Concrete Wings Demo - Killumineye

Beginning is a cross between Enya and later Gilmour era Floyd.

Is this you singing? If yes, please continue! Very unique.

Sorry for my inability to find much fault in your track. I really like it, and the name "Concrete Wings".

Please keep on keeping on!

Evan

On second listen now. The intro gives me the feeling of not knowing what to expect, and I like that in a track. FreeRadical asked if this was you singing, and you didn't say anything about it... if this is you, you are good at what you're doing! I definitely agree that the guitar could be up in the mix a little, though for the more pop-rock style like this it may be appropriate the way it is. Getting towards the end, and I hear that the guitar gets a bit louder near the end, so maybe you shouldn't adjust the level. I am really into stuff that builds subtly toward the end, so I get it. The sort of epic drum sounds are a nice touch too. Should be pretty cool when you bring it to completion. Good one!

Tastes fine...brilliant melodies...love the acoustic guitars (but it's back in a bit)...the whole track's atmosphere is like a John Lennon song's...

Hippie feeling (for me)

Respect, Danke

Ha! since my track is already at the top i can't be accused of bumping my own! So here it comes...................
GREAT TRACK!

No seriously, it's started off very well. Is that you singing? It's always nice when someone can sing in key and has an understanding of mic dynamics. Lyrically it's very good, the instruments blend well together and the mix is clean. So all in all great track sums it up in a nutshell.
So i'm just going to fill up the rest of the review with twaddle so i can still be typing when the track finishes. Did you see lizard lick towing last night? I'm kidding. This is a very professionally put together piece and was a pleasure to listen to.
FR

Interesting demo. Looking forward to hearing the complete track.
Ciao, Domenico

Hi. Good track.

For it being in an unfinished state, it's a fairly solid track. One of the things I like about it is how almost whimsical and floaty the vibe is, but how dark the lyrics are. I've always like that kind of contrast. I'm curious to see how it turns out when it's finished.

Take care.
V.