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on Story of my heart by JasonCroft
Alright now this is a powerful piece. Piano really drives home the emotion. I love what you have but I have a suggestion. Aside from the synth I feel like the reverse crash transition can be improved.
Here's my suggestion:
- Lower the volume a bit first it really cut through my ears lol.
- Fade out the last few milliseconds of it where this is a sharp increase in the amplitude of the waveform. I cant tell you how much that all depends on the sound itself.
- Add a heavy reveerb. Depending on the controls add lots of wetness, dampness, and extend decay time. Size, hi cut, and lo cut should also be altered but I cant give you the details on that since it depends.
Of course its just a suggestion and I would like to give you an idea of how it sounds but I do not have any tracks uploaded that posses it. But I can send you a wav file if you are interested so u can get the idea of what Im talking about.
But anyway thats just a lot of detail for a small part of the track. The majority of it sounds exceptional and very powerful.
Omar
Thanks for your great feedback and for listening my track
yea that crash can be improved
I got you and I will be glad if you send me that file
again thanks for your feedback, your comment and your time
Kindest Regards
J_*
on Marnie Grant - An Alleyway In London by MarnieG
Fantastic job I really liked it.
on Just Let It Go - Instrumental - Vocal Ready by BradoSanz
Thanks for sharing it "bare" as I typically enjoy music without vocals.
Not to suggest that you shouldn't add vocals but sometimes music can speak to the listener as well.
Great work on this.
on Constellation by Evisma
What a journey! Great work!
I'm far from professional, but I appreciate the thought very much. Thanks for giving it a listen and giving a rather stellar comment. Makes my day!
Evan
on Its My Time by Emolyte
The mix could use a little improvement on the mid to high end. Flow is solid. But this track now put you in my radar especially with that unique style of yours. I gotta keep a look out forr stuff you put out there. You style reminds me of Hollywood Undead if you've heard them.
Excellent work here.
on Elephant by Orlando51
Now this is my type of music. I didn't know if there were many orchestral cinematic composers here on the loop but I think I might've just heard the best!
Phenomenal job I'm seriously blown away by this track!
A unique adventure I thoroughly enjoyed it.
With much appreciation______Orlando
on Blue Sky Instrumental by NitramBeatS
Or maybe the whole point is to give that feel and let someone drop some vocals to fill it in. Either way this track is real smooth!
on Nature Haunts with Pete Tebar by DanGoldstein
Great work on this and great use of the effects pads and synths to create a vivid atmosphere. Very creative I enjoyed listening to it.
on Awakenings by wordybum
You know Im a big fan of your stuff man and this doesn't disappoint! One of the best here on the loop seriously. Keep grinding and dropping these simply amazing tracks!
thanks again for the support, my brother!
on princess in white lace COLLAB with STOHGS by DanGoldstein
on princess in white lace COLLAB with STOHGS by DanGoldstein
With the picture and the music I see this lady in the white dress slowly walking among a city destroyed and empty. I see the picture in grey and black and choppy. She is wandering around like a tiny glimmering hope among the endless rubble and darkness. Then the very cool kind of like a growl transitions to the drums. I love the kicks by the way. And here I see the lady ascending up as reconstruction for a new future begins.
I love what you created here Dan truly captivating.
on Sadness Of Darkness by JasonCroft
At 18 sec though that chord sounds off-key. May be just me. But other than that this is an instant fave and DL!
Awesome job on this.
hats off...
on Warrior Soul by wordybum
Hey you think you can send me an mp3 of the collab you did with SJW just the way you got it right now? Every time I play that song it feels likesomething is missing and that's your part plus I really like it the way you guys have it now.
on Remixed Seeing Whats Next by Darklighter
And wow man I really like this new flavor and pace you put on this track. It seems like a lot of work went into making this remix. I felt that the synths that came in at :50 sec felt a little flat on the high end but I loved the melody. Very addictive. I like that little fling pop bell lol I don't know what to call it directly after the synth. That was a nice touch. Very creative track I enjoyed it.
Props!
on Fire 7 by Risk
Really like the overall dark feel to it. Great work.
on Dancing To The War Drums by crucethus
Anyways I gotta say man around the 1:30 mark where the piano chords and the voices and distant gunshots came in there came about a eerie and powerful feeling that gave me the goosebumps. Not many tracks do that. Then at the same time that transitioned to a more uplifting and bouncy tracks. It created this nice contrast.
