minor2Go. I love his emotive guitar recordings. Anywho, it's called Paper Moon.

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  1. gokcen
    gokcen on Thu 25th Jun 2015 - 4 years ago

    I want to remix this song?
    Not for commercial use.. I can't make money off my music..
    Beraber sarki yapsak olurmi?
    Senin vocallarini kunlanmak istiyommm!!!

  2. AllenV
    AllenV on Thu 16th Feb 2012 - 7 years ago

    This is wonderful,so glad I found you!

    Allen.

  3. SeanBoogie
    SeanBoogie on Sun 3rd Jul 2011 - 8 years ago

    the 2nd one sounds clearer.

  4. SeanBoogie
    SeanBoogie on Wed 29th Jun 2011 - 8 years ago

    it sounds like the same version, when did u reupload it?

    EVRiM
    Reply by EVRiM

    Ok try it now.

    I had that day, but I changed it up a bit more now. Better 1, better 2? :)

  5. GEOram
    GEOram on Tue 28th Jun 2011 - 8 years ago

    Nice track vocals are smooth and on point, no to mention that the lyrics are real great quality

    EVRiM
    Reply by EVRiM

    Thanx GEOram. That means a lot b/c I take my songwriting very seriously. Meaning, I work at honing in that skill a lot. As well as gaining more and more accurate delivery of my vocals. Good to know it's makin' a difference.

  6. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Wed 22nd Jun 2011 - 8 years ago

    Beatiful track. Almost as beautiful as your voice :-)

    Love the track.

    Faved

    John

    EVRiM
    Reply by EVRiM

    Thanx John! That's sweet. :)

  7. SeanBoogie
    SeanBoogie on Tue 21st Jun 2011 - 8 years ago

    Nice Song! love the guitar loop.
    you have a great voice but u should have amped it up a little.

    other than that it's a great song.

    EVRiM
    Reply by EVRiM

    Yeah that's a really good loop. Minor2Go has some great ones. Well, i tweaked the mix some an reuploaded. Can you tell the difference? Improvement?

  8. Spivkurl
    Spivkurl on Mon 20th Jun 2011 - 8 years ago

    This is a very good song! Reminds me a bit of Kate Bush, which is meant as a compliment! Creative use of those guitar loops! Really nice arrangement and mixing! Good lyrics! Well done!

    EVRiM
    Reply by EVRiM

    Ya know, I did not even know who Kate Bush was until about 2 years ago when people started telling me I sounded like her. I looked her up and I LOVE her now. Her live version of Running up that Hill w/ David Gilmore on guitar is A-awe-sum!

    Take care, Spiv! & Thanx!

  9. TurboXclusive
    TurboXclusive on Mon 20th Jun 2011 - 8 years ago

    I actually enjoyed this. Great lyrics. Only thing I could hear is the sustained notes on the guitar kind of starting bleeding in with each other too much and distracted me from the lovely lyrics. Great track tho, good job

    EVRiM
    Reply by EVRiM

    Hi Turbo. I actually went in and lessened the sustain on the guitar. Thanx for the suggestion! I reuploaded if you want to listen.

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I spent my life around a paper moon
I danced and danced until the break of noon
The walls I'd built came down way too soon
Before I had a chance

To break me from this spell
To free me from my hell
So I danced and danced around a paper moon

As I become the girl I've longed to be
The one who broke free from all misery
The girl who risked it all to be set free
To give myself a chance

To break me from this spell
To free me from my hell
So I danced and danced around a paper moon

Since we were young
You turned us into objects
Always they more important
Than we could ever be
Tightly binding my mind in circles
Careful not to speak the wrong words
In fact...
I remember hottest Julys
Sitting in my room just asking why

I spend my life around a paper moon
I dance and dance until the break of noon
The walls I'd built came down way too soon
Before I'd had a chance

To break me from this spell
To free me from my hell
So I danced and danced around a paper moon

around a paper moon
around a paper moon
around a paper moon

So I danced and danced around a paper moon

around a paper moon
around a paper moon
around a paper moon

Sitting in my room just asking why...

 


 

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