As The World Turns - Rumor

2nd Jul 2010 05:51 - 16 years ago
Description : review this please.. tell me what you think, be as harsh as you want.. ill return the favor.. i want honest opinions

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give Rumor some feedback.

JohnnyHunter
JohnnyHunter 15th Jul 2010 02:38 - 16 years ago
Man the production on this is great. The mix is perfect! The vocals are spot on too, although It would be nice to hear the vocals in more stereo, maybe a lil tiny bit of reverb with a very short decay. I dunno, maybe its just the headphones im wearing.
TheAbyssBeatGuruJayP
TheAbyssBeatGuruJayP 2nd Jul 2010 23:06 - 16 years ago
the beat is a beast. loving the piano melody. the rhymes is tight just gotta deliver them better. other than that the whole thing sounds pretty solid to me.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru
phantomhim
phantomhim 2nd Jul 2010 11:19 - 16 years ago
Since you want honestly man here's some....

The beat is better than the vocal, but the vocal is good tho. But the beat is very good. i wouldn't change anything about the beat, infact I'd do a verse on it in a second. Just keep working on the vocals. Some very good flows, and some good lyrics. But you need to work on your delivery.

Good stuff tho fam, looking forward to more.

EDIT: One more thing, good hook.
danbo
danbo 2nd Jul 2010 07:56 - 16 years ago
Hey, good production!
But (Yes, everywhere I put a 'BUT' word), it's an opinion,the man's voice seems to be too much monotone. What do you think about one or two breaks, giving him a live? I think that if there is a human voice, it's because it's the line of a music. So, I'd rather hearing music in which this voice has modulations, seems to give a lived presence.
Your production is good, but, because of this, and because of the duration, I would be happy hearing this voice becoming the head of the song. (voice = life)
Good way
EasyToEnvy
EasyToEnvy 2nd Jul 2010 06:32 - 16 years ago
the rhymes are better than a lot of people on here, the beat is nice, good flow seems like its pretty well timed. check my stuff if u wanna, tell me if u wanna collab idk

embrace the martian,
EasyToEnvy
Rumor
Rumor replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks man, i appreciate the review

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