Ed, how are you doing these days? I don't make it to the Looperman as much as I used to, so it's good to see a familiar "face" when I do, ya know?
I'd say this is an attempt that ended in success. It has a total retro-R&B sound. It goes without saying that I love your guitars. I always have. But I'm really digging the rhythm section on this one. It's got a great grove to it. The overall feel is very "summer-evening in the city". Like when you have no where to be, nothing to do, and time to just enjoy the moment, or moments if you're lucky enough to stay in that frame of mind.
Anyhow, good listen as always. I hope things are well with you.
Hi Aaron: good to hear from you man. Have hardly spent any time on LM myself the past few years. Been through a lot of changes here (its a long story) and I seem to be in a long mellow/chill kind of groove . Have kept some tracks posted on my SC page but really haven`t be very active there either. Big thanks for the generous comments my friend. Be over to check what you been up to shortly. Ed
Oh...Oh my. That bass is filthy! I fuckin' love it. The beat, the tempo, the synths, it all sounds good. The vocals are mixed well, and relentlessly drive on. It's in your face and aggressive. Just how I like it. I could listen to an entire album of this, and it's not even my kind of music. Good work, man!
Dime, what's happnin'? Dis tracks on the ol' Loop! Now I've seen it all. Just keep it friendly, right?
I dig the flow on this. I wasn't too deeply involved in the lyrics. But, don't take that personally. I never am. When I listen to Pink Floyd, I can remember every guitar note, every drum beat, every key and every bassline. But after listening to them for 40+ years, I still don't know all the words.
Regardless, good track ya got here.
Take care.
V.
hows it going V thanks for the stop off, and yeah its all in good fun, a looper track Morash, a looper vocal (me) and another looper a so called target, he's not really, just a little fun for the community and the fact people think its believable is great inspiration for mee personally, it does make me smile :)
Damn, brother! This is so smooth it glides when it walks. I love the dub style bassline mixed with the jazzy sax. The keys have such a warm tone. So easy to listen to, my friend. Excellent work as always! I hope all is well with you and your family.
Take care.
Aaron
How good to hear you back ... hope it means a new song from you too ... :-)
Well ... we're fine ... eldest child went to University in Italy ... we live with the other 2 children in piece :-)
the smallest is a sane autistic so that's funny in the sarcastic way of that meaning ...
hope you're well bro ... welcome back ...
fistbump,
Danke
I don't get around here as much as I used to. Life, ya know? It sometimes gets in the way of livin'.
I know what you mean about the community helping out. Back when I first started in 2012, it was like a gold mind of useful advice. I'd say about 90% of what I know now, (which still isn't much), I learned here through reading every comment on every song I checked out, and from constructive criticism on my own tracks, or in the forums...back when they were far more active.
It's definitely a good community. There has always been the occasional ass-clown that comes in and pipes up, but for the most part, everyone self regulates, and takes out the trash when needed.
haha this came in as i was listening to yours Aaron, them were the good days i believe, comments and listens were good, a closer community,
although its much quieter here these days we dont do bad in featured and yeah we self regulate, the shit is easily disposed.
sharing is king, not just music but the knowledge and like you my knowledge is limited but most learnt here
I have to say, your effects on your vocals really have come a long ways. I remember at one time, they were always super-centered and muted. Now, they stand out more and much more dynamic. Good work, mister.
V so nice to see you around bro, i have stepped things up quite a bit on the production sides, the communities help and advice has been very helpful too. this place has just sucked me in, i want more knowledge, thanks for stopping off and leaving a positive comment mate, really appreciated
This is almost a sonic collage. The bass synths sound like some Supersexy Swingin' bass lines. Which is good.
I like the overall feel. It starts out kind of unsure and dark, and then takes a real 1994 danceclub, backdoor, dream-state, transdimentional, what-the-fuck-is-going-on-but-I-like-it, acid trip direction.
Hello V.
It's good to hear from you.
I've been a big fan of your work
here on LM from day one.
Your description is almost exactly
what I had in my head as this track was coming together in my DAW piece by piece
a little over a year ago. I was actually thinking a 1990's "Rave Club like on "Blade or The Matrix".
I really appreciate you stopping by giving this track a listen and for your very encoraging comments.
