Love the laid back vibe on this...bassline is nice and the punchy guitar sits well. Nice touch with the piano. Are the vocals you? Or acapella? Nice job.
Dig the bass right out the box, then you inject some tasty guitar into the mix. Very nice. Overall I really dig the bass-line in this, kinda has a Killers vibe for me.
Real nice job bro. Only thing it might be missing is a lead guitar or two. Very cool though.
Thanks man.
Well,i love bass,so what more can i say?
Killers?Thats a nice compliment man.
I still find very hard to come up with lead guitars and such but i hope i might improve on that with time.
Nice to hear a track from you again my friend. Been a long time. This has a nice old school 70's vibe to it. Nice guitar tone and production. Nice job.
Thank you. I've been busy making music but I've used other forums – there seems to be a compability problem when using Macs. Anyway, it's great to be beck here, recieving kind words like yours makes it even better. Thanks for listening an reviewing, much appreciated.
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Not a big fan of what I am guessing is the sub? It resonates too much and drowns out the other things going on. Just my 2 cents and I am speaking from a Rock perspective. The guitar gets lost for me under the bassy sub thing going on.
I like the drums a lot...bass sounds non existent and is needed IMO. The guitar that is here sounds good but I think this needs more. Some tasteful leads would do wonders for this song as it sounds sparse in sections. Vocals are adequate for this type of song but could probably benefit from some fattening up and/or EQ'ing as for me they sound a bit tinny and thin. The positives that you have going for you far outweigh the negatives. I am just keeping it honest and trying to give you honest feedback. Overall nice job.
Tnkx for your post.
All guitar tracks were played by myself, bass i used virtual bassist, drums i used ezdrumer with kit from hell.
I have a Playstation2 drum set and I plug in pc, I'm not a drumer so I played only a simple drum track...then much work on ezdrummer and some samples from magix sound pool collection.
By the way....vocal are from magix sound pool tool
Thank you very much, you're right, it was totally a blues feel, I'm going to upload another song right now which is blues too, but I think I should tag it as Rock as well, it's called "She's In Space."
Dude I could totally see Maynard James Keenan all over this bad boy. I also agree it's too short and could definitely use another part or two. Honestly with what you have this could be a 5 minute song easy with the right interlude. Maybe a tear down of the riffs and then build it back up or go off on another tangent and then bring it all back together at the end. And yeah, all of us guitarists mix our guitars way too hot. :)
Nice job with this so far, solid track that can be expanded a bit.
Thanks for the comments Vega. Yes, the track above is very Toolish - that's how Evisma writes - and yes it it just a partial track. Here's the whole track which I just added a riff at the end.
Pretty cool track, you lose me for like 9 seconds from 47 to 56. Seems too busy. Maybe competing frequencies? Other than that it flows real well. Nice job.
Thanks for ur insight TV. You guys are all correct, the mix is weak. It's actually a slightly beefed up wav file recorded in 1991. So it's just really a salvage job, Really just wanted to show you guys a my writing style and modest guitar talents.
I'll basically say I'm not a good producer. A lot of you guys are much better at mixing beats bass and samples. My gig is I come up with countless neat ideas and can play a pretty decent riff and power chord. Looking for collabs to help fix that. :-)
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Real nice job bro. Only thing it might be missing is a lead guitar or two. Very cool though.
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Well,i love bass,so what more can i say?
Killers?Thats a nice compliment man.
I still find very hard to come up with lead guitars and such but i hope i might improve on that with time.
Thanks for the awesome feedback.
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All guitar tracks were played by myself, bass i used virtual bassist, drums i used ezdrumer with kit from hell.
I have a Playstation2 drum set and I plug in pc, I'm not a drumer so I played only a simple drum track...then much work on ezdrummer and some samples from magix sound pool collection.
By the way....vocal are from magix sound pool tool
Cheers
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Nice job with this so far, solid track that can be expanded a bit.
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I'll basically say I'm not a good producer. A lot of you guys are much better at mixing beats bass and samples. My gig is I come up with countless neat ideas and can play a pretty decent riff and power chord. Looking for collabs to help fix that. :-)
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