Concrete Wings Demo - Killumineye

5th Jun 2014 19:14 - 12 years ago
Description : Song will have completion when i have finished working in a studio , It is a demo for now so does not have the greatest sound quality , but like to give s taste of the track ..

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Killumineye some feedback.

Evisma
Evisma 9th Jun 2014 02:47 - 12 years ago
Beginning is a cross between Enya and later Gilmour era Floyd.

Is this you singing? If yes, please continue! Very unique.

Sorry for my inability to find much fault in your track. I really like it, and the name "Concrete Wings".

Please keep on keeping on!

Evan
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 6th Jul 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you Evisma much appreciated:)
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 7th Jun 2014 15:34 - 12 years ago
On second listen now. The intro gives me the feeling of not knowing what to expect, and I like that in a track. FreeRadical asked if this was you singing, and you didn't say anything about it... if this is you, you are good at what you're doing! I definitely agree that the guitar could be up in the mix a little, though for the more pop-rock style like this it may be appropriate the way it is. Getting towards the end, and I hear that the guitar gets a bit louder near the end, so maybe you shouldn't adjust the level. I am really into stuff that builds subtly toward the end, so I get it. The sort of epic drum sounds are a nice touch too. Should be pretty cool when you bring it to completion. Good one!
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 6th Jul 2014 - 12 years ago
So grateful for your review Spivkurl , thank you
Danke
Danke 6th Jun 2014 22:42 - 12 years ago
Tastes fine...brilliant melodies...love the acoustic guitars (but it's back in a bit)...the whole track's atmosphere is like a John Lennon song's...

Hippie feeling (for me)

Respect, Danke
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 6th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
You know Danke i was thinking that the guitars are a bit low and now it has been confirmed and thank you for your advice , I will now work on that . Thank you for your kind review it is truly appreciated..
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 6th Jun 2014 19:59 - 12 years ago
Ha! since my track is already at the top i can't be accused of bumping my own! So here it comes...................
GREAT TRACK!

No seriously, it's started off very well. Is that you singing? It's always nice when someone can sing in key and has an understanding of mic dynamics. Lyrically it's very good, the instruments blend well together and the mix is clean. So all in all great track sums it up in a nutshell.
So i'm just going to fill up the rest of the review with twaddle so i can still be typing when the track finishes. Did you see lizard lick towing last night? I'm kidding. This is a very professionally put together piece and was a pleasure to listen to.
FR
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 6th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Hahahahaha Freeradical I am in stitches here . No there are some whom do it , I definitly wasn't aiming at everyone but at a slight few . Thanks for this brilliant review it had me laughing out loud . I Haven't watched lizard lick is it worth watching . I am actually only catching up with breaking bad now thats how up to date i am lol . Again thank you :)
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 6th Jun 2014 16:07 - 12 years ago
Interesting demo. Looking forward to hearing the complete track.
Ciao, Domenico
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 6th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you Domenico .
TinyFinger
TinyFinger 5th Jun 2014 20:33 - 12 years ago
Hi. Good track.
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 5th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you ..
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 5th Jun 2014 20:06 - 12 years ago
For it being in an unfinished state, it's a fairly solid track. One of the things I like about it is how almost whimsical and floaty the vibe is, but how dark the lyrics are. I've always like that kind of contrast. I'm curious to see how it turns out when it's finished.

Take care.
V.
Killumineye
Killumineye replied 5th Jun 2014 - 12 years ago
Thank you Valvedriver for your comment , much appreciated..

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