Aching Pain - Jalyn

2nd Jul 2010 00:27 - 16 years ago
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Description : Sad song makes me think about heart break.

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Comments (4)

If you have time take a listen and give Jalyn some feedback.

FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 2nd Jul 2010 14:02 - 16 years ago
Beautiful feel to this song,yes very "heartbreaking".Maybe you could put the levels down a bit and I'd love to hear vocals on it
Great work
Cheers
French Kid
RUDEBOY305
RUDEBOY305 2nd Jul 2010 09:47 - 16 years ago
YO DID U GET MY MESSAGE I WAS WONDERIN IF U WANTED TO COLAB WIT ME ON SUM RNB TYPE BEATS HIT ME BACK... GONE
danbo
danbo 2nd Jul 2010 08:27 - 16 years ago
Hello,
It' could be good, but your mastering seems to be reviewed.
THe quality of the sound make destroying your production. Even if the melody is sympathitice, make care to the arrangement, the levels of each instrument.
I always write that a good music doesn't need heavy noise.
Can you understant this ?
If you apply some corrections, modifications, you'll discover your music again.
good job!
phantomhim
phantomhim 2nd Jul 2010 01:56 - 16 years ago
You should put a limiter on your master track, or bring the levels down. Again it's got good ideas in it but the volume is way to high and it's distorted. Looking forward to some more tracks. 1.

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