WongKiShoo

This is a very good start... I love this kind of DnB. Many a night I would get out of my face listening to this kinda stuff .

I'm not the best when it comes to DnB (at all) and I've only ever made one track in this genre but I'd be willing to give it a try :)

I have a DnB track here which is a couple of years old now and I've learned a lot since then: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/90912

So if you're interested email me man. ggardiner86 at aol dot com

why not just upload the full WIP here? You'll probs get more feedback from people here than on soundcloud... pretty cool track though :)

Hey there, pretty cool track you have here :)

A couple of things, the bass could do with a bit more... erm...bass lol you could try using a sub bass maybe to fatten it up a little.

And correct me if I'm wrong, but can I hear your kick drum in stereo? Or have you used reverb? I personally wouldn't use either on a kick drum, but that's just me though :)

keep at it man!

not experienced huh? lol,... well your certainly on the right track! Nothing to say in the way of criticism. I can hear a pop or two in places but nothing major... I'd stick the bpm up to 170 personally, but that's just me :)

that's an awesome vocal sample you're using, where did u get it?

Can't wait to hear the finished version!

This is pretty awesome :D

Never a boring moment. Good job

Toonz

yeah this is sweet :) love that bass line. Was that a sample that I hear played throughout or was it a funky old school tape effect plug-in over the strings and bells??

yeah mate this is pretty ruthless :D

Sorry I didn't check it out sooner I don't really pay attention the loops after I upload 'em.

Loving the drop, the beats are awesome, some really good variations on the bee line...the grimey string aint bad I guess. lol

woulda thought this woulda got more DL's and reviews than it has done so far. This is good stuff mate!

This is grimey,.. :)

Really cool track.... nasty.

The real let down though is the mix,.... it's soooo muddy. It sounds like I'm listening to it with pillows over my phones.

Hey again,...

I just thought I'd let you know I'm finished with remixing :)

here is the link:

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/111893

Thanks for the inspiration!

Toonz

Yeah I've just seen them :) and replied from the email addy i use more often... can't wait ;)

Wow! :D this is just the kind of jam I love... superbly mixed, awesome bass, brilliant percussion and excellent vocals!

Can't wait to hear the finished version. Really,.... great, great job :)

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Toonz

that piano is absolutely beautiful,... did you play the notes yourself??

If this is your first ever track it's sure a HELL of a lot better than what mine was :) ... some interesting variations.

I have visions for this track - do you mind if I use it and make a remix out of it?? :)

It's definitely different lol... I guess I didn't really know what to expect - and I'm not sure what to think either lol

But being honest, I *don't* really feel this type of melody belongs on a house track - that's not to say this project doesn't have merit, I agree with spiv - this is a fun track and it made me perceive a sort of,... distorted, alternative reality! :)

Keep it up!

Toonz

Ohhhhhhh......... you're talking about the genre moombahcore!

108bpm is perfect for that then :)

if I knew anything about producing dirty dubstep I'd be happy to help... as it is, i don't lol

This is the 2nd industrial track that I've ever heard knowingly and again I'm loving what I hear!!

The melodies are killer and it's nice to see something that doesn't just loop over and over (kind of how my work does lol)

I don't know what 'pro' industrial sounds like - but if it isn't up to this standard I'll be disappointed. Absolutely amazing.

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Hey buddy :)

It's been a while, so I thought I'd stop by and see how your music's progressing and I'm liking what I'm hearing!

Some really nice melodies going on here and I can definitely feel the jungle vibe you got going on :)

Good track structure and use of percussion like always,... it clean sounding too which is a plus...

Still lacking in bass though,... and a couple of extra synths layers would have really pushed up this production. But all in all good job my friend :)

Toonz

I absolutely adore this kind of DnB - I'm guessing you do too otherwise your track wouldn't of ended up like this lol. The best example artist I can think of that does a similar style is LTJ Bukem.... absolutely immense talent. lived a few streets away from me actually ;)

I would of liked to see a snappier kick drum in a more sort of consistent pattern and there seems to be a bit of an overlap in 1 or 2 places with the hats but aside from that this is friggin awesome :) fav'd

whoa........ There really is never a dull moment in this at all. I'm definitely up there with RotenBeats saying best house track I've heard on this site :) this is very pro...

I thought I'd drop by to see if I can learn anything for the track I'm working on and I can see there's oodles that I haven't been doing that I should definitely be *trying* to emulate.

You're my new role model :) lol

Hey this is a really cool track :)

I wasn't sure what to expect to begin with because I always think of this track http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lTzpqnBFDas which is just a classic - but you pulled it off in a cheesy kinda way! :D

I like what you've done with the synths, the arrangement is really cool, nice and clean etc...

All in all a great, fun track you have here :)

This is industrial?? I thought I done a search for House... lol but I have to say I'm glad I made the mistake :D

This is officially the 1st industrial track I've heard knowingly and I like it!

Sort out the muddiness and I think you're on to a winner :)

For some reason this track reminds me of simcity,............. lol

I can definitely hear this track in that game :) I'm not sure I would call it house though,... I'd probably say electronic personally, based on it's arrangement and instruments used.

All in all a nice track you have hear :)

Hmmmm.... tips

There's far too much to producing to give 1 or 2 tips that would make a major difference tbh. But I *do* say this to anyone that does ask...

Listen. I mean *really* listen to other people's work. Take a note of the chord progressions, every time a new instrument or sample is introduced. How that instrument interacts with the rest of the song etc etc. Listen,.... and try to 'copy' what they do.

Watch lots of tutorials for your DAW if you have the patience. Read articles, download books.

I've been doing this for 8 years now, but most of my progress has been made only in the last year because I tried to learn everything the hard way. I got a lot better because I studied.

That's probably the best advice anyone can give you :)

Well, if you're looking to get a producer to turn these vox into dubstep you'll probably find you'll need to completely re-record them. I clocked the Bpm of this @ 108... dubstep's usually at 140bpm.

As to the vocals themselves, not bad :) not bad at all... just a suggestion, why not post some acapella's? You'll get all kinds of producers hitting your stuff up with all kinds of weird and wonderful results :)

This is going to be a similar review to the last one.

MORE!

Again, I don't hear any bass. No track of this genre is complete without a bass line. Even a simple bass line goes a long way to making a track complete.

Again the melody is really nice, but needs more variation. You won't find any professional tracks that rely solely on one melody played throughout the track.

Again, a lot of potential - but not finished yet lol

Toonz

You've got some really nice ideas here :) the potential is definitely there - I wouldn't call this finished though... You need to do more

As nice as that arp melody is, there's too much of it. Try adding some variation to the loop so it doesn't become tiresome to the ears, chop it up a little or something. And maybe add another motif too so there's more variation.

This track needs more bass. Particularly when the track drops. I don't think I hear any bass besides during the build up's... (I also think I hear a note or two that clashes with the pad)

I see you're new to the game of producing so nothing's going to be perfect yet. You may want to read some article's/watch some tutorials about Equalizers (EQ). Learning how to do mix down properly is a good skill to have and really bring your tracks to life...

Like I say, this has a lot of potential to be a great track, but it's not finished yet, so keep at it ;)

Toonz