Phyruis

Phyruis

NOthing to see hear
Ipswich, United Kingdom
Joined : 5th Jan 2010 - 16 years ago
Phyruis comments on tracks

Phyruis has posted 383 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Phyruis
Phyruis 23rd Feb 2010 10:45 - 16 years ago

on Ghost Baby by Finn69
ok there are some nice ideas here brother.. that snare needs a little more middle sounds like you've compressed the hell outta it.. the whole track just seems to fast whats the bpm? 200? there are some nice ideas it just feels a little rushed drum and bass doesn't need to be that fast.. the bass is very nice a treating growl runs through the track like a pulse.. I didn't really pick up to much on those fx or to much of an atmosphere maybe it's just me... I really think the track has potential maybe you should check out some of the ep's released on black hoe records.. tvg hates tvg is awesome and does atmosphere and slamming beats very well.. keep 'em coming brother
Finn69
Finn69 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks for the crits man! yeah that middle drum loop was an over compressed one i just lifted out of another tune i made as audio, working on changing the snare and getting more ambient fx and will repost. oh and black hoe is awesome! thanks for switching me onto it brother.

peace
Phyruis
Phyruis 19th Feb 2010 20:23 - 16 years ago

on The Bad Guy by DJSourDeezul
there are some very nice ideas here brother.. it all sounds a little muffled.. you got a heavy compressor on it? maybe a heavy amount of limiter? the whole track works well don't get me wrong.. and I would be quite happy to put this on my mp3 player.. just maybe a little extra care to the final product.. keep 'em coming brother...

I like how ultrabase faved the track but didn't take the time to review.. nice!!!
Phyruis
Phyruis 18th Feb 2010 19:03 - 16 years ago

on Silva by CatDowns
wow intro with a drum and bass sound to it .. the track has almost a bjork feel to it. very nice again just that final mix down.. I us fruity to mix down my tracks adding stereo enhancement in places then I run the exported track thru t-racks (when its not playing me up).. nice track keep 'em coming sister
Phyruis
Phyruis 18th Feb 2010 18:40 - 16 years ago

on Dddy das right by CatDowns
I agree with you pop isn't a dirty word especially if its done like this .. there are some great ideas here just gotta work on that final product.. the levels needs to be a little lower to stop the clicking and distortion in that vocal maybe some reverb on that just a little nothing too George Micheal (loads of reverb!!!).. some really great ideas keep 'em coming
CatDowns
CatDowns replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks so much for listening! I'm hoping to get some better equipment (at this point, just a decent affordable microphone). What do you use for mixing.
Again, thanks!
Phyruis
Phyruis 13th Feb 2010 09:55 - 16 years ago

on Dubstep 1 by Apieceoftofu
oooh some nice ideas here brother.. a some points the bass just over shadows everything so maybe take that down in the mix a bit.. again the bass needs some extra thickness maybe adding another at the lower end of the middle..for me a a nice track given a little more work it could be great.. keep 'em coming brother
Apieceoftofu
Apieceoftofu replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanx dude... love to hear some things to improve on. will mess about with maybe just getting a diff EQ on the current bass or try adding a lower/mid bass to fatten things up. cheers m8
Phyruis
Phyruis 8th Feb 2010 15:34 - 16 years ago

on Obama - 4th Track v2 by obama31
a nice start... very chase and status.. just missing those reeces and maybe a touch more sub to lift that low end.. also the track is quite quiet.. maybe it's just the player.. I think with just a little more work this could be a great track adding a few more drops and more atmosphere would do that... keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 8th Feb 2010 15:30 - 16 years ago

on milk by ricky945
some very interesting ideas... the pad/violin in quite high in the track.. personally I would take that down a bit in the mix.. as a whole the track is missing that sub that you as a listener would associate with jungle.. but as a work in progress its a great start.. keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 8th Feb 2010 15:27 - 16 years ago

on gmm fetal warning - dj fluffi remix by djfluffi
some nice ideas here brother... took a while to get going.. but I like the atmosphere on the track.. maybe it is a little too sparse in places and could do with a fatter bass line.. enjoyable listen now the less.. keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 5th Feb 2010 11:14 - 16 years ago

on top bidder by thaddeus4th1
ok .. there are some great ideas here brother.. instead of a review where I repeat myself.. I'm gonna point ya in to this web site.. the tutorials are excellent..

