hey, you got a real good voice!!!
and the song is awesome too ...
though I would reduce the short delay a little bit ... sometimes the sound gets too sharp (especially the vocals when you use a word with an "s"), and that's a sign that reverb and delay are set too high ...
but that's a technical thing ... the song is absolutely great, top composition and arrangement!!
love it ...
thanks rei, the composition and arrangement are all down to Dream Theater it`s their song. The piano was done by a guy on you-tube and i added the vocals. As for the delay and reverb. I have it set to my normal 50 milliseconds and my plate reverb is only on at 1% mix, the vocals were recorded 3 times once in stereo which i left center and recorded right mono and left mono, which i panned each 60% opposite with my delay on the left. If i redoe this in the future i keep in mind what you said....... thanks again.
another good and solid track ... great sound of the acoustic guitar!!!
I'm sure you could do the solo part a little bit tighter ... I guess all you need is a little bit of self confidence in your playing ... let me say: you can do great songs!!!
good work!!
wow, this is just brilliant!!!
extraordinary good vocals (reminds me a little bit of Lifehouse ...) and very good composition ...
sounds like a studio production, great quality!!!
great work!!
this is great!! I love the pace of the track ...
a heavy downtempo beat, something to drown in. and very good arrangement, keeps pushing all the time ... great flow!!
awesome work ...
way too short!!!
I love that bassline ... sounds awesome and gives a pretty dark atmosphere ... but then again your vocals gives it a different direction ... almost kinda horror movie vibes ...
great!! I really like it ...
Randy, this one cries for vocals!!!
I wouldn't compare it with the Black Crowes, it's too straight and too less bluesy, but The Cult springs into my mind ...
awesome work buddy ...
Nice to wake up in the morning and get another nice review from you and others,
Thanks for stopping by, it is much appreciated.
If you'd like to put some vocals with it, your certainly welcome....or anyone else here for that matter.
I was trying to capture what was in my head for the uultimate rock tune. I think I got it. Maybe a little Hammond B3 organ sound, which I have access to, would have rounded it out?
great arrangement!!! and very good melodies, good breaks ...
a very solid track.
I like the happy electronic vibes, though I'm not really into pure electronic music ... but I can hear if someone knows how to make good music!!! and this is good music ...
it's really time to review one of your songs again!!!
and like always it's a pure pleasure to listen to your music, you always give me moments to close my eyes and forget everything around ... I think this is the best that can be said about the quality of someone's music!!!
and instead of typing more letters now I hit the play-button again ...
hey, I like that track ...
great arpeggios and a lot of energy in there, bass sound is wicked ... you got a really good ear for sounds!
and I like the arrangement ...
awesome work!!!
your first mix?? really?
it's a good one ... with a very good choice of loops and sounds!
and the mix is pretty balanced, no big mistakes, well structured ... I like the arrangement ...
great work Deonn!!
whoowhoo!!!!
Randy, you sound like you were not older than 20!!!
this is incredible, absolutely perfect, makes me want to grab the git and jump in ... this track freakin rocks ...
you're like red wine!!
Hello Rei,
Haven't heard from you in awhile. Am glad you came by and listened to another tune I arranged. These are the type of tunes I like, the sound, the chords, everything actually. Makes me feel good inside when I am done....I guess like the red wine your speaking of?
I had fun putting this together and hearing all the reviews thus far, just makes it all the more worthwhile to me in the end. So I am happy that it makes you also want to grab your guitar and jump in and play along. Means I have done my part.
I check out a ton of loops before I decide on which ones have the potential to fit together for an idea I have in my head, if I am not making a tune of my own from scratch.
Of course on all of mine, I use a drum set from Betamonkeymusic.com. This isn't a plug for them, but all their drums are recorded live and sound so real.
I never did get around to buying a drum machine like others have once I got those.
I have another tune simular to this I am working on and it will have more a rhythm section in it so people can play along easier and add in their own lead. I know poeople like to do that including myself, so we'll see what happens.
But that won't be for a couple weeks...or before the end of this year. I am not the type that can do a song overnight! I take my time and try to do it right so I can be proud of showing it off to the world. Afterall, my name is on it!
Thanks again Rei,
Randy
that's really cool!!! like Ern already said great work on chopping the git and rearranging it ... thank you!!!
I'm always happy when someone feels inspired by one of my little ideas ... especially when the result is such a cool track!!
yes, awesome playing, and a very well composed song!!!
mellow, funky, it's calming and enjoyable music, something just to close your eyes and listen ...
I love music like that!!!
great work ...
