Hey, 'love much, I see you made research. Just one think. You have a good melody, but I think the drum too much present. Only my opinion.
Good realisation.
Hello,
Why not adding a suave woman voice, a smooth and sexy voice . It'll give a real and besutiful melody.
Don't hesitate to try different tones (why not a 2 or 3 voices melody). You have here something you HAVE TO complete !!
Hello,
It' could be good, but your mastering seems to be reviewed.
THe quality of the sound make destroying your production. Even if the melody is sympathitice, make care to the arrangement, the levels of each instrument.
I always write that a good music doesn't need heavy noise.
Can you understant this ?
If you apply some corrections, modifications, you'll discover your music again.
good job!
Hey, you come with an other good composition.
I feel that good, the base remains the base in music : you bring a melody.
Sure, the crystal sound are too much long for me, 'cause I love the bass and barytone.
Make care that 6 minutes don't make poeple sleeping !
But, really good work.
Thanks for that
Thank you. I know, but I have someone working on the actual lyrics to the song. If he and I can work together and it turns out okay, I'll embed his voice in the part where it is just the high-synth sounds. The poem is lengthy yet not repetitive so I think it will work out nicely at the end. Thank you again.
Hello,
I think your music is interesting, but some thing are missing. It's my opinion.
1) the violin composition merits to be more worked. I feel that if you could find loops or a violonist, you could continue its melody, so that you composition never become monotone.
2) Your composition seems to be a part of one. I want to write that other instruments can come here and play there own melody.
It's what I fell, but you have a line of composition you can work on better.
3àMake care, I hear the limits of the loops. It could be interesting to make fusions between them to obtain a continuous movement.
Try and try, here is the solution of what, one day, your'll appear in your mind, and a nice and complete composition will appear.
Hello,
Good composition.
BUT (I often use 'BUT'), because of the duration of your music, you can introduce some rupts to break a coming monotony, with short drums sequences or somethin else, and afte, re-running your tempo and your melody.
It makes me thinking to the Californian period (1970').
It's a good music
Hey, A MASTERPIECE !
Really good melody, I feel you retain your energy playing this.
Why not introducing one or two times a cut rythm and playing as if you become an uncontrolled player, joking, distorting the sound of that guitar which is made for this.
I feel you can go up and produce at the limit of the jazz rock cutting the rythm, the melody ,introducing riffs, etc...
Here, it's a real good example of quality guitar playing.
Thank you for this, You have your own print, and a beautiful playing. I'll call the majors to contact you (joke!)
Hey, good production!
But (Yes, everywhere I put a 'BUT' word), it's an opinion,the man's voice seems to be too much monotone. What do you think about one or two breaks, giving him a live? I think that if there is a human voice, it's because it's the line of a music. So, I'd rather hearing music in which this voice has modulations, seems to give a lived presence.
Your production is good, but, because of this, and because of the duration, I would be happy hearing this voice becoming the head of the song. (voice = life)
Good way
Hey, could be better. Here is my opinion.
Maybe it would be better to inverse the fonctions of the instruments.
I used some loops of PianoSounds, and 'cause there are well built, I find it would be better to place them on the first level, and not as a background, 'cause there are melodies. I don't want to chock you, but even if your melody represents for me a research really interesting, why not put a suggestion on what you do for the listener.
I try to explain to you that , because your composition is built with various pieces, put them at a place which make poeple curious.
Why do I tell this ?
When I listen to your music, I try to "analyze" (it's automatic) the background music...pianosounds, because its level is too much low.
But the best is to listen to your writing.
In music, all is possible, but to maintain some attention, it could be interesting to modify the different presences of each instrument.
Oh ! keep cool, I Feel this, But an other member can tell exactly the contrary. Don't mind, what is important is to create and finding some pleasure here !
I think that I understand what U say. If U listen other music of mine, I put on the first level the melodies, but here I do a different job that's true.
Hey,
beautiful creation, really ! And if you set a disaccording acoustic guitar (that I seem to hear), it could increase the melancolic effect (just my opinion).
I like much the phrase of the acoustic guitar
It's melodious! Not 'Tatapoom' with heavy drums, just a good song.
Dreamy, I like you put a little reverb on the voice. May be, some time, a guitar riff, or a sound can cut the rythm to give a new inspiration, because the song is long (even if 5 minutes are nothing in a life), but it's my opinion, only!
Nice composition, you approach Joe Cocker, but the rythm seems too be a little bit too low (it's my opinion).
But original and sympathitic. Make care, your bas maybe, seems to be too low (These are my ears which are really sensible to bass sounds).
good production.
Nice composition, music like I like.
It seems to be a good Bill Douglas, this american composer I love.
Very good, rare are the poeple who launch such a music which looks like classical music, but here is a good way of inspiration.
Good work !
Somewhere, it looks like "Messe pour le temps present" of Pierre Henry.
Modern, funny and close to music ?
Good approach of the limits of what music can be...
Progressive music, ok.
I feel (only an opinion) that if sometime a very low (bass or barytone) sound appears, it could give a certain impression of depth, and it could rupt a phrase which is very long.
Oooops, it's not my composition !
Good work !
on together by flawliss
on take me away by flawliss
So, just an effort and it will be really beautiful.
Thanks !
on Silence is a song (with Johnny Gadget) by Cybertooth
Really good.
on Night Terror by chapmac9
I think your drums too much present, only.
