Pretty professional sounding song you created here, great job adding just the right beat and sounds to the acapella!
You could add some piano from the intro somewhere in the middle also maybe? Or turn the piano into something more coherent with the rest of the sounds in the song? Just a thought. But I like it this way too - good job!
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I was kinda trying to shift the feel of the track unexpectedly from a smooth piano to high energy synths, just trying to switch it up.
Hi, just checking on you guys, are you all still behaving in here?
So the witch has her own cathedral you say? Why is she drowning then?
But I liked the melody, the drums not so much. My favourite part is from 3:30 to 4:36!
Great video! And a fun song. Ha ha ha! Sorry if I hurt any feelings but this makes me laugh - because I like this, it's hilarious in a good way and also very creative.
And then suddenly, it turns in to this cool hip hop (or what ever it is in the middle - always clueless about genres) track. And then the other style continues...very weird and wonderful.
Great! I think you should sing more. Don't be shy.
HI CitizenMofo!
This is a hard piece to comment, I had to go and listen to an other of your tracks to get a reference to what kind of music you usually do, and not sure if it helped.
Really? This is how this should sound?
Because I'm hearing some very good and interesting stuff underneath that alarming sound of the synth which takes over all the space.
And then comes that other alarm signal in the end. I'm confused. And the lyrics on top of it. About being numb...not feeling at all. Very alarming.
Nice!
Very nice even. But not sure if I like the catchy ongoing melody enough to listen to it for five minutes and then repeat, though...it could use some variation.
Great vocal, both female and male.
I agree somewhat with your views on the melody, but at the same time, I tried to stick with some of the fundamentals from Tropical House music in order to keep Ice House somewhat similar... i.e the repeating melody.
Thank you for your feedback. Always appreciated!! :)
Hi again Alex!
This is so different in a very good way. Hypnotic use of Spivs vocal and all the creativiness with the instrumental. Beatiful guitar and atmosphere!
Loved it!
Hello SJ
Thank you for listening and your nice words!
It is much appreciated.
Our musical styles and visions are definitely very different so the result was unpredictable. I was trying to make a kind of a 'proper' song out of the given material - this is one of the final versions from many sketches I came up with when working on 'Premonator' project.
I think the 'original' one will be eventually posted as well sometime.
I am really happy you liked it! Thanks again for taking a listen. All the best to you,
Alex
Brilliant!
I would like to rearrange the last sentence "Out into the blue?" to sound more as and with the same pace as the guitar in the beginning (00:09), maybe just a tone below.
Just a thought.
Really liked this song. Great change-ups.
wow ! thank you much much SeriouslyJoking .
this means a lot to me .Behnam was a great inspiration for me and my fav musician here .
he offered me to use megapaul guitar loops ,encouraged me and teached me how to mix various sound .
nice to know you've felt same sprit in me . :)
this means a lot to me
Elena
Hi again DB!
This is kind of a crazy piece of music - great bass guitar (or is it a guitar?) and I actually loved the outro from 2:18 and to the end! You should evolve that part with that heavy bass. Funny lyrics!
Orlando!
This is MAGIC!
I'm picturing myself in the great Concert Hall downtown listening to this. Am I really sitting at home listening to this on Looperman? Can't be.
A brilliant piece of Music and I'm loving it.
Hope you are doing fine over there!
Cheers and take care/ SJ =)
What a coincidence SJ...I just returned from your page
commenting the wonderful "Needle In The Hay" and I'm back
in conversation with you.:) So glad you enjoyed my new track and I'm truly grateful for this very generous feedback and for the 'fav' ofcourse...means the world !:)
Oh hi Joe!
So this is about the dark, dark day when the kids leave the house - forevvah...the horror!
No really, I Think they'll be coming back occasionally. and when the kids have kids of their own you never get rid of them anymore...
I Think we may look at this in different ways. =D
Good song though! Really sinister sounding. Very nice.
I know that. And we both are not to far away from knowing what will happend later. But right now the thinking on a empty house and so on just makes me feel (a bit) sad.
I wonder that no one can hear the positive power and energy that also is anywhere deep inside this track :)
Good to know that you think that this track is in a way a good one and that you could enjoy the sounding of this track
Hi there, this was fun to listen to. The intro was good!
Maybe you need to refine some of the sounds and get som more happening in the middle? What's up with the hissing sound?
But it's a pretty good start.
on Younger Music - I Know Better Ft CAROLINE Equinox by 0Equinox0
You could add some piano from the intro somewhere in the middle also maybe? Or turn the piano into something more coherent with the rest of the sounds in the song? Just a thought. But I like it this way too - good job!
Cheers!
//SJ
on Overmyth II - Cathedral Of The Witch by ValveDriver
So the witch has her own cathedral you say? Why is she drowning then?
But I liked the melody, the drums not so much. My favourite part is from 3:30 to 4:36!
Cheers and take care// SJ =)
Maybe she’s an aquatic witch? Her cathedral might be underwater. Or maybe she’s a boghag.
I’m glad you liked the tune...or at least most of it. ;)
It was good to hear from you!
Take care.
V.
on The Rituals Of Spring by Orlando51
With much appreciation______Orlando
on KHYX - Back Again by KapparX
Good job.
