im not mad at u that u dont like my style because u are u!!!!
every person can have there own opinion about the way i rap if i put it out for the world to see and hear i shouldnt be mad. im self made and all my beats and free styles,cursing,n words,and weed songs are about me
and its real.
thanks for your time!!!
Don Carter
Not sure, I think its alright. The snare at times is a lil low, but then again I wasnt looking for the percussion to dominate in this, I did however want it to create a mellowdramatic feel and move the track along.
Thanks for the synth compliment, I really dig what came out of it this time as well. I try and make sure that i dont seq it, but rather play it out with feeling. That usually works out well.
Thanks for the listen.
lmao thanks for your time, and im sorry u feel
that way about a 6 year old track
but thats how a lot of tracks sounded on tape
b4 i got a computer!!! so if u wanna run thats fine
but i think u forgot u are a novice member, u will never be on my level no time soon with 30 songs posted and 180 reviews.....179 good ones with one hator (u).....also working thru three diffrent genres, u need to do your home work
and check out 20 of my tracks about you you you
hator, all my tracks are real keep negativity to yourself!!!
Hey Man! Thanks for the review! :) That was what I was going for as Venice is a very unique place so I wanted to pour that essence into a unique sounding track! Have a nice day! Glad you enjoyed it!
ONE i spoke clearly,and spoke slowly so you not knowing what im saying is completely your problem dude XD but i still needed to edit the vocals,im not goin 2 though cuz im suppose to do it over. what you meant by wrong category?
Hey thanks. I think it needs a vocal track to wrap the music around and give it a little more framework (and direction). Wish I knew a good rapper that had some words for it!
needs a bit more pop to even rock well in the clubs.
plus it needs a bit more build up and direction.
almost seemed like it was moving forward then it dropped off.
on There U Were by TuneDef
with a better mic
it would be even hotter.
on Games Without Frontiers (TraXnCtrl Remix) by TraXnCtrl
I would hardly recognize this as a song.
But I can learn to like this if not love it if I played it enough.
but its so mish mash that I would not play it as much as the original.
maybe slow up the pace some and rework the editing on the fills
on why u hate me by donmega
because everyone is feelin the beat not the verses.
every person can have there own opinion about the way i rap if i put it out for the world to see and hear i shouldnt be mad. im self made and all my beats and free styles,cursing,n words,and weed songs are about me
and its real.
thanks for your time!!!
Don Carter
on bon voyage by doomgotbeats
making another....
yeah trippy drippy tune
on A verse A week featuring Nico Cullo by BeternalProductions
on ParteeDJ-Operation Destruction by ParteeDJ
not too bad but still needs a bit of tweaking to be a banger.
on I NEED KUSH by TRAVEE
diggin that bassline.
push this is a hot track
on TRAPED by donmega
as for playtime with the vocal work - rambling on and on...
Traped = Trapped - lets get the spelling right at least.
my thing is you might be one of the people that need just make the beat and let other people flow on it.
You talent seems not to be a rapper.
Various tracks I have heard so far.
I think this one shows that many people are above your level.
on clean underwere by donmega
on cops rolling by (trying to smoke a blunt) by donmega
You can't honestly be serious. How old is this track?
Its like I don't know where to begin.
Weed songs are so overdone and this one isn't even good.
on Stompin by BrokenScythe
What ever that keyboard note you are playing in this thing
you can remove that and it would sound so much better.
a few more drums here and there would always pep it up.
on Winter Ice by BrokenScythe
I don't think the timing on the drumming is on point.
but the keyboard work is awesome.
Thanks for the synth compliment, I really dig what came out of it this time as well. I try and make sure that i dont seq it, but rather play it out with feeling. That usually works out well.
Thanks for the listen.
on go harder mr carter by donmega
Whoever thought this vocal thing up it doesn't work for the song.
And why does the audio sound like you guys are tired from running around or something.
Get a better mic try again.
The more I hear this it makes me want to run.
that way about a 6 year old track
but thats how a lot of tracks sounded on tape
b4 i got a computer!!! so if u wanna run thats fine
but i think u forgot u are a novice member, u will never be on my level no time soon with 30 songs posted and 180 reviews.....179 good ones with one hator (u).....also working thru three diffrent genres, u need to do your home work
and check out 20 of my tracks about you you you
hator, all my tracks are real keep negativity to yourself!!!
on DJ DragoN-Un Giorno In Venezia by DJsDragoN
on Hell and back by BARBARASUN1019
I can bounce to this.
stay steady homie
on Dubstep 1 by Apieceoftofu
this thing has a life of its own.
on Im right Here by sincomai
Next the song sounds so mixed up I can't begin to play it all.
clean up the vocal track and lose some of the effects on them.
maybe people can hear it
on Looking for Meaning by ResistanceIsFutile
Thanks
on INTRODUCTION (dont trip) by notebookwarior
yeah the music is smooth
enuff said
on Lament by Tiltedbeats
nice work on this one... lets download it hint hint
on Change Of Thought by venture91
Keep this rolling man!!
on Evil Christmas by JaNgLz
You could go anywhere with this keep it smooth flowing.
on Goin Home by AllenV
I like what you have done with this I can't even begin to complain.
which is rare for me.
Allen
on Twelve by DJSchmeeJ
I see this can go somewhere - just get it there for us.
on GREAT TO BE BACK by OPENMINDSDB
plus it needs a bit more build up and direction.
almost seemed like it was moving forward then it dropped off.