Paralyzed - Kriebel17

24th Mar 2014 00:27 - 12 years ago
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Description : I think this is one of my most unique tracks to date, had the most fun i have ever had on a song, singing in it, doing a little rap, doing a little comedy, felt like its a great song, but it's not what i think, let me know what you think please. The music is from the47, vocals by me.

Comments (6)

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ToneSeta
ToneSeta 18th Apr 2014 05:22 - 12 years ago
if you ever need a singer lmk
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 18th Apr 2014 - 12 years ago
ok, will do.
Nyara
Nyara 24th Mar 2014 13:43 - 12 years ago
Nice !
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 24th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you.
Rezav
Rezav 24th Mar 2014 13:26 - 12 years ago
Very GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOd
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 24th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you very much.
Evisma
Evisma 24th Mar 2014 04:43 - 12 years ago
Instantly sounds radio friendly, a dog-eared blueprint.

I hear what you're going for with the vocals, but I think they need a more aggressive voice.

Auto-tune. Damn.

I think your writing of the lyrics and phrasing is good, you just need someone else doing them. Again, what you wrote was very fitting and well done. The music was pretty good too.

Evan
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 24th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thanks for the input, i'll take the radio friendly thing as a compliment, and the auto tune is only towards the end , like i said in my other reply it was meant for the build up in the little rap part at the end because every rap song you hear anymore is auto tuned and i want my stuff to be mainstream so i'll follow that.
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE 24th Mar 2014 02:24 - 12 years ago
i look foreword to seeing what else you can do :)
MOONLYTE
MOONLYTE 24th Mar 2014 01:57 - 12 years ago
In my honest opinion, im half and half on this. The music aspect sounds good, with decent lyrics, and i was getting into it, but then this overwhelming autotune comes in right near the end and makes me wonder why? it was fine without it in the beginning.

always can be better man, so dont quit!
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 24th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thanks for the comment i respect your opinion, and with only me singing i thought the ending should have a different vibe to change it up, plus i wanted to lead into the little rap part at the end with the auto tune. wanted like a rock vs rap kinda thing.... just wanted something different.

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