haha wow harsh, but what your saying most likely right. haha seeing how i dont own the music in the back ground i can't just make it an instrumental. but thanks for giving it a listen. back to the studio then
thanks bro i wanna be just like u all the tips realy mean alot to me and if it wasnt for honest opinions i wouldnt be doin this its about time i get some real feedback from a real artist like u thanx by the way cute avatar!
Thanks for posting your opinion...much appreciated...but to tell you the truth the message of the song is just "around it goes" meaning that I felt like i was livin life in the same circle...nothing ever changing...and that message is not just about the projects...cuz i dont live in the projects..never have..the message can be applied to any area of life...whther ur rich or poor..u can still be living life in the same circle...a circle which may be hard to get out of...
Yea the track 'Major Tom' always comes to mind quick on this. Theme wise I think man-kind has run the course(war,death,happiness etc..) but music wise, still has alot of ideas left untapped. Not from me though lol. Cheers and thanks for the review.
thanks for your time
i see u hate all my freetyles
but that's cool because i have way more beats
then ever with out a studio or a real mic,
which i freesytle only. i never wrote a verse in my life just smoking and having fun and saying what i feel at the time off the top of the head
so its still whatever, thanks for your review
on day u will understand
you might want to redo some of the vocals because if its hard to understand you near the begin of this.
I am sure a few others might have the same problem.
Being fast is one thing and being understood is quite another.
Interesting that you say that because the idea of making it harder didn't cross my mind even once while making this. That's probably because I went in with the intention to make this a steady groove with atmosphere you can lose yourself into. But I'm gonna have another listen to this without any preconceived notions [I can try at least] and see if I can use what you suggested. Probably remix it. Anyway, thanks for the listen and making me think about how I can make this better.
on CHECKMATE by sparkfirehot
Still feels like something needs to be added to drive it forward
a bit.
seems like it drags and just sticks there.
you have no build up.
on rest in peace by Luckyfeatherstudios
As for that robot part - work on that as well.
As far as the rap part goes it don't even sound like rap.
Yeah I would take this back to the drawing board - and get to
work seriously.
maybe make this an instrumental.
on sleeping beauty (feat mygdal paul) by 2secondimpression
I didn't even pay attention to the music LOL
on lifes a b---- and then u die by notebookwarior
Really showing you didn't think this out before you took this to the mic.
First or not - if you gonna mix lyrics from different people at least have some flow with it. GEEZE.
yours truly dont trip
on oooh by ruff_trak
yeah nice here.
on one more mojito by rei4real
Great work here
peace, rei
on Erupt by StephanieKay
damn such a good track till then.
on Magical by bobbybooth
I don't know where that would fit in.
but maybe someone else does
on Pulsing by keyj
beam me up pulse wise.
instrumental?
ciao, K
on Wait One Minute Collab with ChrisCharles by Gordw
amazing job here. I feel this.
Gord
on The Endless - demo - The Jigsaw Concept by RAPREscENT
wow
on Around it goes by jamesjam
saying "around it goes" as much. too much repetition isn't helping here.
Another story of how someone has to overcome the projects.
How many more of these do we need to hear about.
People are struggling everywhere not just in the projects.
How about making it something more people can relate to.
on Voyager by MCHN
sort of sounds like that hitchhikers guide to the galaxy kinda thing.
Its all been done before
on Complex Everyday by Beyond
tighten it up.
on Dreamin by minusproductions87
hmmm I am confused a lot.
on Trip 2 Fantasy by djquickrick
but oh well.
on What I think (Second Version) by StephenPotter
this is some trippy stuff when you have headphones on.
" I am so ready to download this "
Ste :D
on Daemon In Mir by Hirogenium
great work here.
happy new year!
on The games you play by kriebel17
I don't know if you feeling pain or about to burst out in joy.
maybe you need a lead man to do this and bring IT!!
on Donnell All That by Beyond
so its kinda poppin.
good work tho
on girl i miss u by donmega
The rap needs work tho.. for realz
i see u hate all my freetyles
but that's cool because i have way more beats
then ever with out a studio or a real mic,
which i freesytle only. i never wrote a verse in my life just smoking and having fun and saying what i feel at the time off the top of the head
so its still whatever, thanks for your review
on day u will understand
on We Only Know Whats Wrong by Tacatta
on Leechers by RAPREscENT
I am sure a few others might have the same problem.
Being fast is one thing and being understood is quite another.
on DFI - Cosmic Naturalism by SGN
on O.G. (Original Gangsta) by HustlerbyNature
that gets annoying whatever that is.
other than that its good stuff.