I love the vocal flow, man. I always like a good slow-n-low.
Combined with the hip hop beat accompanied by string pizzicato, it gives a truly sinister value. I dig it.
You know, there's a little hint of The Specials in there if you listen close enough.
I see a lot of people commenting on the track length. I take it they've never listened to doom metal. Those tracks are so long, you could show up 45 minutes late to a concert and they'd still only be half way through the first song. Ha! Personally, I love a long track. I hate it when you get into a great vibe of a song, then just as you really start to groove to it, it's F'n done! That's why most of my tracks are 5 minutes or more. But, we're not here to talk about my tunes.
nice to see you around V its been a while bro. thanks for checking this out and liking the length, i wasn't sure at first myself, but worked so hard on the mix and i think it delivered better than i imagined if you keep the listener interested, keep it fresh, length shouldn't be an issue, i was pleased with the flow and spacing on this, just commented on your track and yeah i listened to it all :))
The instrumentation and composition is very 1980s. The vocal styling, lyrical content and overall mix sound straight out of 1994. As a Gen-x'er, I dig the nostalgic sounds. I don't know if you meant to do that or not, but it's there and I liked it.
Good job.
Thanks a lot for your comment. To be honest, I didn't think too much about what kinda sound I wanted, it just came naturally cause 80's rock is really part of my influences.
Take care,
French Kid
I dig it. It has kind of a Dead Can Dance vibe to it. Not quite as ethereal. Which is good. This is more industrial with that delicious Scandinavian flavoring. Good work. Hopefully you'll bring more Scandi-trad to the table.
Hello, sir. It's always a pleasure to see "the old dude" has been around. Think of it as a bourbon, my friend. We just get better with age.
Speaking of bourbon, this track could easily be paired with a double shot of Mitcher's US 1. It's high class, smooth, spicy, smokey and sweet all at the same time. And, it was meant to be enjoyed. The tones on your guitars never cease to amaze me. You definitely have an ability to match textures from instrument to instrument to create contrasting and complimentative layers within the track.
This one isn't as Ed-centric by way of solos, but the subdued restraint certainly allows the vocals to shine, and graciously shares the stage with the sax. Brilliant composition.
I hope things are going well for you these days. I hope the light has begun to shine for you again.
Hey Aaron...good to hear from you old friend. Appreciate the generous comments. I am still grateful for the addiction to music although life has been unkind in recent times & still hard to find the motivation and time I used to have...but no complaints...I am grateful for the many blessing I have enjoyed over the years, including the music friends. Winter will no doubt keep me locked in more and maybe the music will flow better. Many thanks Aaron...and my best to you..Ed
At first I thought this was going to be another track claiming to be heavy metal, but isn't really anything more than some rock tune with poorly programmed machine-gun double kick randomly placed in a couple of spots while the guitar is faded way out in the background of the mix. I know you you've heard exactly what I'm talking about.
However, I was pleasantly surprised with your delivery. The opening is very reminiscent of 90's metal. Something from Suicidal Tendencies, almost. Once everything kicks in, it becomes clear...This guy is a Mastodon fan. Maybe even Pelican and Russian Circles, too.
I think my only critique, really, is the clipping in the opening guitars. Maybe bring them down just a touch in the mix. Other than that, excellent job, man. There's not enough quality metal around here. Thanks for helping it stay alive on the ol' Looperman.
This isn't at all my preferred genre, but you've done well with it. It has a real late 80s early 90s pop rock feel to it. The guitar almost sounds like it could have been influenced by Mick Mars. Good work.
This is a great piece as it is. I do love the rolling pads. The bass has a killer tone and it fits so well. Not to take away from your work, but it's too bad Tumbleweed doesn't come around anymore. I'd love to hear what kind of sweet guitar he could lay down with this. I don't know that might be TOO relaxing. It would probably send people into meditative comas. Which, honestly, I could for one of those for about a week. Do a little catch-up down time, ya know?
Anyhow, excellent work. It's in the faves file.
Take care.
V.
Hi there, thanks a lot for the listen and fav! Always good to get some feed back, that's what I love about this wee community. The 'pads' are actually a couple of accoustic guitar tracks. And yes, I know tumbleweeds skills, he's popped up once or twice over the last year or so. I'd love to hear him on this, or anyone for that matter. Thanks again.
