Yeah it seems you really just need to tighten up your production and mixing on this. Are you using EQ and compression on the tracks and or the master mix? It has plenty of room to grow as in get wider. I like to EQ each track and get rid of any bad frequencies roll of the extreme lows with a High Pass Filter. jmo.
The over all mix is not that bad. I think you need to EQ a couple things and make the instruments pop a little more and get rid of the faint buzz. I think the vocals are not bad but need work in spots and maybe some EQ. Over all nice job.
Has some pretty good moments and chord changes. Not sure if you have Bass guitar in there but I can't really hear it if you do. I think a good Bass line with some thick tone would help give this track some depth. Just my 2 cents.
Overall nice job.
Thank you for listening, topvega! No, i don't have bass in here and I agree with you about it. I hope that soon a friend of mine will help me add some =] Thank you again for the comment. Cheers \m/
Pretty cool chugging riff. Is there Bass on this track? I think a heavy Bass might add some weight to this. Help balance out the sound. Nice job though.
Works for me...sounds pretty cool. I think maybe you could get the vocals to pop a little more if you hit them with some FX. Maybe a little delay and some reverb? Pretty pumping though.
Thanks much for your support and feedback! I too was thinking the verse vocals are a little dry. Got some ideas last night to bring this song closer to completion, especially after reading the comments. I appreciate you taking the time to listen!
Very nice track you have going on here. Your voice is quite nice. Great tone and control. I could see this being done in a very nice Jazz Lounge. Thanks for sharing.
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it's nice to know this from U & I wonder cause I didn't guess a prof driver may has such point of view about such styles of music !..
I've not had this chance to share my idea about your tunes as a written commenT in your page , buT the piece U'd worked after that Bitter exprience -entitled : ashes to ashes-was so impressive & sensible composed based on a deep & subjective sensation.appreciations & the best wishes.___Behnam.
Hey man, thanks for stopping in! I think this one turned out good because I didn't overthink it. Turns out that electro is a pretty fun genre to make. I really appreciate your kind comment!
It's not that bad. A little sparse and low-fi. I think the vocals are pretty good. If you can mix down the stems for the track I am sure people could help you out. I would mix down an acapella and post it in that section with a link to this so they would have a reference on what you are shooting for.
Good stuff..I enjoyed it. Felt like the vocals were a touch too much up front in the beginning but by 2:00 they sounded real good. Nice job, I agree it sounds like Pink Floyd a bit, which is a good thing.
I like it...groove is catchy. Mix is clean. I would like to hear the vocals boosted in the mix though. They get lost for me. The solo seems a bit off. Feels like the backing groove is too busy during it and the solo doesn't sit right. jmo.
This rocks...love the whole intro thing. Some solid playing and tone going on here. The mix feels tight as well. Reminds me of some MegaDeath or late 80's early 90's Metal.
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