Good
on Mono Love by saand
Good realisation.
on beat062710 by OneEightySevenEnt
It's my opinion, don't worry
on This Is The Answer (The Start) by brassmonkeyltd
good, I like all the short sounds you use to compose.
on Real by Jalyn
Why not adding a suave woman voice, a smooth and sexy voice . It'll give a real and besutiful melody.
Don't hesitate to try different tones (why not a 2 or 3 voices melody). You have here something you HAVE TO complete !!
Good work
on Aching Pain by Jalyn
It' could be good, but your mastering seems to be reviewed.
THe quality of the sound make destroying your production. Even if the melody is sympathitice, make care to the arrangement, the levels of each instrument.
I always write that a good music doesn't need heavy noise.
Can you understant this ?
If you apply some corrections, modifications, you'll discover your music again.
good job!
on Enveloped by KnownAsn1
I feel that good, the base remains the base in music : you bring a melody.
Sure, the crystal sound are too much long for me, 'cause I love the bass and barytone.
Make care that 6 minutes don't make poeple sleeping !
But, really good work.
Thanks for that
on cool by ricardo0tuga
I think your music is interesting, but some thing are missing. It's my opinion.
1) the violin composition merits to be more worked. I feel that if you could find loops or a violonist, you could continue its melody, so that you composition never become monotone.
2) Your composition seems to be a part of one. I want to write that other instruments can come here and play there own melody.
It's what I fell, but you have a line of composition you can work on better.
3àMake care, I hear the limits of the loops. It could be interesting to make fusions between them to obtain a continuous movement.
Try and try, here is the solution of what, one day, your'll appear in your mind, and a nice and complete composition will appear.
on Feeling Me by Jalyn
Good composition.
BUT (I often use 'BUT'), because of the duration of your music, you can introduce some rupts to break a coming monotony, with short drums sequences or somethin else, and afte, re-running your tempo and your melody.
It makes me thinking to the Californian period (1970').
It's a good music
on Deception (instrumental version) by guitarjock
Really good melody, I feel you retain your energy playing this.
Why not introducing one or two times a cut rythm and playing as if you become an uncontrolled player, joking, distorting the sound of that guitar which is made for this.
I feel you can go up and produce at the limit of the jazz rock cutting the rythm, the melody ,introducing riffs, etc...
Here, it's a real good example of quality guitar playing.
Thank you for this, You have your own print, and a beautiful playing. I'll call the majors to contact you (joke!)
on As The World Turns by Rumor
But (Yes, everywhere I put a 'BUT' word), it's an opinion,the man's voice seems to be too much monotone. What do you think about one or two breaks, giving him a live? I think that if there is a human voice, it's because it's the line of a music. So, I'd rather hearing music in which this voice has modulations, seems to give a lived presence.
Your production is good, but, because of this, and because of the duration, I would be happy hearing this voice becoming the head of the song. (voice = life)
Good way
on Goodbye My folklorystik day by JeanPi
Maybe it would be better to inverse the fonctions of the instruments.
I used some loops of PianoSounds, and 'cause there are well built, I find it would be better to place them on the first level, and not as a background, 'cause there are melodies. I don't want to chock you, but even if your melody represents for me a research really interesting, why not put a suggestion on what you do for the listener.
I try to explain to you that , because your composition is built with various pieces, put them at a place which make poeple curious.
Why do I tell this ?
When I listen to your music, I try to "analyze" (it's automatic) the background music...pianosounds, because its level is too much low.
But the best is to listen to your writing.
In music, all is possible, but to maintain some attention, it could be interesting to modify the different presences of each instrument.
Oh ! keep cool, I Feel this, But an other member can tell exactly the contrary. Don't mind, what is important is to create and finding some pleasure here !
Do you understand this ?
on Comere by oasisduke
Hey,
beautiful creation, really ! And if you set a disaccording acoustic guitar (that I seem to hear), it could increase the melancolic effect (just my opinion).
I like much the phrase of the acoustic guitar
on NewTwo by oasisduke
Melancolic but beautiful, you hold a beautiful phrase I think you can more explore to make your music more present.
It's a good listening!
..good to be back..
on Died in Your arms remix by Mommilynn
Dreamy, I like you put a little reverb on the voice. May be, some time, a guitar riff, or a sound can cut the rythm to give a new inspiration, because the song is long (even if 5 minutes are nothing in a life), but it's my opinion, only!
Good production
on Fat Girl by Fijensen
But original and sympathitic. Make care, your bas maybe, seems to be too low (These are my ears which are really sensible to bass sounds).
good production.
on Lama by DuxCleri
It seems to be a good Bill Douglas, this american composer I love.
Very good, rare are the poeple who launch such a music which looks like classical music, but here is a good way of inspiration.
Good work !
on all my life remake by bete
on Y Bass Version by ShamanStone
Modern, funny and close to music ?
Good approach of the limits of what music can be...
on Movie score pt8 by fernando25
I feel (only an opinion) that if sometime a very low (bass or barytone) sound appears, it could give a certain impression of depth, and it could rupt a phrase which is very long.
Oooops, it's not my composition !
Good work !
on Robot Day (Day 1-The Plan) by SonicKDT
I think you can find a producer to realise a movie with pictures according to your music. I fee lthat it could impress a lot.
Good work !
on gates of eternity by kamilius
Lovely, but find a producer, there is a movie to create with that.
Good !