I haven't figured out yet if you have a great original creativity that needs to be unleashed, or if you have a great talent, but you're hiding behind insecurities. A lot of the material you post could easily be backing tracks to some really cool IDM, (Intelligent Dance Music). If I was any good at making that kind of music, I would use several of your pieces.
I hope all is well with you.
Thanks for this well thought comment, it gives me a lot to think about. Im just a student in music learning to improve everyday, i just recently got the confidence to start producing so i make a lot of throwaways and sometimes come back to oldies.
Listen, this thing is smooth. I'm diggin' it quite a bit. The ba-da bop bops are catchy as hell.
I think, as far as improvements go, you don't really need much. I'm picking up a lot of favoring of the right side. The Rhoads and the Guitar seem to both be panned to the right, leaving the left a little empty. Other than that, everything sounds great by way of mixing.
I may be wrong, but the vocals sound a little off time in a few spots. I'm not a vocalist, so I can't really say for sure.
Overall, this is a hit, man! I have a pretty broad taste in music, and if you had an album full of tracks like this, I'd buy it in a heartbeat.
Hey man, first of all good to see you're back and being creative. You're practically royalty here :)
Loving your compliments as well as the improvement points. Regarding the placement I usually (I'm lazy) have one rhythm guitar + keys to the left, one guitar + keys to the right, lead in the middle; and then I hope it balances out throughout the song ;) But that's just being lazy and I realise I haven't given that much of a look. In a previous song somebody also complained the balance, so that's a good reminder, thank you :)
I've left the vocals fairly organic, meaning indeed not very in sync. I fixed some of the worst bits (believe me, it was actually worse) but didn't spend too much time as I hope to record better vocals when my throat is sort of ok again :)
The final sentence makes my heart sing. That's super dope. Thank you man!
Man, this reminds me of some early-ass industrial, or Art Of Noise. Maybe even a little Revolting Cocks. Kind of different for Looperman. I dig it. Good job.
I haven't listened to much that has happened
in the music scene since back then.
I appreciate your listen, especially since
you've been where I'm coming from it's super encouraging.
This is very well done. The mix is fantastic. Everything is exactly where it needs to be. I think the only thing I would change is letting the reverb finish trailing off at the very end. I'm truly impressed with this.
I like it. It's got a nice chill vibe to it. I don't know if I would go as afar as calling it trip-hop, but really who cares? Good music is good music. Labels are for jars, not music...right?
hi valvedriver
THank you for listening... I appreciate it.
you are right ;) !! i have difficlut to put my tracks in the right section (like always)but like you said............ Labels are for jars!!
héhéhéhéhéééé
I really dig this. I was going to suggest some stereo work, or some panning on individual synths, but it's already been done twice, so I won't add more than I already have. But, the lack of stereo width certainly is not a deal-breaker. It's still a great track. It is short but sweet.
The intro really sets the mood of an almost whimsical melancholy. Which, I know, is a contradiction in terms, but I'm not sure how else to describe it.
When the drums kick in you get a nice little Aphex Twin feel to it.
I like the transitions. That synth we heard in the beginning is kind of like a ribbon for all the other sounds to balance upon.
A glassy outro that nearly bookends the whole thing.
Thanks for the feedback dude, appreciate the listen. Yeah maybe I'll need to go back and see about adding some width, Ive never had so many people comment on that before lol. I actually listened to it for the first time in the car after I uploaded it and the kick sounds a bit boomy, but I generally like that anyway.
Glad you liked it overall anyway, thanks again dude!
I love the sax and the Rhodes in this! They definitely create a chilled atmosphere. Overall, it almost has a bit of an Angelo Badalamenti vibe.
I like it. I think, though, that the distorted bass synth in the background being played through the entire thing is a little distracting. It makes it difficult to hear the cymbals and tambourine. I would chop it up and place it in more strategic areas in the spaces between, ya know? Or, if not that, then bring it down in the mix and pan it back and forth. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth. Either way, it's a piece to be proud of.
