Always wondered why people mess up good music with weak vocal work.
( what I don't like about the vocals - for one they seem very weak compared to how strong the music is. - and whatever that effect was that is applied to them did not help them either.
I mean if the vocals are being made to sound like instruments I don't like it. )
You want to improve this.
Take the time to really get a vocal line that is one
understandable
and
At least get a hook that ummm I don't know maybe SAYS SOMETHING.
or At least remove the vocals and let the music speak for itself.
Hmmm I actually appreciate constructive criticism, but it has to be constructive. What don't you like about the vocals?
Tips for improvement or what you would do better or differently please?
Thanks for listening.
UPDATE
Thank You this is just the kind of feedback that I want and need. Truthfully I think the vocals are pretty weak too. I may remove them or even remove the track. I think compared to some of the stuff I've made since, this is one of the weakest things I have uploaded.
Your honesty and in depth thoughts are gratefully received. :)
haha, you're most welcome. I think you're hilarious, and I'm not being sarcastic. I especially love how well your avatar synchronizes with the content of most of your reviews.
yeah appreciate the review and your 2 cents on the track...All advice is always welcome know what i mean...yeah i know i'm a little quick wit the lyrics sometimes but i just roll wit what i feel my flow is going to be on a certain track, usually if i think about it too much it wont sound as good...i just go with the gut feeling....i got plenty of other tracks u can check out...check my profile on here or check out my page on reverbnation.... http://www.reverbnation.com/georam
you'll even find a couple of videos there from when i auditioned and then opened a concert for Daddy Yankee...
Other songs you should hear are "withoutthemusic" i got real lyrical wit it on that one,also check the collab wit Bubu "Triple Six" that one has a more laid back flow u might like... but hey they are all good so just take a listen i promise you wont be disappointed and if u get a chance leave some feedback...thanks again for your time....GEO
What ever that "pop clap" thing you got going there
you need to remove or reduce that as it sounds annoying as hell
seems as tho its as loud as the vocals.
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( what I don't like about the vocals - for one they seem very weak compared to how strong the music is. - and whatever that effect was that is applied to them did not help them either.
I mean if the vocals are being made to sound like instruments I don't like it. )
You want to improve this.
Take the time to really get a vocal line that is one
understandable
and
At least get a hook that ummm I don't know maybe SAYS SOMETHING.
or At least remove the vocals and let the music speak for itself.
Hope this helps
Tips for improvement or what you would do better or differently please?
Thanks for listening.
UPDATE
Thank You this is just the kind of feedback that I want and need. Truthfully I think the vocals are pretty weak too. I may remove them or even remove the track. I think compared to some of the stuff I've made since, this is one of the weakest things I have uploaded.
Your honesty and in depth thoughts are gratefully received. :)
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Yet if you were bored when you made it maybe you can go thru it again and tweak it up some.
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Being different from the norm is always going to be hard on you if not everyone else.
Now as far as this track goes.
You probably could ease up on your pacing so people can grab more onto your flow.
Your hook needs a bit of work. As far as the music goes its nice for what you are working with.
If you have other tracks please lay them out for us to hear.
I can't bash a person such as yourself on the rise.
Just remember there will always be haters.
Just stay true to yourself and keep the music coming.
you'll even find a couple of videos there from when i auditioned and then opened a concert for Daddy Yankee...
Other songs you should hear are "withoutthemusic" i got real lyrical wit it on that one,also check the collab wit Bubu "Triple Six" that one has a more laid back flow u might like... but hey they are all good so just take a listen i promise you wont be disappointed and if u get a chance leave some feedback...thanks again for your time....GEO
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