Listen To Untitled Dub Song By DougieDJ At Looperman.com

i agree with MrE, it dont flow to good but all these instruments together could deff work. let us know when the finished product is up and running!

lost me at the 45 sec bass insert, but nice bass, just get on getting the wobs right and you'll be set to go :)
Synth needs to be turned down, put a sick reverb/delay on the hi hats/snare and you got yourself a nice track...from my perspective =P hope it helped
God Bless
Synergex

This has got me hyped man! It like an underground grime track man, loving that synth..ur talented bro..i cud jam to this all day man..peace..FAVOURITED..

I agree with DV..this has got heaps of visual potential...a great foray into a new genre on your part......that's what it's all about exploring our own boundaries...cool!...cheers planet

Make a video of this I'd use camera shots of multiple sources (like a car, a dog barking in sync with parts of the bass, a Trendista chick all talkin on her celly in sync with another part of the bass, etc), each kinda representin different speakers or what not. Then I'd throw in some shots of you just chillin in random locales (in a store or deli, walkin down the road, sitting on the hood of a car, leaning on a balcony looking out over a pool or beach, near an Airport runway with planes landing, at home in front of yer TV, etc). Then I'd throw in some intermittant breaks in the video feed switching between complete black to snow screen to blank white-grey test screen, etc. Don't ask me why, but that's what I was thinkin the few times I listened to this (requesting a longer version possibly, please?). Headin off. Lates!

PS. You still up for that collab?
Hit me back whenever.

cool sounds!

as mrE said the flow needs consistancy [i think] other than that a very cool sounding track.
gizz