too bad!!! i did not make this beat a lil bit out my league like you!! and i am still go be freestyling and making music you hate loloololololololololoolololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololollolologsaplolololololololgasplololololooo0lololololol
thanks man really appreciate your review , i didn't plan to release this track in any album , and if you like you can download it free , it's enabled now !!
Always wondered why people mess up good music with weak vocal work.
( what I don't like about the vocals - for one they seem very weak compared to how strong the music is. - and whatever that effect was that is applied to them did not help them either.
I mean if the vocals are being made to sound like instruments I don't like it. )
You want to improve this.
Take the time to really get a vocal line that is one
understandable
and
At least get a hook that ummm I don't know maybe SAYS SOMETHING.
or At least remove the vocals and let the music speak for itself.
Hmmm I actually appreciate constructive criticism, but it has to be constructive. What don't you like about the vocals?
Tips for improvement or what you would do better or differently please?
Thanks for listening.
UPDATE
Thank You this is just the kind of feedback that I want and need. Truthfully I think the vocals are pretty weak too. I may remove them or even remove the track. I think compared to some of the stuff I've made since, this is one of the weakest things I have uploaded.
Your honesty and in depth thoughts are gratefully received. :)
on wurly by djzee86
Yeah a person could lay down some good flow to this one.
Any more like this one? post them up
on Tell me by Becca
Anyway I would love to put some vocals to this and spin it.
Another quality product here you seem to always nail it when it comes to the mood and people just get it.
Thanks for this and continue your magic here on looperman
High respect on what you have done with all your tracks.
on grind on in the trap feat389627 75274 by donmega
as normal you know how I feel about ya man!!
Keep the beats flowin.
on Brave by Ohropack
but still works
I suppose some better instruments would work wonders for this.
but nice effort.
Thank you
on Electro Banger by Apieceoftofu
If you ever redo this let me know.
on The Secret To Immortality (Edited and Extended) by Nap
seems like some wacky movie sound track.
on EVERY DAY ADVENTURES by Silvestre
as far as the violin thing goes maybe you can get a better
selection of that going because they are very light here.
Thanks
on rhyme for a reason ft Prosthetik Intelligentz by doomgotbeats
I do know that it won't go mainstream because of how its structured.
but hey thats just my take on it.
on Late casualty by Lalit
I want to hear it in 3d mode.
( I can send you a copy of this song in 3d if you like )
waz a 3d mode btw???
on Dont Cry For Me by HustlerbyNature
on Will you cry by minusproductions87
on If Only Ft Gizella by Dj_ATA
it really sets a mood for me.
when is the album coming out?
cheers =)
on Pressure by 7h30rY
"I gotta have more cowbell" LOL
on Reversing round a corner by bobbybooth
on Inertial Dampeners ft Katrina by deltaaah
on Track 4 by EmperMusic
I like this kind of thing.
thanks for this one
on Ny Posta Child by ReignMD
you go with yo bad self
Thanks
on Without You by DjnErU
Classic Lovin this.. Whats not to love.
Awesome sound to this.
Keep up the good work.
thanks for this
on I Am YO by LMS3010
warning this is not good enuff hip hop.
on Poetry by Daniboi
just needs more progression to me for my taste.
on What You Cant See by NikeBoy
Keep it up
on Demo by Stormclub
Great work here.
on Gimmmeee by ResistanceIsFutile
( what I don't like about the vocals - for one they seem very weak compared to how strong the music is. - and whatever that effect was that is applied to them did not help them either.
I mean if the vocals are being made to sound like instruments I don't like it. )
You want to improve this.
Take the time to really get a vocal line that is one
understandable
and
At least get a hook that ummm I don't know maybe SAYS SOMETHING.
or At least remove the vocals and let the music speak for itself.
Hope this helps
Tips for improvement or what you would do better or differently please?
Thanks for listening.
UPDATE
Thank You this is just the kind of feedback that I want and need. Truthfully I think the vocals are pretty weak too. I may remove them or even remove the track. I think compared to some of the stuff I've made since, this is one of the weakest things I have uploaded.
Your honesty and in depth thoughts are gratefully received. :)
on wurly by djzee86
Yet if you were bored when you made it maybe you can go thru it again and tweak it up some.
on LOST by MADVICKO
and are so loud at the end?
I don't get it and don't like that.