Lifes A B---- And Then U Die - Notebookwarior

20th Aug 2010 15:54 - 16 years ago
Description : my first track ever. used garage band. beat is from primetimeproduction all his tracks are ill.please let me know what i can improve on. thanks

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give notebookwarior some feedback.

Mrbillionx
Mrbillionx 14th Oct 2010 13:25 - 15 years ago
You honestly can't be serious with this.

Really showing you didn't think this out before you took this to the mic.

First or not - if you gonna mix lyrics from different people at least have some flow with it. GEEZE.
notebookwarior
notebookwarior replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks bro i wanna be just like u all the tips realy mean alot to me and if it wasnt for honest opinions i wouldnt be doin this its about time i get some real feedback from a real artist like u thanx by the way cute avatar!

yours truly dont trip
GEOram
GEOram 7th Oct 2010 21:20 - 15 years ago
Good track bro considering it;s your 1st and the vox arent mastered it, it was clear that your mesg. came through in it...Try to just let your feelings hang out when you record...then compress and eq your vox and maybe add a couple adlibs here and there and you'll be real good...Just keep at it, kind of like shadow boxing, just compete with yourself because in the end you are your own worst enemy....
notebookwarior
notebookwarior replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks for the listen.. i realy apprieciate all the advice im stil learning and everybit helps thanks
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 18th Sep 2010 23:05 - 15 years ago
Like my good buddy donmega said :-)

Great piece of music my friend

All The Best

John
PMONEY
PMONEY 3rd Sep 2010 13:02 - 16 years ago
IM FEELIN THIS BRUH, NICE SMOOTH RIDING BEAT, I SHOULDA GOT WIT U ON DIS ONE, BUT KEEP IT UP BRO....
raw_data
raw_data 3rd Sep 2010 07:14 - 16 years ago
This track is heat. you got the right idea. next time try and put a little effect on your main vocal track. then use a second main vocal, heavy effect, pan just off center and turn it down. then use some backing vocal tracks to emphasize your main. thanks for the review.
BluntsAndBeats
BluntsAndBeats 23rd Aug 2010 00:49 - 16 years ago
man this track has got some real value in it. if you did some more mastering on the vocals, this could be gold. some of the lyrics arent my favorite but I see the message you are trying to get across and I agree with it completely. you got a good recorded voice man so keep on spittin that fire
notebookwarior
notebookwarior replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks bro i apreciate the honesty.. im still learning how to master the vocals it can be a challange its all garge band and im new to it but thanks any ways peace out
MastaPrince
MastaPrince 22nd Aug 2010 02:38 - 16 years ago
Its aiight for a first track, try to express yourself more though... and maybe put some dubbles in, i always make mine to loud i havent perfected them yet. And less talking at the start like haha Lets Go or whatever.

Dubbles is where you record the send half of every line 2ice and make them a bit quiter, so sort of like and echo/reverb effect but sounds better... if you look at my song i wanna be a star youll be able to tell i have them in there. or u can do every 2nd line up to you...
notebookwarior
notebookwarior replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks bro...doubles? enlighten me...
donmega
donmega 20th Aug 2010 19:45 - 16 years ago
dope track
real laid back
do that sh#t

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