Tnkx for your post.
All guitar tracks were played by myself, bass i used virtual bassist, drums i used ezdrumer with kit from hell.
I have a Playstation2 drum set and I plug in pc, I'm not a drumer so I played only a simple drum track...then much work on ezdrummer and some samples from magix sound pool collection.
By the way....vocal are from magix sound pool tool
Thank you very much, you're right, it was totally a blues feel, I'm going to upload another song right now which is blues too, but I think I should tag it as Rock as well, it's called "She's In Space."
Dude I could totally see Maynard James Keenan all over this bad boy. I also agree it's too short and could definitely use another part or two. Honestly with what you have this could be a 5 minute song easy with the right interlude. Maybe a tear down of the riffs and then build it back up or go off on another tangent and then bring it all back together at the end. And yeah, all of us guitarists mix our guitars way too hot. :)
Nice job with this so far, solid track that can be expanded a bit.
Thanks for the comments Vega. Yes, the track above is very Toolish - that's how Evisma writes - and yes it it just a partial track. Here's the whole track which I just added a riff at the end.
Pretty cool track, you lose me for like 9 seconds from 47 to 56. Seems too busy. Maybe competing frequencies? Other than that it flows real well. Nice job.
Thanks for ur insight TV. You guys are all correct, the mix is weak. It's actually a slightly beefed up wav file recorded in 1991. So it's just really a salvage job, Really just wanted to show you guys a my writing style and modest guitar talents.
I'll basically say I'm not a good producer. A lot of you guys are much better at mixing beats bass and samples. My gig is I come up with countless neat ideas and can play a pretty decent riff and power chord. Looking for collabs to help fix that. :-)
Vocals definitely need to come up in the mix. They are very low on my end, both using speakers and headphones. Might want to change up the drum pattern in spots as well. Has promise though.
I agree with StaticNomad...some good things going on but needs work. The intro doesn't really work...at least as an intro. Once it get's moving around 1:52 things get a lot better.
Thanks man, really, I thought I would get the most flack from the tone issues in the second half, but at least it is more discernible than the first half. I appreciate the listen and the feedback.
Why did I not reply to you before now? Punctuality is not my strong suit. Thank you for the kind words. I think the bass should be even with the guitars, but that's a bass player's opinion. You said the "T" word. Tool is one band that makes it work. Bass and guitar sharing the load. Love 'em. I'm 30 now, hopefully there is a new album out before I retire!
It is very Old School Video Game to me. Interesting track and I dig the drums a lot. It might sound weird but I could hear Robert Smith singing on this.
Awesome stuff...really lives up to the chill out genre. This just washed all over me as it came out the speakers. Felt like an Audio Loofah, loosening up all the tension and making me feel " clean " again. :) Thanks for sharing it.
I think you need to go back and remix this track. At least the vocals. They are hard to decipher and are only on one side of the mix. Getting vocals to sit nicely in the mix can be tough.
Not my Genre at all but I enjoyed this. Catchy riffs, well mixed. I think a lil more bass in the mix would sound nice, but like I said, I don't know this Genre at all. Overall nice job. Especially for a quick throw away track spurred on from boredom. Some good stuff can come out of situations like that. :)
I like it bro, it has a stripped down apocalyptic feel to it. Cool vibe going and things are well mixed. I would like to hear your vocals processed a little more and boosted in the mix a bit. I think from 2:30 to 2:50+ could use a change or some new texture added but Overall a nice track. I dig it.
I also agree with danke and Darkreine. I think the vocals are sitting to up front and we are not getting to enjoy your guitar work and the rhythm you have created. Other then that this song is tight and very solid. Real nice job.
Hi Topvega, song is remixed now :)
... recording the song needs less than one hour.
Remixing and mastering took me much longer, and I am never content with the result.
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All guitar tracks were played by myself, bass i used virtual bassist, drums i used ezdrumer with kit from hell.
I have a Playstation2 drum set and I plug in pc, I'm not a drumer so I played only a simple drum track...then much work on ezdrummer and some samples from magix sound pool collection.
By the way....vocal are from magix sound pool tool
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