WongKiShoo

love it,... chris brown step aside.

This is the first EVER glitch track I have ever heard in my life...

I have to say it's kinda weird, yet likable in a deranged, filthy way.

There's a lot that went into this I can see that. Must have taken some doing...

I *think* you done a good job, I have no base for reference sooo... lol

Ok,... So you might not like me much after this but the aim of this review is for you to hopefully take something away from this and improve.

From the start - The vocals do not seem to mesh well with either the beat or the plunky melody. They almost seem like they were forced together, which is never a good thing.

The main melody is nice, but there is a definite "gap" between the two phrases which tells me these are probably looped samples you put in right?? It's a nice idea, but it's a better idea to use your own loops as these have a FAR greater ability to blend with the song. If you aren't that experienced making melodies just experiment. Practice makes perfect after all :D

There also seems to be a notable lack of a solid bass line, which no track is complete without.

around 1:32 when the vocal kicks in again, not sure if it was an upload issue, but again a very apparent glitch. you can hear it for yourself :)

If I were you, I would completely ditch the vocals and any pre-made loops and concentrate more on track structure. I would suggest listening to some of your favourite tracks, look to see how they are set out.

A Classic Example of song structure is below:
intro (4 bars),
verse 1 (8 bars),
chorus (8 bars),
verse 2 (8 bars),
chorus (8 bars),
bridge (8 bars),
chorus (8 bars),
outro (8 bars).

Maybe try to build your next track to those guidelines above and listen carefully to your favourite tracks and try to "copy" them so to speak.

I really do hope this helps,... But if you want any more advice, feel free to ask :)

Sorry for the harsh review

Toonz