http://www.boyinaband.com/tutorials/dubstep-tutorial/

they helped me no end... keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 5th Feb 2010 11:09 - 16 years ago

on figure it by thaddeus4th1
ok for me there are some nice ideas here but.. the drum track is to high in your mix so the listener finds it harder to hear anything else.. dubstep is normally set at about 140bpm so this track does sound a little too slow.. ya wobbles are nice but they have no thickness try adding a sub using the same pattern and it'll add that thickness you'll hear from most of the greats.. like I said there are some nice ideas here brother it maybe just needs abit more research and work.. keep 'em coming
thaddeus4th1
thaddeus4th1 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
word thanks bro! i noticed i needed a sub in there just couldnt figure it :), the 2 drum machines i use are set at 1/16 and 1/32 creating a 70bpm/140bpm split cause 70's one half of 140 see. huge help man, much appreciated!
Phyruis
Phyruis 3rd Feb 2010 09:07 - 16 years ago

on Flow & Tell by SovereignKonceptz
some nice ideas here brother... the drum track is nice but a little too slow for my tastes.. but I'm finding that more and more lately with the rise of dub step there seems to be a crossing of genres and drum and bass is morphing into some kinda different monster..the bassline is ok but like you said you got to put filters and stuff on it so... nice ideas let me know when it's finished and up and I'll give it a proper review.. keep 'em coming brother.. and definitely finish this one
Phyruis
Phyruis 3rd Feb 2010 08:47 - 16 years ago

on Cold nights by JakeSavage
some nice ideas here brother .. the drum track is excellent nice and clean maybe just needs some more layering to add thickness.. the bass line is great goes a bit wayward towards the end but ah well... this kinda made me think more dubstep than drum and bass.. dont get me wrong I liked it nice chilled track with a great sub driven bassline.. keep 'em coming brother..

would like to be more helpful but I dont know what programs your using as you haven't put it on your profile... just a tip .. if you want good reviews you gotta give people the ability to help you through info on your profile
JakeSavage
JakeSavage replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanx man!

Some good advices there, gonna put some more work into this one. Time to update the profile then!

Using Fl 9

Peace
Phyruis
Phyruis 30th Jan 2010 10:01 - 16 years ago

on G.R.O.W. by LittleRailTrouble
ok.. so I'm guessing your pretty new at all this music making stuff and your enjoying it... this for ME ain't dubstep.. wheres the wobbles? wheres the sub? everything is abit mono tone.. samey.. your levels are abit off too cause the track is quiet but that might just be the looperman player..

you might wanna check out this site

http://www.boyinaband.com/tutorials/reason-4-tutorials/

I cant really help you any more cause I don't know what program your using because you haven't put it on your profile.. to get any form of useful advice people need this sort of info...

dont but disheartened... there's definitely some promise.. keep 'em coming
LittleRailTrouble
LittleRailTrouble replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the honesty man, i was awaiting a genre comment. Mainly because i dont really know what i would call it. Im into dubstep like i could never explain so thats why i put it there and if you would mind telling me where you think it would fit id appreciate it. Im using fruity loops 8. and yes im brand new at it like 4th day on it. I like the track but i agree there isnt enough flow and my individual samples seem almost awkward. But i like the progress im making since my first track. Thanks for the feedback man.
Phyruis
Phyruis 30th Jan 2010 09:50 - 16 years ago

on Sphere of Conciousness by Verge
some nice ideas here brother well executed.. this is more the quality i expect from your good self.. great production.. that bass is just sick... what did you use? I would how ever ay that after a while it got a LITTLE (i mean super little) samey .. maybe you could add in a few more drops.. just a thought.. and thats me being picky... once again great track.. nice to see ya back to your best... keep 'em coming brother
Verge
Verge replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I used NI's Massive synth, almost a simple Sawtooth reese with compression and put through a Bandpass filter. Layered with a sub, but that much is obvious. :p

Glad to hear I'm making easily listenable music again, instead of that one randomly low quality piece of work the other week, haha. Also glad you liked it. :D
Phyruis
Phyruis 29th Jan 2010 22:49 - 16 years ago

on Selekta [Glitch Trips Remix] by SovereignKonceptz
some nice ideas here brother.. the wobbles are nice but they just lack something which I think would come from thickness maybe paying some more attention to a sub would fix that.. the drums probably need a little more reverb just to give them a little more edge.. don't get me wrong I love the track.. just needs a little more work.. keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 29th Jan 2010 22:38 - 16 years ago

on Coffee Clamp by Spivkurl
great track brother.. once again that nod to the 80's becoming a bit of a theme with you.. love those stabs at around 2:40 very grand master flash.. congrats on the 41 reviews.. enjoyed every second great job.. keep 'em coming brother
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Sorry for the late reply! Hey thanks for the kind words! I definitely like 80's music, I'm glad you agree that it shows through in my tracks. Yeah I'm impressed that this one has gotten so many reviews, must be the title or something, heh. I appreciate your review my friend!
Phyruis
Phyruis 29th Jan 2010 22:28 - 16 years ago