Cheers/ SJ =)
on I Know You Want Me Too by CitizenMofo
And then suddenly, it turns in to this cool hip hop (or what ever it is in the middle - always clueless about genres) track. And then the other style continues...very weird and wonderful.
Great! I think you should sing more. Don't be shy.
on I Dont Feel a Thing by CitizenMofo
This is a hard piece to comment, I had to go and listen to an other of your tracks to get a reference to what kind of music you usually do, and not sure if it helped.
Really? This is how this should sound?
Because I'm hearing some very good and interesting stuff underneath that alarming sound of the synth which takes over all the space.
And then comes that other alarm signal in the end. I'm confused. And the lyrics on top of it. About being numb...not feeling at all. Very alarming.
So tell me about this!
on The Darkness ft SkwishFish by GoldenOokami
A really nice track.
Loved all the piano, and the bass is fabulous.
Cheers!
/ SJ =)
~GO
on Glaciers -Ft Jodie Cannon- by skwishfish
Very nice even. But not sure if I like the catchy ongoing melody enough to listen to it for five minutes and then repeat, though...it could use some variation.
Great vocal, both female and male.
Cheers/ SJ =)
I agree somewhat with your views on the melody, but at the same time, I tried to stick with some of the fundamentals from Tropical House music in order to keep Ice House somewhat similar... i.e the repeating melody.
Thank you for your feedback. Always appreciated!! :)
on Djctx - F43KiNg Barking Mad FT My Son Caleb by kennydjctxmckenzie
Very effective for wiping out the brain, just what I needed.
Your son has a good taste in music!
Cheers/ SJ =)
on Premonator with Spivkurl Promenade Mix by promenade2239
This is so different in a very good way. Hypnotic use of Spivs vocal and all the creativiness with the instrumental. Beatiful guitar and atmosphere!
Loved it!
Take care/ SJ =)
Thank you for listening and your nice words!
It is much appreciated.
Our musical styles and visions are definitely very different so the result was unpredictable. I was trying to make a kind of a 'proper' song out of the given material - this is one of the final versions from many sketches I came up with when working on 'Premonator' project.
I think the 'original' one will be eventually posted as well sometime.
I am really happy you liked it! Thanks again for taking a listen. All the best to you,
Alex
on Into the Blue by toastedavalanche
I would like to rearrange the last sentence "Out into the blue?" to sound more as and with the same pace as the guitar in the beginning (00:09), maybe just a tone below.
Just a thought.
Really liked this song. Great change-ups.
Cheers/ SJ =)
on Remixed Seeing Whats Next by Darklighter
Good job!
on again by ElenaSatine
Your song reminds me of Behnam (deciBel), I hear the same spirit in you.
Don't change.
Take care/ SJ =)
this means a lot to me .Behnam was a great inspiration for me and my fav musician here .
he offered me to use megapaul guitar loops ,encouraged me and teached me how to mix various sound .
nice to know you've felt same sprit in me . :)
this means a lot to me
Elena
on Go Up - rap instrumental by jojoyo
Cheers!
on Snack by FGms
Cheers/ SJ=)
on A PIECE OF THE ACTION by Deathbot
This is kind of a crazy piece of music - great bass guitar (or is it a guitar?) and I actually loved the outro from 2:18 and to the end! You should evolve that part with that heavy bass. Funny lyrics!
Cheers and take care! / SJ =)
Evolve the end bit? maybe I will.
cheers.
DB
on Empire - Extinction feat Meiko Kaji by empire611616
Great vocal once again. Were do you get those acappellas?
Cheers/ SJ =)
on nazorpravdy28 by NeznamyPachatel
on Elephant by Orlando51
This is MAGIC!
I'm picturing myself in the great Concert Hall downtown listening to this. Am I really sitting at home listening to this on Looperman? Can't be.
A brilliant piece of Music and I'm loving it.
Hope you are doing fine over there!
Cheers and take care/ SJ =)
commenting the wonderful "Needle In The Hay" and I'm back
in conversation with you.:) So glad you enjoyed my new track and I'm truly grateful for this very generous feedback and for the 'fav' ofcourse...means the world !:)
With much appreciation_______Orlando
on You have to fly away by joecramer
So this is about the dark, dark day when the kids leave the house - forevvah...the horror!
No really, I Think they'll be coming back occasionally. and when the kids have kids of their own you never get rid of them anymore...
I Think we may look at this in different ways. =D
Good song though! Really sinister sounding. Very nice.
Take care/ SJ =)
I know that. And we both are not to far away from knowing what will happend later. But right now the thinking on a empty house and so on just makes me feel (a bit) sad.
I wonder that no one can hear the positive power and energy that also is anywhere deep inside this track :)
Good to know that you think that this track is in a way a good one and that you could enjoy the sounding of this track
Thanks for the comment
stay tuned
joe
on GtKryptonite and PluckedCloud AC by GtDirtySeagul by fx89
Cheers/ SJ =)
on Empire and Meiko Kaji - Always Love Preview by empire611616
Cheers/ SJ =)
on -O Man- by AleCsVp
on Does it need changes or anything else by DoctorPyro
Maybe you need to refine some of the sounds and get som more happening in the middle? What's up with the hissing sound?
But it's a pretty good start.
Cheers/ SJ =)
on HellSPawn by Xcogitant