Make You Mine - Poetry71

11th May 2011 15:31 - 15 years ago
Description : Just a track I have been working on

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give Poetry71 some feedback.

JLive
JLive 31st Jul 2011 15:31 - 15 years ago
Nice song, Just pronounce your voice alittle more, and put feeling into it other then that it'll be a bad ass track once done.
madamski
madamski 23rd Jul 2011 19:32 - 15 years ago
Pro's:
I like the piano loop as well, and the synth later adds a nice, subtle touch. The rhythm of the verse flows pretty well too. Your voice (assuming it's you) was clean and I liked the very subtle reverb (I think).

Constructive Criticism:
As I'm sure you know, the song starts to lose stem as it goes; it just sounds unfinished which again, I'm sure you're aware of! :)

I would also say that this needs some sort of chorus and perhaps even a bridge or something to break it up as it gets very repetitive after a while.

The production sounded clean though and although I'm not near my monitor speakers, it sounded well-put-together.!
trevsi13
trevsi13 11th May 2011 16:19 - 15 years ago
very well produced
I love the piano !

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