Great job I really liked it!
I am deeply humbled by your response. My goal was to make a house tune that would stop people in their tracks and have to think about war.
Your comment about the piano part giving you goosebumps gave me goosebumps. That's what I wanted for this tune.
I appreciate your comments
Cruhallelujah
on Nowhere to go Instrumental by Nextgentracks
I love that sidechain-like effect on the synths in the beginning. Piano is playful and flows nicely. The breakdown to the guitars is really cool and speaking of cool those guitars juggled with each other nicely. Only thing I suggest is it mess around with the panning of the different guitars. They are all clustered in the middle or real close to it. One way is keeping the primary melody in the middle while panning the least prominent one like 30% either way. The methods are limitless and whatever suits your tastes is the route to go.
And those drum transitions are awesome! Really professional work on those.
The crash at 1:30 was a bit sharp in my ears. You can also see the waveform sticking out. My suggestion is compression with instant attack and quick release. But since that kind of kills the transience you can do it via parallel compression.
Anyway beside those very subtle issues this track is very uplifting and playful and overall sounds really good. I can listen to this all day and honestly I'm surprised no one commented yet.
Take my opinions with a grain of salt as I'm not a pro and house isn't my thing but thought I give this deserving track some feedback.
Great work and keep at it.
Omar
Appreciate the words and advice!
I actually have been working on this one for some time now and I've changed alot of it.
I just officially released.
Here is the link: https://soundcloud.com/nextgentracks/wildfire-official-nextgentracks
Hope to hear more from you!
With regards, David!
on Journey to Mars by cellardoor
This track has also got that vintage feel. Don't know if that's what you intended in the mix but it sure worked out.
I get the feeling that your a generation or two above me with your music but hey doesn't mean I don't enjoy it.
on Drunken Robot Celebration by cellardoor
on GangstaWalK TRVP R3MIX - TH3 FIXXX3R by fixxx3r
on lopperman exclusive hiphop beat by pintosound
Sweet beat
on Funky Hip Hop Beat - Oneironaut by gdbcrew
Other than that the track is well constructed and is of high quality. The washed out synth solo at the 3 min mark is a nice little switch up. Its definitely a refreshing taste to hip-hop.
Awesome job on this track.
on Atlantic Drifts Music by Danke lyrics by Wordy Bum by wordybum
But damn man Im becoming a fan of your work. Thing is for me, if you have a good/unique flow and clear/powerful delivery but awful lyrics (kind of like mainstream hip hop for the most part nowadays) I can listen to it maybe once or twice but I quickly lose interest. But you my friend have got all three top notch. Your overall style and skill is up there on the loop in terms of the rap department.
You used the third verse in this track for that collab with SJW but I love it in both cuz of the different emotion and speed in the delivery. Plus the lyrics are super clever, deep, and very rhythmic. Its almost like even though your saying the same thing the difference in the delivery and music give it its own uniqueness its own story.
Excellent Work!
ever since i found Looperman i have re-imagined a few verses on different beats. it really is so fun to attack a new track with a verse i know forwards and backwards. it allows me to really get into the role and nail the verse.
on Hit the Happy by cellardoor
Really cool piece especially since you played all the parts. I can hear some of the synths slightly off but honestly I don't really see it as a flaw, rather a genuine music style derived from very slight human error.
I also find that some mixing to an extent along the creative musical process as an advantage because it helps to create a clearer musical picture. But in the end it all depends on the individual.
Great work!
on Naked Angels by TayaliJeffrey
But whats a mix without the music in the first place. That's where you come in. Loving the synth stabs and the synth buildup at around the two minute mark. Theres a lot of interesting elements in this track that keep it flowing really smooth.
You should try mixing your own tracks. Theres a level of creativity and music behind it and you seem to be very creative with your music so if you hang with it and learn the aspects of mixing you could add a new dimension to your tracks. Just a suggestion.
But anyway sweet track!
I really love exploring sounds while at the same time trying to be unique while composing in regards to the mix
I have learnt a few tricks and gained a better understanding since then to which i am still learning at the same time still need the assistance of guys such as yourself to be objective
Cheers and Thanx A million