Hey - thanks for that - already played around with that sound a bit and wasnt happy with the result but I do agree. Part of the issue is that the track was built around it and its a modular synth that is constructed as a multi - so it has bass and perc's and a lot of the background rhythm goes when I cut it up - so I'd need to reconstruct that (pain in the arse) never mind hey - move on to the next experiment : )
on They See Me Shining featuring SkiMidi by Tumbleweed
I'd say this is an attempt that ended in success. It has a total retro-R&B sound. It goes without saying that I love your guitars. I always have. But I'm really digging the rhythm section on this one. It's got a great grove to it. The overall feel is very "summer-evening in the city". Like when you have no where to be, nothing to do, and time to just enjoy the moment, or moments if you're lucky enough to stay in that frame of mind.
Anyhow, good listen as always. I hope things are well with you.
Take care.
Aaron.
on a dirty flag by Shaman77
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V.
on Marten Run by krotan
on Your just a loop jockey by dimestop
I dig the flow on this. I wasn't too deeply involved in the lyrics. But, don't take that personally. I never am. When I listen to Pink Floyd, I can remember every guitar note, every drum beat, every key and every bassline. But after listening to them for 40+ years, I still don't know all the words.
Regardless, good track ya got here.
Take care.
V.
on Day off by Danke
Take care.
Aaron
How good to hear you back ... hope it means a new song from you too ... :-)
Well ... we're fine ... eldest child went to University in Italy ... we live with the other 2 children in piece :-)
the smallest is a sane autistic so that's funny in the sarcastic way of that meaning ...
hope you're well bro ... welcome back ...
fistbump,
Danke
on My Place by dimestop
I know what you mean about the community helping out. Back when I first started in 2012, it was like a gold mind of useful advice. I'd say about 90% of what I know now, (which still isn't much), I learned here through reading every comment on every song I checked out, and from constructive criticism on my own tracks, or in the forums...back when they were far more active.
It's definitely a good community. There has always been the occasional ass-clown that comes in and pipes up, but for the most part, everyone self regulates, and takes out the trash when needed.
although its much quieter here these days we dont do bad in featured and yeah we self regulate, the shit is easily disposed.
sharing is king, not just music but the knowledge and like you my knowledge is limited but most learnt here
on My Place by dimestop
I have to say, your effects on your vocals really have come a long ways. I remember at one time, they were always super-centered and muted. Now, they stand out more and much more dynamic. Good work, mister.
Take care, bud.
Aaron
on SillyWilly by Jynxz
I like the overall feel. It starts out kind of unsure and dark, and then takes a real 1994 danceclub, backdoor, dream-state, transdimentional, what-the-fuck-is-going-on-but-I-like-it, acid trip direction.
Pretty cool, man. I like it.
Take care.
V.
It's good to hear from you.
I've been a big fan of your work
here on LM from day one.
Your description is almost exactly
what I had in my head as this track was coming together in my DAW piece by piece
a little over a year ago. I was actually thinking a 1990's "Rave Club like on "Blade or The Matrix".
I really appreciate you stopping by giving this track a listen and for your very encoraging comments.
PEACE from the far East...
on theres gonna be murder by dimestop
I love the vocal flow, man. I always like a good slow-n-low.
Combined with the hip hop beat accompanied by string pizzicato, it gives a truly sinister value. I dig it.
You know, there's a little hint of The Specials in there if you listen close enough.
I see a lot of people commenting on the track length. I take it they've never listened to doom metal. Those tracks are so long, you could show up 45 minutes late to a concert and they'd still only be half way through the first song. Ha! Personally, I love a long track. I hate it when you get into a great vibe of a song, then just as you really start to groove to it, it's F'n done! That's why most of my tracks are 5 minutes or more. But, we're not here to talk about my tunes.
Anyhow, good work, man.
As always, take care.
V.
on 7 am seagull by FrenchKid18
Good job.
Take care.
V.
Take care,
French Kid
on Jotuns by TribeOfHofund
Take care.
V.
Kind Regards
Gothi
on Miistake by Tumbleweed
Speaking of bourbon, this track could easily be paired with a double shot of Mitcher's US 1. It's high class, smooth, spicy, smokey and sweet all at the same time. And, it was meant to be enjoyed. The tones on your guitars never cease to amaze me. You definitely have an ability to match textures from instrument to instrument to create contrasting and complimentative layers within the track.
