Sympathitic to listen. I think that if you bring in front of the scene the organ melody, you could create a new melody.
Your guitar choices are really interesting to listen.
Good
Thanks for the listen. Not sure I'll ever get back around to messing with this old song. It was more of me learning and enjoying a program than anything else.
I really wanted to make a metal song and this is more or less what became of it. I was happy how the two different bass sounds worked out in this. Old song with less structure than I use now. Still a fun learning song. Thanks for checking it out.
This music makes me thinking to a work in progress as if you are looking for the right way for you melody.
Maybe it's true.
I like hearing when poeple try without having any idea. It's in these moments where the musician can come back, they find THE MELODY.
Don't mind, trying, trying again is the solution. Your development is interesting.
I think that this piece can be a part of the more important melody, making instruments coming one after the others.
Good
I rarely hear Rp, but here, I can hear something good, not a monotone music. There are variations.
Maybe voices could give a good consistancy to the result.
Good.
Ok, the melody is the melody with beautiful contents. Your have the touch for using the woman voice which brings some troubled atmosphere.
Maybe the rythm of the drums could be a little bit more worked (my opinion)
Good song.
thanks man. the rhythm? you caught that? :) & I thought I was going to get away with it. was actually considering making the bass line line up perfectly with the offbeat kick drum but was too lazy to try.
Hey,
Genious, You go out of the straight ways, I like very much that.
Your music is finished and not, it's strange but beautiful.
With such a line of creation, you can developpe after.
The rythm is well balanced with the theme (my opinion)
Don't mind, here is a music for dancing.
Beautiful.
I am very pleased that you like it. Thank You much for the review. This song is strange but that is what I like on it:). Only one thing which bothers me where to learn to do better mixes :) Sound is still not what I would like to hear..
What I can say is that is your voice doesn't follow exactly the notes, it gives a real sympathitic effect and globaly, the melody is very good to listen.
I like much this kind of spleen in you building.
That a good song of a poesy.
Yeeeees, right man, it's a good blues like the original ones.
Your voice has little treble which gives a special effect, but it's really beautiful.
It's difficult (in Europe) to find so beautiful songs.
Thanks for this, and if your create new melodies like this one, I'll come back.
Thank you Danbo. Yes, a bit high pitched for blues...more blues/rock combo. And isn't blues as much as a feeling as it is a sound? lol. And if this guy ain't feeling the blues, I don't know who is. Thank you again mate!
Maybe you think not having a beautiful voice. That's false, and that's why I write to you that you can sing, and ...You have to, 'cause, you voice is structured to sing. I Hear that, even if you are not sure of that.
That's why I think that if you work it, you can do beautiful things with.
...Don't think you are not a singer, yes, you compose, but you can sing !
Hello, good melody. I appreciate the lyrics and your own touch.
Even if your voice is not completely controlled, you can work on it and procude really beautiful songs.
Good production
My voice is there just because no one else had been available at that moment:), I am not a singer and prefer just to compose, lyrics also do not belong to my great skills, So if there would be someone with lyrics and voice and I would really appreciate that.
Hello!
Your composition is good, but I think that at a moment, you can introduce other lyrics or instruments to make rupts, to create something which doesn't like a mechanical loop, even if there are evolutions in your composition.
I write down that, because I fell that after one minute, this melody can evoluate in a cetain way.
But that's only my opinion.
Good idea.
Hello, strange, It seems to be betwenn tribe music and some slow rock.
Really nice. I love how you distort the voices.
And more than that, with a quasi minimalist instruments, you arrive to create a melody which fills the strangly the space.
Good practice and really original.
Which makes it either tribe rock or slow music, lol. Thanx for the review. As always, I try not to clutter things up. Just get the sound and back away slowly.
on Tax by RonG251
Good melody
on Into the City by SixFingeredMan
Your guitar choices are really interesting to listen.
Good
on In and Out by SixFingeredMan
good
on HM2 by SixFingeredMan
on Stu by SixFingeredMan
Maybe it's true.
I like hearing when poeple try without having any idea. It's in these moments where the musician can come back, they find THE MELODY.
on weird hiphop by bete
I think that this piece can be a part of the more important melody, making instruments coming one after the others.
Good
on south side by MRCoOk
Maybe voices could give a good consistancy to the result.
Good.
on Temptation feat Minette by c_man
Maybe the rythm of the drums could be a little bit more worked (my opinion)
Good song.
on Psychadelic Cowboy by JvR
Genious, You go out of the straight ways, I like very much that.
Your music is finished and not, it's strange but beautiful.
With such a line of creation, you can developpe after.
The rythm is well balanced with the theme (my opinion)
Don't mind, here is a music for dancing.
Beautiful.
.......................masterpiece ?
on Trance melodys(taste sample) by Aereas
on Touching in the Dark by CalifKen
Nice !
on Lets by CalifKen
on Dont Go Dont You Know by CalifKen
I like much this kind of spleen in you building.
That a good song of a poesy.
on Two Time Me Blues by MarkGregory
Your voice has little treble which gives a special effect, but it's really beautiful.
It's difficult (in Europe) to find so beautiful songs.
Thanks for this, and if your create new melodies like this one, I'll come back.
on Ikaros - The Last Fly by JvR
Maybe you think not having a beautiful voice. That's false, and that's why I write to you that you can sing, and ...You have to, 'cause, you voice is structured to sing. I Hear that, even if you are not sure of that.
That's why I think that if you work it, you can do beautiful things with.
...Don't think you are not a singer, yes, you compose, but you can sing !
on Ikaros - The Last Fly by JvR
Even if your voice is not completely controlled, you can work on it and procude really beautiful songs.
Good production
on Transonic by 4thEden
I like the melody. It's a good creation.
on 50-000 Problems by RonG251
very good.
on SOUTH IN YOUR MOUTH by sparkfirehot
Your composition is good, but I think that at a moment, you can introduce other lyrics or instruments to make rupts, to create something which doesn't like a mechanical loop, even if there are evolutions in your composition.
I write down that, because I fell that after one minute, this melody can evoluate in a cetain way.
But that's only my opinion.
Good idea.
on Sunshine Turns to Rain by Codger
I like much
Codger
on Bad Dogma No Bisquit by StoneJones
Really nice. I love how you distort the voices.
And more than that, with a quasi minimalist instruments, you arrive to create a melody which fills the strangly the space.
Good practice and really original.
on sunset by flawliss
Bells are good instruments.
Thanks
on together by flawliss
on take me away by flawliss
So, just an effort and it will be really beautiful.
Thanks !
on Silence is a song (with Johnny Gadget) by Cybertooth
Really good.