GramoChopin

..Bro. That intro can be transitioned into something pretty dark and epic I think. It kind of fits the idea for my EP Mecha EXE Legion, I've been pretty immersed in dnb lately. Maybe we can transform this into a dnb production? Let me know what you think. Either way I just wanted to share ideas or maybe contribute some of mine if you want. I like what it transitioned to, it has a 8 bit nature to it. Kind of sci fi/cinematic too. I just see more potential within...so yea. If you wanna collab, let me know! peace

Gramo/Neo

Nice. Like the choppage in this one. (The gated like synth) The drums need some work though. The arrangement was well done though, digging that intro. The sound is great as well, just would of like more done with the drums. Some bass or a deep sub is really essential within dnb too. Don't get me wrong, I still like this production. The main synth or whatever is amazing though. Just needs more, keep it going! peace

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I think it sounds pretty damn amazing with just the piano. I didn't have much of a problem with the vocals. They fit the vibe of the song nicely. It could use a dubstep remix....but I love the piano as instrument so much that I think that might ruin it.

For me at least. Didn't see much wrong with it as a piece alone, it could fit for a transition into the dubstep remix next instead. As if it was a mix or part of a collection. An intro track.

But I really dig this though man, has a real somber chilled out mood. Great job, peace

Gramo/Neo

Sup. Nice sounds on this one, good snare rolls. Definitely fits the Halloween theme, tried to make it to fright fest in six flags but maybe next year. Oh well, pretty nice beat. Would of liked a bit more done with the arrangement and the mixdown is a tad too loud. Who am I kidding though, TURN UP. Till the next one, peace

Gramo/Neo

Great instrumentation, really nice drum rolls and breakdowns. Outdoes the vocals though for sure. I agree with DJshemzee too, they could also be a bit louder. Excellent guitar playing and the mix is pretty nice. No real critiques except the vocals, overall arrangement was pretty dope. Very nice job, peace

Gramo/Neo

Chilled dnb. Nice remix here Promenade! I like how you still kept in that snare. (It may be a different sound though, not sure) The drums are a bit iffy at times but they still blend together well. Love the synths and atmospheres. Relaxes me. I've had a stressful hectic year so this definitely helped. Great work, peace!

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Would definitely like to hear an extended version. Title fits very well, composition is very well executed. Choir is a plus. Nice! peace

Gramo/Neo

Your best yet. The piano sounds superb except for a small bit after 1:06. Sounds a lil out of tune. Loving the break down with the drums, the snare that hits every other bar or so is nice. I like that wave like pad after 5:15. Spaced out vibes. Would of also liked to hear a bit more done with the drums. Otherwise, really like this track, excellent job. peace

Gramo/Neo

Plus for it ending at 4:20. lol Nice to see you with another track, really digging the piano. Synths are nice, could of done a bit more with the beat though. Maybe add a snare. It's only a suggestion but still manages to work well without a snare because the other instruments. Nice tune SJ! peace

Gramo/Neo

Sup man, so digging the sounds used. What is the bpm of this one? The drums kind of have a roll to them but it seems slower paced compared to what dnb usually is. More house I guess but I've never been big on genres. It's all just music to me. Really like the arrangement to this, synth combinations are really nice. Great work Geophase! peace

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Groovy production. Chilled out vibes are really nice. Synths are aquatic like in the background. Nice airy feeling, no real critiques on this one. Magnificent vibe. peace

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You have some underrated tunes. You should check back on the loop more often. Excellent track here dangermouse. Keep rollin. peace

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Very melodic, could fit in a new megaman x game. Or a fanmade video. Most of the series soundtracks has many melodies. I digged it man, Excellent work. peace

Gramo/Neo

This Vicissitude track sure has attitude. An underrated track on here for sure. Definitely more drum step than drum & bass. But very nice production, well done on this. peace

Gramo/Neo

Nice chilled out dnb track. (Basically liquid dnb) Good work for a first attempt. Colorful synths and nice melodies. Ended abruptly however but still was a nice first attempt. Digs it! Keep working, peace

