The Pyre - Jeff05C

5th Jun 2011 22:24 - 15 years ago
Description : A Rock/Bluesy Rock tune. In my consistent fashion I should re-record the guitar but haven't. Check it out. Let me know what you think.

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give Jeff05C some feedback.

ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 17th Jul 2011 19:28 - 15 years ago
Hey great tune, I would bring up the vocals and add some drums, this kind of has a white stripes vibe to it, a good thing in my opinion.
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Still tweaking this one, re did the vocals and it's better louder for sure. Thanks for the review!

JC
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 7th Jun 2011 00:35 - 15 years ago
Should bring the vocals a bit more forward. Like your track and guitar playing. Some drums and bass and you you'll have a peach with this one.

Keep them coming, Brother

John
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yup, started making some tweeks from imput i've gotten here, re-recorded the vox and am liking it better. Thanks for checking it out.
jc
Vicen
Vicen 6th Jun 2011 04:37 - 15 years ago
Wonderful song. Enough to be good, but if you polish the sound that the voice is clear, will be wonderful.
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks very much, I"m going to keep on it.
retronical
retronical 6th Jun 2011 00:21 - 15 years ago
liked it, fun riffy simple stuff. liked the lyrics and ur voice is good in a Neil Young type rock fashion, just think your holding back the fire in the belly. Either some vox distortion fx or start smoking a carton of camels lol, cheerz enjoyed
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the review, I'm trying to let that fire out. Need more practice! Thanks for the advice.

Jeff
Kikajon
Kikajon 5th Jun 2011 23:13 - 15 years ago
An instant fav. Great songwriting and I love sound of the guitar and the way you play it. If it's possible, crank up the vocals just a bit so your voice doesn't drown in the guitar.
Having said that, thanks for a wonderful performace and on of the best tracks in a while. just xlnt.

/pmk

ps I'd would go strait into my iphone playlist if download was available.
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks fro the input, It needs a lot of work admittedly but what the hell, i'm impatient some times. Thanks for the input, i'll think about boosting the vocals, them being low has is due to being self conscious about my voice. I'll get over it;-)

looks like we like the same color...
jeff

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