This one isn't as Ed-centric by way of solos, but the subdued restraint certainly allows the vocals to shine, and graciously shares the stage with the sax. Brilliant composition.
I hope things are going well for you these days. I hope the light has begun to shine for you again.
Sincerely, Ed, take care.
Aaron
on Atmos by Cyrus0547
However, I was pleasantly surprised with your delivery. The opening is very reminiscent of 90's metal. Something from Suicidal Tendencies, almost. Once everything kicks in, it becomes clear...This guy is a Mastodon fan. Maybe even Pelican and Russian Circles, too.
I think my only critique, really, is the clipping in the opening guitars. Maybe bring them down just a touch in the mix. Other than that, excellent job, man. There's not enough quality metal around here. Thanks for helping it stay alive on the ol' Looperman.
Take care.
V.
on all those years by phantomproduction
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V.
Michael
on Twilight by Zootman
Anyhow, excellent work. It's in the faves file.
Take care.
V.
on Track 88 by TheBride
I hope all is well with you.
Take care.
V.
on Another 2 Days by BaoBou
Listen, this thing is smooth. I'm diggin' it quite a bit. The ba-da bop bops are catchy as hell.
I think, as far as improvements go, you don't really need much. I'm picking up a lot of favoring of the right side. The Rhoads and the Guitar seem to both be panned to the right, leaving the left a little empty. Other than that, everything sounds great by way of mixing.
I may be wrong, but the vocals sound a little off time in a few spots. I'm not a vocalist, so I can't really say for sure.
Overall, this is a hit, man! I have a pretty broad taste in music, and if you had an album full of tracks like this, I'd buy it in a heartbeat.
Take care, mister.
V.
Loving your compliments as well as the improvement points. Regarding the placement I usually (I'm lazy) have one rhythm guitar + keys to the left, one guitar + keys to the right, lead in the middle; and then I hope it balances out throughout the song ;) But that's just being lazy and I realise I haven't given that much of a look. In a previous song somebody also complained the balance, so that's a good reminder, thank you :)
I've left the vocals fairly organic, meaning indeed not very in sync. I fixed some of the worst bits (believe me, it was actually worse) but didn't spend too much time as I hope to record better vocals when my throat is sort of ok again :)
The final sentence makes my heart sing. That's super dope. Thank you man!
on Chad Boseman By EazyBeatz1250 by BeatzEazy0521
on Maybe We can Try by Jynxz
Take care.
V.
I haven't listened to much that has happened
in the music scene since back then.
I appreciate your listen, especially since
you've been where I'm coming from it's super encouraging.
PEACE... From the East...
on If you see a kid playing piano by TheBride
Take care.
V.
on Forgotten Heart by EmmaniFreeze
Take care.
V.
Thank for the comment, glad you like the track!
letting the Reverb finish would definitely make an empressive finish to the track
Emmani:)
on all i need by klmr29
THank you for listening... I appreciate it.
you are right ;) !! i have difficlut to put my tracks in the right section (like always)but like you said............ Labels are for jars!!
héhéhéhéhéééé
on Four Seasons in One Day by Diskonnect
The intro really sets the mood of an almost whimsical melancholy. Which, I know, is a contradiction in terms, but I'm not sure how else to describe it.
When the drums kick in you get a nice little Aphex Twin feel to it.
I like the transitions. That synth we heard in the beginning is kind of like a ribbon for all the other sounds to balance upon.
A glassy outro that nearly bookends the whole thing.
Good work, man. I like it.
Take care.
V.
Glad you liked it overall anyway, thanks again dude!
on Trouts Truth by pseudoble
I like it. I think, though, that the distorted bass synth in the background being played through the entire thing is a little distracting. It makes it difficult to hear the cymbals and tambourine. I would chop it up and place it in more strategic areas in the spaces between, ya know? Or, if not that, then bring it down in the mix and pan it back and forth. But, that's just my opinion. Take it for what it's worth. Either way, it's a piece to be proud of.
Take care.
V.
on you dont get to choose by phantomproduction
What an interesting composition.There are a lot of instruments happening at once. When combined they put off a sort of Vegas type vibe.
Cool track, man. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
V.
Michaael