Tags : | Acoustic | 6.96 MB

Description : A little something i made today. The guitar loop is from looperman member Nilooy. Had a lot of fun with this song, especially with the little girl parts. All vocals are done by me

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  1. VicaMOOR
    VicaMOOR on Sat 9th Aug 2014 - 5 years ago

    Very interesting track you have here, dude. Remind me one one of the many creepypastas read on youtube, ironic how I never find any of them creepy but that's not the point. The point is, this is very enchanting, charming, and peaks my morbid curiosity. Keep it up.

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Thanks for the listen man, surprised you even found this one haha

  2. SpellJammer
    SpellJammer on Sat 24th May 2014 - 6 years ago

    Brilliant track bro. Love it. Poignant lyrics.

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Thanks for listening!

  3. yappy
    yappy on Sat 29th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    Great job. Reminds me of Radiohead in some way. Vocals are indeed a bit shaky but they didn't build New York in 1 day either right? Keep it up!

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    thanks for the comment :)

  4. SikStyle1
    SikStyle1 on Sat 29th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    And where is the download why is it disabled i wanna steal this and say it was me so i can get rich off you and lie about it!

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Only if i can take yours!

  5. SikStyle1
    SikStyle1 on Sat 29th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    You have suck a happy little smile for a sad song :P lol good job a again

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Dont worry, ill be updating photos on all my sites soon.

  6. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Thu 27th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    "Something is right here!"

    Compliments____Orlando

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Thanks muches!

  7. imsorrybrandon
    imsorrybrandon on Thu 27th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    very different but in a good way,so sad. Gives me chills

  8. MisterCH
    MisterCH on Wed 26th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    I've always digged songs or any form of art that can effectively create a surreal feeling or even a creepy mood. Well, this most definitely achieves that really well. Love how this song immediately inserts the listener into a story, a scene, creating its own unique atmosphere. Very creative and haunting. Keep up the good work.

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Thanks a lot :)I was goig for creativity, and im glad it was achieved

  9. DjRymZ
    DjRymZ on Wed 26th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    Nice banging track ..Every instrument is sitting well on the mix. good job

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Thanks very much

  10. Maffin159
    Maffin159 on Wed 26th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    God this is good.

    I disagree with some of the comments here – I love the structure, dialogue and story, and you should definitely NOT be in any hurry to change things here as it’s working very well indeed IMHO.

    Instantly captivating, cool and original and an absolute breath of fresh air.

    It’s well mixed and restrained although the suggestion of doubling the vocal might be a good idea.

    What could be nice is to re-sing some sections exactly the same but on a different note (a 5th or 4th or 3rd above or below) to create a simple harmony.

    Don’t forget to really think about the lyric and story and reflect that in the arrangement. There is a little hiccup at 2.50 when the guitar doubles on the echo, and again when you take it out and go back to the single at 4.04. This might be fixed with a ‘fade in’ rather than a hard start and stop. But as the lyric is ‘false reality’ you introduce the idea that there is another level of being… ‘the dream world’ … and it’s a nice idea to highlight these words by bringing in ‘another level’ to the guitar or another instrument or voice at that point to show the listener you what you mean musically.

    Illustrate the words with the music.

    I don’t sing as well as you, so I over-cooked the vocals a bit on What Is Real Never Fades:

    https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153504

    …by singing 6 times to thicken it up and I think it loses a little intimacy as a result, but play around with an additional voice in there, either as a double or a harmony, as JJWeeks says it still can be gentle even if you thicken it (..a little trick is that 3 layers together on the same note will fix the pitch variation, but 2 or 4 does not…not sure why…just a trick used by violin players :).

    The idea is brilliant. The post-apocalyptic, semi-conscious vibe is breath-taking and please don’t do too much. It does sound like a kind of rock intro on first listen (we are waiting for the full rock bass / guitar / drums to crash in…but they don’t and it would make it ‘ordinary’ and like everybody else’s music if you did that I think).

    Keep it cool. Less is more, as they say, and overall a brilliant little track which more than demonstrates your creativity, uniqueness, nerve and talent…to coin a phrase.

    Fix that little guitar glitch I mentioned, have a quick play with the voice double, but I would definitely be tempted to leave it alone, keep it on the site, and quickly move on and do another song. It will give you a fresh canvas for a new idea and you have it in you to be brilliant I think.

    Well done and keep going.

    Cheers for now. Maff.

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Seeing a comment this long thats so full of detail makes me think that people are really listening and are actually trying to help without being rude about it. I really appreciate the time you took to type that all out.

    I didnt want to pit other instruments in because i wanted it to seem like it was just a guy and his guitar in post-apocalyptic world, and thats all he had left.

    I will try the layering of voices, since that seems to be a universally advised thing to do.

    Im glad you think thats it IS somewhat original, and a breath of fresh air, because i myself definitely thought it was different.

    Thanks for the wonderful feedback Maff. :)

  11. SikStyle1
    SikStyle1 on Wed 26th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    Fuck what they say man just keep making music and you will grow i love it!

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    haha thanks Sik

  12. ValveDriver
    ValveDriver on Wed 26th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    Hello.

    Along with what Evisma and JJWeeks have said, I'd also like mention that quality is far more impressive and noteworthy than quantity. Not to sound discouraging by any means. You have good ideas. I'd like to see you take more time and let them have a chance to evolve to their full potential.

    Keep at it, mister.

    Take care.
    V.

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    when you say quality do you mean the song sounds or the actual singing and effort put into it?

    When it comes to the song sounds, Im not a producer, i have no idea how to really mix or master, and im still just messin with stuff.

    When it comes to the singing, Mostly im just playing with the ideas to see what fits.

    I thank you for your comment :)

  13. Evisma
    Evisma on Wed 26th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    Creepy indeed, the description mentioning "the little girl parts" doesn't help.

    Mr. EYEDYE, I like the idea of where you were going, just know that stuff will be picked apart and judged, for good or bad. Examine everything you write and do before you dangle it out there.

    I believe JJWeekz was very tactful and helpful and her advice should be seriously considered.

    Keep at it and you WILL get better. Take care.

    Evan

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    I take advice and criticism to heart, good or bad, because it all lets me see what i can do to be better, and what im doing right. I thank you for your feedback :)

  14. JJWeekz
    JJWeekz on Tue 25th Mar 2014 - 6 years ago

    Vocally, this could use to be rehearsed a couple more times, to eliminate some of the shakiness. Sometimes you start off beat and off tempo, but I also hear a lot of great tone in this. Overall, I would layer up your voice again in an editor so it's stronger or sing with slightly more confidence. You can still sing soft while gathering up some "grrr" in your low tone.

    The dialog weirded me out a bit, wasn't really sure what was going on there and honestly sounded pedo-bear creepy to me. If I wrote this, I would have shortened the dialogue and eliminated some of the lines (which come off a bit cheesy and bit cliche), though I admire the art in adding this element.

    I did immensely enjoy the acoustic part and your low talking voice in the beginning, as well as the mysterious rock style often found in Metallica and or even System of a Down's song Hypnotize.

    I'm definitely following your progress on here, because you drew me in with those pellas you posted. I still feel we have yet to hear something from you which lives up to your profile description: "I've been lyrically gifted from an early age..."

    Show me ;-) Accept the challenge. I'll be waiting for your next upload.

    LilEmolyte
    Reply by LilEmolyte

    Thank you for the feedback, and i respect your criticism and opinion :)

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