More rocky, but I like the building of you music. The melody is well plaid at the synthesizer.
It's really dancing, and pleasant t olisten. The repetition of the main phrase which comes several times rendres an hypnotic effect.
Thanks
Beautiful rythm, and lovely sounds coming from the instruments. You worked with bass rather than high. It render a good atmopshere, and the melody is beautiful. I think you developed a very melodic structure.
Good
Yeah i have trouble with mixing and as a result my stuff turns out pretty loud. I'm really new to all this so any pointers would greatly be appreciated.
Emotion, yes !! You have the touch in this song.
Really, you have here something which is a jewel.
Whe nI listen to Blues, I'm linked to the globally of human beings and the music.
Your interpretation is maxi-astonished. You have a rough voice which goes well for this song.
Please, an other one like this one...Nice !
wann ich höre dein muzik, die builder von der film Avatar kommen.
So, ich dänke daB es ist ein cinematic muzik besser als ein R&B.
Nicht zuviel Laud, ganz schön.
Gut gebaut.
Danke.
Ich habe viel lerlochen auf Deustch aber ich glaube daB du Verstät mich.
enes my rapper of my labels as a performer. I'm sure given a pass to the contract ends track to tinker. And here it is for you to listen .. lg.: Kingar For questions please write to
Hello, I like much, but one question : why putting a so speed rythm to the drums at the beginning? Don't you think that a slower tempo could render differntly and put all the instruments at the same level of listening ?
Thanks
Hi thanks for your review. I dont really understand what you mean about the speed of the drums affecting the level of listening. I put the drum & bass style beat in as a taster of the end result after the more chilled section. Then when it comes to the end it recycles the beginning and plays it in it's entirety. I may look at adjusting the track in the future but at the minute this was my desired effect.
Hello, do you play music ? This piece is very original. I like, because I don't know what is this !
It's really well mixed. At every moment i am waiting for changings.
That's funny and interesting.
...more... noises, burt pleasant to listen.
Hello, I like. So, because it's a long melody, not introducing others instruments (one or more) to build a music in a progressive way, and not in a linear one like this ?
Do you think you can try ?
I lke what you do, and in this case, it's my opinion, I except a develoment.
But, it's a suggestion
good work; I like middle ages instruments
Hello,
listen to your track, I feel that I write a ballad rather than a hip hop. I find your melody with the bass rythm, really done for this.
Good production... an idea t oepxlore.
Thank you for your review.
Yes, since I'm just starting out using logic and making music I really want to explore the different possibilities and types of music I'm capable of making. Thank you for your kind words,
Hello, good production. The melody is very nice, but, it's my feeling, I think that the drums at the beginning is or to much present, or the rythm not adapted. It's only an opinion, but I like much it.
Thanks
Hello, i'm not a hip hop fan, but I find your piece interesting, because the bass and the piano are beautiful. Coming after to cover the sounds, the voice is pleasant to listen.
good production
Hello, beautiful piece. I like much how you place your instrument at the limit of the discordance. Really beautiful. Other point, the drum rythm is not obvious to follow when you use a continuous melody with the saxophone, for instance.
Good
Ecellent introduction to a more largest music,I think. This is a introduction to a composition in which I except other instruments coming.
But this piece is ok, the sound is good, and I love the rythm.
Please, continue this, you can discover that it could render a beautiful fusion or rock instance.
Did you play with stanley clark or yannick top, or some genious jazzman ? Even if the sound isnot perfect on my hifi, the music is...mmmh ! good to listen.
Funny, and hard tempo to follow.
I like because you hve a melody and a so light mode of playing. You let me thinking that your fingers don't touch the keybord.
Good
Hello.
It's my opnion, so don't worry, but, I think that you could sing a more long time in this piece, because your voice balances well the music. When I listen to it from the beginning to the end, I feel that this voice is missing.
Why not invent any thing but thing making you singing all along this piece ?
Good
Very good composition.
Sometime, can you sing louder to make the listen wake up and t ogive a modulation in the strength of your music.
Verey good tempo and melody
Hello,
Good composition, but, I think that the synthesizer masks or disturb you voice (it's seem to have some frequencies like yours)
It could be better (Hey, thats my opinion) to replace it by a bass sound like an organ or a rhodes sound (the most beautiful I know).
Make a try, it 'll change all. I insure you that it gives a space feeling.