Sorry its taken a while to reply to your review. (I'm getting into the habit of reviews now !!!) thanks again for taking the time to review my track. I appreciate your comments.
yeah, this baby sounds wonderful!!!
you're a happy man at the moment, right??? it's great when dreams come true ...
I once had the chance to play a very expensive Taylor ... the first chord was like a sunrise, it was unbelievable, I almost startet to shiver ... so a Taylor is my dream ...
back to your song ... it's a very beautiful piece, reminds me of the times of my classical education, there's nothing better than playing things like that to improve your technique, I still do it myself from time to time ...
well done Blair!!!
thanks for listening. I love the guitar more as I play it. I also find that type of soft fingerpicking soothing to my soul. I'm working on lyrics with a Roy Orbison sound and style to them. I hope I can do it justice when I get around to it.
how could I overlook this jewel???
excellent lead melody and arrangement, really brilliant work ...
a wonderful piece of music!!!
well composed and well executed ...
awesome!!!
lady, it's been more than a year since you uploaded your last song ... and I really hope that I don't have to wait another year to hear your wonderful voice!!!
usually I'm not a great fan of christmas songs, but this special song is the one exception ...
you know, I'm Austrian, and for us this song is part of our national identity, we're simply proud that this melody was born here ...
and I love your interpretation ... a lot of emotion in there!!
wonderful ...
Thank you sir for listening and your kind words. I have loved this song since I was I very young. Not because of the lyrical content, but because the melody is so distinct and moody. I am happy that Slap & I did justice to an Austrian masterpiece! Peace, Six
brilliant, just brilliant ...
awesome playing like always, great theme and very cool breaks!!
a little more high frequencies on the git would be nice, but I guess that's my personal taste ...
the groove is fantastic, makes one immediately feel good ...
great work man, great work!
man, this is weird ... and it's fantastic!!!
very very creative ...
I can imagine a crazy animation movie for this track.
I guess you had a lot of fun making this, it was fun to listen for me ...
I'd say it was bordering on the most fun I've ever had making music. It felt like I was using my own "voice" finally. I'm not much of an animator, but I can see how that would be very cool. Thank you for the kind words!
this is a great track!!!
very good guitar playing, and your voice is just brilliant ...
the drums need variation, the beat doesn't change the whole song through and that's a pity ...
but your voice ... wow ... you rock!!!
Thanks, this was the early version we wrote to. just used basic drum loop to start thats why no variation. I added real drums later. I'll find it. My drummer is awesome. you gotta hear it. thanks again though!
on Wait for Sleep by alkie
and the song is awesome too ...
though I would reduce the short delay a little bit ... sometimes the sound gets too sharp (especially the vocals when you use a word with an "s"), and that's a sign that reverb and delay are set too high ...
but that's a technical thing ... the song is absolutely great, top composition and arrangement!!
love it ...
peace, rei
on Lies by Neyer12
I'm sure you could do the solo part a little bit tighter ... I guess all you need is a little bit of self confidence in your playing ... let me say: you can do great songs!!!
good work!!
peace, rei
on Lost Boy on a Lonely Road by Neyer12
some very little timing and pitch issues, but as you say it's not complete yet ... it's a great song!! and that's what counts ...
peace, rei
on The mirror by Jorgen
extraordinary good vocals (reminds me a little bit of Lifehouse ...) and very good composition ...
sounds like a studio production, great quality!!!
great work!!
peace, rei
on Groove To This by toddj
a heavy downtempo beat, something to drown in. and very good arrangement, keeps pushing all the time ... great flow!!
awesome work ...
peace, rei
on u just imagined by graciellita
I love that bassline ... sounds awesome and gives a pretty dark atmosphere ... but then again your vocals gives it a different direction ... almost kinda horror movie vibes ...
great!! I really like it ...
peace, rei
on Rock My World by Randall822
I wouldn't compare it with the Black Crowes, it's too straight and too less bluesy, but The Cult springs into my mind ...
awesome work buddy ...
peace, rei
Nice to wake up in the morning and get another nice review from you and others,
Thanks for stopping by, it is much appreciated.
If you'd like to put some vocals with it, your certainly welcome....or anyone else here for that matter.
I was trying to capture what was in my head for the uultimate rock tune. I think I got it. Maybe a little Hammond B3 organ sound, which I have access to, would have rounded it out?
Thanks again Rei,
Randy
on Come With Me by sena
a very solid track.