on The meaningless story of Wilson Cheval by FrenchKid18
some nice ideas here brother...the production needs a little work but I'm sure you already know that.. the vocals need to come down in the mix to stop that clicking.. other than that like i've already said there are some nice ideas.. keep 'em coming brother
FrenchKid18
FrenchKid18 replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the review.You're right concerning the production,I highly appreciate your constructive criticism.I remixed the track and added a lead guitar track and Wayne added some percussions if you wanna listen.
Thanks again
French Kid
Phyruis
Phyruis 29th Jan 2010 22:20 - 16 years ago

on Proper Action [full] by Deterrorate
first off I have to say this type of music ain't my bag at all.. I was there in the hay day of hardcore.. then called happy hardcore (well here in the uk) there are some good ideas here just need some more work... that kick drum needs to be a bit more varied, sounds like a 909.. am I right? extend it a bit push the envelope because at the mo it's a little mono tone ... single dimensional ..ya know.. that synth that kicks in at 1:40 is great and the synth that follows.. as I say it's not a bad track it just needs a little more work.. keep 'em coming brother
Deterrorate
Deterrorate replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks man, and i have no clue what drum it is, they're all loops from here XD youtube angerfist "take you back" or "Riotstarter" those are the the main songs inspiring my sound, that style anyhow thanks for the critique give my other tracks a lis and tell me what you think Thanks

Deterrorate
Phyruis
Phyruis 29th Jan 2010 22:06 - 16 years ago

on Tourette Synthdrone by DFury
loved the start to this brother.. nice bass.. the track is little on the low side maybe just adjust that master volume slightly.. love the acapella nicely used... for me this track just lack a good reece bass line other than that ... it's nicely produced..

keep 'em coming brother
DFury
DFury replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the volume tip, will do. I'll look into a reese bassline, could be interesting....
Phyruis
Phyruis 23rd Jan 2010 10:45 - 16 years ago

on Flatline by Kazm
there are some really nice ideas here brother.. just for me the beep over takes everything in the track i get that you want it to be a focal point but it's just a little too high in the mix.. ya bass line all though deep and wobbly as it should be.. is a little muddy maybe it's because you using effects on your sub(something jahknow taught me you shouldn't do... he really is quite a knowledgeable fellow ) or maybe it's that your just too low on the scale I don't know for sure.. the drum track is a good mix of sounds perhaps need a touch less low end cause remember anything in that low end is going to take away from ya sub.. having said all that I don't dislike the track.. these aren't criticisms they're just suggestions for a few little tweaks...

keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 21st Jan 2010 15:15 - 16 years ago

on Broken down beatle by jahknow
nice glitchy feel to this track brother.. almost like the stuff trent reznor did for the se7en soundtrack.. some very kool ideas quite abstract.. an enjoyable listen almost cinematic flavour.. keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 21st Jan 2010 11:10 - 16 years ago

on Maybe Today You Can Live by Verge
some nice ideas here brother..I can see where you where going with it but as has been said before in your other reviews it's a little bit mono tone and nothing really happens until well over 4 mins in.. the drum sounds are well produced with need some layering to give you the definition of the kick and snare.. as the other reviews have also said there is a serious lackage of sub here which would again give you definition... quite unlike you brother.. nevermind.. keep 'em coming
Verge
Verge replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Yeah, I don't really know what happened with the sub in this one. It all sounded fine until I heard it afterwards. o.o

Will eventually upload the fixed version. Maybe. Sometime... >>
Phyruis
Phyruis 18th Jan 2010 13:51 - 16 years ago

on Unknown by Bifta
ok..... so.... I've listened to your three latest tracks and with out sounding like I'm repeating myself that wobble seems to be too high for me.. also this seems to be part one or two of still unknown.. are they the same track? again without trying to repeat myself you are gonna need more layer on ya bass.. the subs are right there but the rest seem weak.. but there are some great ideas here brother keep 'em coming
Bifta
Bifta replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks for the listen and the advise, still working on it yes there both the same track but still unknown is a more recent edit/attempt
Phyruis
Phyruis 18th Jan 2010 13:37 - 16 years ago

on Still Unknown by Bifta
there are some nice ideas here brother.. it just seems to go in to much of a straight line..not enough variation ya know? for me your wobble is a little to high maybe take it down past C3 in your piano roll and maybe just a tiny bit too clean.. it might just be it needs a few more layers or maybe putting through some kinda vocoder or ring mod.. I don't know.. maybe it's just me.. anyway like I've said I like your ideas.. keep 'em coming brother
Phyruis
Phyruis 15th Jan 2010 20:06 - 16 years ago

on Minor Setback by Spivkurl
some nice ideas here brother I've always liked the idea of taking dnb to other place and this track does that.. perfectly.. fantastic production as always.. very 80's theme to it but at the same time add those pendulum influences.. loved it .. keep 'em coming brother
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Hey thanks for stopping to check out this track! I'm glad you could get into my odd style of DnB. 80's theme, huh, I guess I know what you mean. Thanks very much for the kind review!
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