I really like the background synths and pads. I think the wobble bass could either be tweaked or exchanged for a more heavy bass. Something more dirty sounding. But you did say it was going to be upbeat, but it still works. Almost trance sounding at parts. Great track, after listening again it does sound cinematic almost, has a epic feeling. peace
This track is purely experimental at this point. Right now im working on another track that is a little more dubstepish but still upbeat I dont know lol I guess I just cant write orthodox stuff you know... I dont know I guess its just one of those things. I am still a noob so there is definitely lots and lots of room for improving. Thanks for the comments.
Love the piano sprinkled throughout. Has a smooth pulse type of synth that I like. Great instrumentation overall. Very nice, grooves well and piano is a big plus. peace
Deep darkness i love. Excellent steady pace with this, with intricate cuts and extreme focus on the actual atmosphere. Very good ideas here, synth is gritty and dark sounding too. Waveform did seem like a concern like Static was saying but it seems you know what the hell your doing. ha Downloaded and faved. Amazing dark work. I'll be looking out for your tunes. peace
Ha this really sounds like a lion physically punching you through the screen. Crazy work here, the synth gets a bit repetitive over time. But the wobble bass is very hard and skilled. Great work. peace
Yeaaa! i can dig it smallpaul! Grooving work with this, has some nice chillout elements to it. Great choosing of loops, and the mixdown is sounding rather clear. Seems like many are improving, glad to see you around man. Very good job, peace
Nice, use to love using garageband. I have it on my mac though, it was the first DAW I used to make my very first beat ever. That was about 8th grade I think..I just wish I saved that beat. Oh well, but I do think you have skill. I love the groove to this, the musicbox type sound is really good too. Awesome! peace
Hey thanks! Much appreciated. Yeah, also seeing as what year you might have been in the eighth grade I think I feel really old now.. ha, sweet deal though thanks again.
-Charlene
Yo man so yea it does sound depressive. Indeed. I'm kind of mellow sometimes too so it doesn't phase me much. There's reason for that, but you don't want to hear my life story I'm sure. Anyways, something about that vocal that is very haunting and mixed with the glockenspiel and organs make it more dreading. Dark and the piano is great as well! Would of liked to hear a bit more done, but the arrangement was still skillful. peace
Yea, so i saw your reply to Mosaic on your made to be broken track. I linked him up to you, can never forget music man. How you been? Yes, I've undergo a name change, for the best. And the absolute last time, I've made a thread about it too if you want a more thorough explanation of why i changed my name. Nothing too deep/complicated or anything. But this track right here is pretty deep, rather phenomenal actually. I also gave you a follow on soundcloud too. Not too keen with that site often though, the loop is always best. Simply for talent like you that push the boundaries, I listened to this whole thing. Log back on often man, this has been a pretty good year for the loop music wise. Alot of originals re-surfacing to bring back the music. But haunting, amazing, beautiful piece here Marius. Absolutely love the violin, and i still think your made to be broken track is the best piano work I've heard on here. Even today. Very skillful. See you around bro, peace
This is your 3rd track ever? If it is, it's pretty good for even your 3rd. Great sound choice, deep vocals. Society is definitely subjected to being brainwashed all the time, it doesn't fool me though. Great work. peace
Thanks very much neo. yep track 3. got pro tools 8 months ago and have been watchin youtube tutorials and what not.glad u like it. just uploaded track 4 by the way and i am sure i have taken a step forward with it. hope u will check it out. Graham.
I'm completely on a listening spree of some of the greats on looperman. Sup man this is Neobane here. (I was recently InPSYcLe too) So I've changed it for the final time, no more changes with it. But yea wow this is an extraordinary piece here! Didn't see this one in your playlist, deep emotional piece. That's the way to do it, reach deep bro. Reach deep. peace
Had to leave a comment on this one too, I hope you log back on. But this one is trippy dark goodness bro, sick. Love that synth mixed in, sort of a minimal dubstep and more dub. Vibes are great stoned, oh yea definitely. Smoking right now, respect to one of the greats of the loop. Many of them are starting to resurface i forgot to mention. Excellent production bro! peace
P.S. We need to do another collab, production wise though, seriously.
Neo, aka GramoChopin, you did it bro. You brought me back. I was just going through my email and the word "looperman" caught my eye, I hadn't received anything looperman-ish in ages. Pretty awesome to see your review, thanks bro.
And I'd love to collab...just waiting on a new computer and will then carve out some me time so I can get back to my one true love. Thanks again for bringing the dead back to life.
You need to get the hell back on this site Dv8! This is Neobane btw aka InPSYcLe aka too many name changes. But this is my final name change. But yea you smoking bad mamma jama with this one. Nomad is spot on with this, Kingston vibes and really jam heavy. Love the bass! It's been pretty great around the loop lately, need to log back in bro. peace
Yea, your uploading some dope beats so far ma. You and some others makes me wanna get back in my hiphop/rap bag, I'll probably upload some of my trap from soundcloud on here. Chill vibes, excellent rhythm to it. Catch ya around. peace
thanks homie, really appreciate all the feedback ill keep em coming and if you ever wanna flow on something or use any beats that's cool id just like to hear the final product. peace
Cool, what's the bpm to this one btw? And I just thought of this now, but do you have a wav version of this? I can send you the finished version of the mp3 you have up, but it would be better with the full file. Which is usually a WAV or AIFF file. Gotta email?
Okay last comment, we seem to have a had miscommunication with gender. As did BEATZMODE and you lol And that makes this track and your other track's comment section rather funny. I knew you were a female after this track I believe..I called you a man on my elaboration of a "floating mix."
But your female and I'm aware of that now lol (Just clarifying) Oh wait you know how i knew you were a female? When you posted on my looptrack thread, Dubtek called you a "he" too. Excuse him, I actually know him personally and he's not the brightest one. ha And examples of female producers for your listening pleasure: JJweekz, Anomaly J, Eshar, Patricia Edwards and of course you know Cestevens.
There's not too many of you ladies on here though, not really talented ones at least. (Many there are some that I haven't discovered yet) I think you have alot of potential though, even though you already have pretty good tracks.
Nice upbeat house . Definitely has a feeling of shining, digs the synths used in this. Hmmm the synth that begins at 1:15 seems to get out of tune a bit as it develops. Maybe I'm just hearing things, look into it if you want. Or wait, I see now after reading some comments...so did you intentionally detune it? If so, then that's fine but it sounds a bit better when it first comes in. I'm guessing you use some automation of sorts later on with it? Idk but it just bothered me a little, still a great track here bro. peace
Thanks Gramo! Yeah, I purposely change the pitch on the 1:15 synth. I guess it comes down to taste really. I like it but not everyone will and I knew that when making it. Thanks for the comments and stopping by, much appreciated! Have a blessed day!
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In a way i would say that it is one of the best sounding songs i made jet.
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And I'd love to collab...just waiting on a new computer and will then carve out some me time so I can get back to my one true love. Thanks again for bringing the dead back to life.
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But your female and I'm aware of that now lol (Just clarifying) Oh wait you know how i knew you were a female? When you posted on my looptrack thread, Dubtek called you a "he" too. Excuse him, I actually know him personally and he's not the brightest one. ha And examples of female producers for your listening pleasure: JJweekz, Anomaly J, Eshar, Patricia Edwards and of course you know Cestevens.
There's not too many of you ladies on here though, not really talented ones at least. (Many there are some that I haven't discovered yet) I think you have alot of potential though, even though you already have pretty good tracks.
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