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Sick work man, agree with everyone else. Really stellar work, I'ma be sure to bring my A++ game when I finish my latest track. Sick work with the drums and sound in general. I'll be listening to your track and then this later on https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_WwiOoTQiPo True dnb right here, can only imagine what a 320 would sound like. Excellent production, peace

Gramo/Neo

So are you really 11 years old? Pretty nice stuff I've heard uploaded from you. Keep it up, you already have great talent. I like the steady beat and vocals to this, really relaxing. peace

Gramo/Neo

Vapor like synths in this track. Sounds perfect for a wipeout sort of soundtrack or any of the many racing games I like. I have a deep house track started that I think might turn out pretty well. Is deep house usually around 6 minutes? Sick production man, peace

Gramo/Neo

Sort of a dark ambient dnb track. I've tried to make a ambient dnb track a while back but it seems you beat me to it. This sounds like it's at a low bitrate or the mix could just use a bit more punch. Instruments are still well distinguished however. Those echoing synths and that electrifying reece synth is nice. Mystical sounding production. The vox is a nice touch. Funny at times. Keep em coming, peace

Gramo/Neo

This is..almost a lil too much irony. I watched a video last night that informed me of what the last episode of "Tom & Jerry" was. Not sure if 100 percent true because I haven't watched the last episode. It showed clips though. I dunno if you've ever watched it but I don't think you necessarily have to like cartoons to have seen this show before. Anyways, I didn't know the last episode was about both of them eventually killing themselves over cheating girlfriends. Their suicide was waiting for the train on the train tracks...eerie. This track almost fits that episode in a way. Creative use of fx. Synths are nicely done. Can hear this in Banjo Kazooie even too. Great collab between Spiv and Phatkatz. Definitely a cinematic production. peace

Gramo/Neo

It would be hard to explain my ideas to you. But idk you say this is an aggressive track. I would emphasize that more, think of something that makes you really angry. The breakdown that starts at 1:55 is the most aggressive part of the song.

Adding some distortion (if there isn't already) to the lead synth could add more to it. I had a couple aggressive tracks I could of used as an example but I feel they aren't good enough at the moment. That's why I cleared my catalog, least on here.

The ambience at 4:42 could build into maybe a change of synth and maybe a darker tone. Some industrial type of fx might fit well in this. But yea, let me know what you think of my suggestions. A buddy of mine told me a while ago "sometimes you gotta let a song rock out." I think the track is nice for what it is now. Not too repetitive and gets the job done.

It depends how far you wanna go with it, tweaking the lead synth. Maybe play it differently every minute or so, adding elaborate fills, panning effects, various automation, maybe even automate the tempo and change the beat up etc etc. I've changed the tempo to a track before. The key is to making it work with the overall track. Instead of just adding too much and it all becomes redundant.

I've noticed I've been doing that with some of my latest productions. Hmm maybe less is more but put "extreme" focus on a couple of main instruments you think stand out the most and go all out with it. Alright, that was longer than I thought. Hope that helps! peace

Gramo/Neo

For some reason this reminds me of Gex: Enter the Gecko. lol Don't ask why. Definitely insane sounding, I'm no stranger to insane type of tracks though. Aphex Twin is probably the most insane artist I've heard at least in the electronic department. Listen and watch the "come to daddy" video. It's flippin crazy. Over the top is good sometimes I think. It can grow into something more but all depends on what your going for. Interesting arrangement and great effects/buildups. Nice, peace

Gramo/Neo

I like that poppy snare. Has a sort of sci-fi feel to it. Hi hats carry the groove nicely, nice work on this one. Digs it. peace

Gramo/Neo

Nice soft subtle feel to this. Smooth like texture to it, relaxing. Reminds me a hint of some songs on the .Hack game soundtracks. Great collabo. Very nice piano. Digz it, peace

Gramo/Neo

How many other people do what? Typing while listening? Well, what I mean is this. I'll listen to a track and review as I go basically. So if I say something like "I really dug the part at the 1:00 min mark" I was most likely listening to that part as I typed it. Most others tend to finish a track and then review or comment.

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