haha wow harsh, but what your saying most likely right. haha seeing how i dont own the music in the back ground i can't just make it an instrumental. but thanks for giving it a listen. back to the studio then
thanks bro i wanna be just like u all the tips realy mean alot to me and if it wasnt for honest opinions i wouldnt be doin this its about time i get some real feedback from a real artist like u thanx by the way cute avatar!
Thanks for posting your opinion...much appreciated...but to tell you the truth the message of the song is just "around it goes" meaning that I felt like i was livin life in the same circle...nothing ever changing...and that message is not just about the projects...cuz i dont live in the projects..never have..the message can be applied to any area of life...whther ur rich or poor..u can still be living life in the same circle...a circle which may be hard to get out of...
on Fakie 360 Hardflip by StereoMathematics
I get lost in the funk of it.
on mplust-told ya by mplust
needs to stop so the track can sound perfect.
on Conscious by Biodegradable
It is way way over done these days.
Lets try something else for a change of pace.
on Dubcrimes - Family Feud by DubCrimes
I see the good work you put into this.
on Haters Foes and Frienemies by OneVizun
The flow is hmmm ok in places.
But I give it a thumbs up
on Your Boyfriend is a loser by shykrush
is there a version without it?
on Fairytale ft Louise by Influx
Thanks for this
on Transit by NeonStrawberry
How many more like this one in you?
on The Silent Getaway (collab with Devodale) by rei4real
Thanks for this one
peace, rei
on Soul Beat by Angelus1818
you got an up tempo stuff to bring me out?
-Angelus
on The Dunes (Dream Ending) by ParkerMusic
Its good. Thanks for this.
on Dont Miss It by t0MMYgUNNZ
This thing is ready for someone to flow on it.
on Redrum (raw) by BIZAROTRIPS
This thing works for me...
Keep kickin them like this and you got me hooked for life!!
on CHECKMATE by sparkfirehot
Still feels like something needs to be added to drive it forward
a bit.
seems like it drags and just sticks there.
you have no build up.
on rest in peace by Luckyfeatherstudios
As for that robot part - work on that as well.
As far as the rap part goes it don't even sound like rap.
Yeah I would take this back to the drawing board - and get to
work seriously.
maybe make this an instrumental.
on sleeping beauty (feat mygdal paul) by 2secondimpression
I didn't even pay attention to the music LOL
on lifes a b---- and then u die by notebookwarior
Really showing you didn't think this out before you took this to the mic.
First or not - if you gonna mix lyrics from different people at least have some flow with it. GEEZE.
yours truly dont trip
on oooh by ruff_trak
yeah nice here.
on one more mojito by rei4real
Great work here
peace, rei
on Erupt by StephanieKay
on Magical by bobbybooth
I don't know where that would fit in.
but maybe someone else does
on Pulsing by keyj
beam me up pulse wise.
instrumental?
ciao, K
on Wait One Minute Collab with ChrisCharles by Gordw
amazing job here. I feel this.
Gord
on The Endless - demo - The Jigsaw Concept by RAPREscENT
wow
on Around it goes by jamesjam
saying "around it goes" as much. too much repetition isn't helping here.
Another story of how someone has to overcome the projects.
How many more of these do we need to hear about.
People are struggling everywhere not just in the projects.
How about making it something more people can relate to.