I like the happy electronic vibes, though I'm not really into pure electronic music ... but I can hear if someone knows how to make good music!!! and this is good music ...
peace, rei
on Rainbow road by SLAPJOHNSON
and like always it's a pure pleasure to listen to your music, you always give me moments to close my eyes and forget everything around ... I think this is the best that can be said about the quality of someone's music!!!
and instead of typing more letters now I hit the play-button again ...
peace, rei
on Eternity by sena
great arpeggios and a lot of energy in there, bass sound is wicked ... you got a really good ear for sounds!
and I like the arrangement ...
awesome work!!!
peace, rei
on I hear the choppers coming by acousticplayer
and pretty good playing, tight with good emotion and feeling!
good work!!
peace, rei
(btw: I play an Ibanez ArtStar ...)
on Rock Out by deeshay143
it's a good one ... with a very good choice of loops and sounds!
and the mix is pretty balanced, no big mistakes, well structured ... I like the arrangement ...
great work Deonn!!
peace, rei
on Punk Me Up by Randall822
Randy, you sound like you were not older than 20!!!
this is incredible, absolutely perfect, makes me want to grab the git and jump in ... this track freakin rocks ...
you're like red wine!!
peace, rei
Haven't heard from you in awhile. Am glad you came by and listened to another tune I arranged. These are the type of tunes I like, the sound, the chords, everything actually. Makes me feel good inside when I am done....I guess like the red wine your speaking of?
I had fun putting this together and hearing all the reviews thus far, just makes it all the more worthwhile to me in the end. So I am happy that it makes you also want to grab your guitar and jump in and play along. Means I have done my part.
I check out a ton of loops before I decide on which ones have the potential to fit together for an idea I have in my head, if I am not making a tune of my own from scratch.
Of course on all of mine, I use a drum set from Betamonkeymusic.com. This isn't a plug for them, but all their drums are recorded live and sound so real.
I never did get around to buying a drum machine like others have once I got those.
I have another tune simular to this I am working on and it will have more a rhythm section in it so people can play along easier and add in their own lead. I know poeople like to do that including myself, so we'll see what happens.
But that won't be for a couple weeks...or before the end of this year. I am not the type that can do a song overnight! I take my time and try to do it right so I can be proud of showing it off to the world. Afterall, my name is on it!
Thanks again Rei,
Randy
on Oxymoron by Traxmonsta feat.Rie4real by Traxmonsta
I'm always happy when someone feels inspired by one of my little ideas ... especially when the result is such a cool track!!
peace, rei
on God Rest ye merry gentlemen by DanielGtrman
mellow, funky, it's calming and enjoyable music, something just to close your eyes and listen ...
I love music like that!!!
great work ...
peace, rei
oh, and welcome to looperman!!!
on Kanon in C, New Martin by blairrock957
you're a happy man at the moment, right??? it's great when dreams come true ...
I once had the chance to play a very expensive Taylor ... the first chord was like a sunrise, it was unbelievable, I almost startet to shiver ... so a Taylor is my dream ...
back to your song ... it's a very beautiful piece, reminds me of the times of my classical education, there's nothing better than playing things like that to improve your technique, I still do it myself from time to time ...
well done Blair!!!
peace, rei
on The End (Acoustic Version) by AcidParadox
excellent lead melody and arrangement, really brilliant work ...
a wonderful piece of music!!!
well composed and well executed ...
awesome!!!
peace, rei
on So Brand New by Kieasha
peace, rei
on Silent Night, presented by Slap and Six by Sixfingermusic
you know, I'm Austrian, and for us this song is part of our national identity, we're simply proud that this melody was born here ...
and I love your interpretation ... a lot of emotion in there!!
wonderful ...
peace, rei
on Louie Who??? (With Sixfinger's attached) by Sixfingermusic
awesome playing like always, great theme and very cool breaks!!
a little more high frequencies on the git would be nice, but I guess that's my personal taste ...
the groove is fantastic, makes one immediately feel good ...
great work man, great work!
peace, rei
on Ode to Arapaho by Spivkurl
very very creative ...
I can imagine a crazy animation movie for this track.
I guess you had a lot of fun making this, it was fun to listen for me ...
peace, rei
on lost my mind by dvox
very good guitar playing, and your voice is just brilliant ...
the drums need variation, the beat doesn't change the whole song through and that's a pity ...
but your voice ... wow ... you rock!!!
peace, rei
on drunken thoughts: (lyrical advisory) Mr E collab! by johnnygadget
and it's great to dive into your universe again ...
peace, rei
on Invasion by TysonK
a simple but very effective riff, this one rocks ...
I hope you'll have more rainy vibes in the future ...
peace, rei
on Great Tale by PaulFranke
you're a good singer man, and a good songwriter too ...
peace, rei