Your voice is good, but it seems to be more present (more strength)
Good production
Hey danbo,
thanks for your review! and thank you especially for your tip. I'll try it with another synth ;) but i hope the style will be kept. (cause i like those 8-bit synths) =)
So thank you and have a nice day!
Hey, if you modify substancialy the music, please, give it a new name and let this one on the site. It's really good. I think that the remix could be done on the treble sounds not to give them the same power. Maybe you can try to produce different ranges of power to give a real feeling of depth. It's just an opinion.
on Common Ground by KRe8
It's really dancing, and pleasant t olisten. The repetition of the main phrase which comes several times rendres an hypnotic effect.
Thanks
on Hotbox by ruff_trak
Good
on Forty Five by FineRedMist
But funny.
on Womans Touch ft Slap Johnson and Mack Sanders by Bilbozo
Really, you have here something which is a jewel.
Whe nI listen to Blues, I'm linked to the globally of human beings and the music.
Your interpretation is maxi-astonished. You have a rough voice which goes well for this song.
Please, an other one like this one...Nice !
on Night in Rio by VlaRB
Peace / Paz
VlaRB
on A Litte Bit Fun Please by Kingar
Good
on Little Soloider by Kingar
So, ich dänke daB es ist ein cinematic muzik besser als ein R&B.
Nicht zuviel Laud, ganz schön.
Gut gebaut.
Danke.
Ich habe viel lerlochen auf Deustch aber ich glaube daB du Verstät mich.
enes my rapper of my labels as a performer. I'm sure given a pass to the contract ends track to tinker. And here it is for you to listen .. lg.: Kingar For questions please write to
on Where Am I by SixFingeredMan
The melody is here. Good work !
on Heres To A Glorious Revolution by Matteblak
Thanks
on ZyKoh ft Minette and Ray KoeFoed by StephenPotter
It's really well mixed. At every moment i am waiting for changings.
That's funny and interesting.
...more... noises, burt pleasant to listen.
Thanks for the review!
Ste :)
on Midnight Mirage by KnownAsn1
Do you think you can try ?
I lke what you do, and in this case, it's my opinion, I except a develoment.
But, it's a suggestion
good work; I like middle ages instruments
on Take you away by gapjux
The voices and the melody are good.
Thanks
on I Want That by Beatkutz
listen to your track, I feel that I write a ballad rather than a hip hop. I find your melody with the bass rythm, really done for this.
Good production... an idea t oepxlore.
Yes, since I'm just starting out using logic and making music I really want to explore the different possibilities and types of music I'm capable of making. Thank you for your kind words,
Michael
on JUST WHAT WE NEED by TheDonMusic
Thanks
on Exersise Your Mind by TESE
good production
on The Soloist by CmsProductions
Good
on Walking streets by Nero119
But this piece is ok, the sound is good, and I love the rythm.
Please, continue this, you can discover that it could render a beautiful fusion or rock instance.
on The persistence of memory by jfw
I like... so don't stop it !
Jamie.
on Logarhythms by jfw
on Backed by Bits Demo 2 by BluntsAndBeats
I like because you hve a melody and a so light mode of playing. You let me thinking that your fingers don't touch the keybord.
Good
on Kaia Collaboration with PlanetJazzBass by jfw
Nice production.
Cheers, Jamie.
on madd mixer by RICANPONE
It's my opnion, so don't worry, but, I think that you could sing a more long time in this piece, because your voice balances well the music. When I listen to it from the beginning to the end, I feel that this voice is missing.
Why not invent any thing but thing making you singing all along this piece ?
Good
on No rainbows after midnight by Kikajon
Sometime, can you sing louder to make the listen wake up and t ogive a modulation in the strength of your music.
Verey good tempo and melody
Thanks for the nice words though, I'm really glad you liked the tune.
/pmk
on Oh SOS by lasttriedtherapy
Good composition, but, I think that the synthesizer masks or disturb you voice (it's seem to have some frequencies like yours)
It could be better (Hey, thats my opinion) to replace it by a bass sound like an organ or a rhodes sound (the most beautiful I know).
Make a try, it 'll change all. I insure you that it gives a space feeling.
Your voice is good, but it seems to be more present (more strength)
Good production
thanks for your review! and thank you especially for your tip. I'll try it with another synth ;) but i hope the style will be kept. (cause i like those 8-bit synths) =)
So thank you and have a nice day!
on Psychadelic Cowboy by JvR