Description : More DnB. Sounds pretty good, but I finished it so quickly it feels like it should sound worse. :p Anywho, enjoy!
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mate your track sound ok but i would make you drums louder plus i dident feel a build up it kinda sounds very hollow maybe you should put a few more samples in there but apart from that you have a good structure of a tune but you need to nurture it a little but any hows well done yeah
check out one of my tune its called dark divided if you get time
Hey man nice track. This is Neopanda, i record under the name Teksketch. Remember? you wanted to collab awhile back. Anyway, Nice tune, sounds good! respect.
peace
some nice ideas here brother..I can see where you where going with it but as has been said before in your other reviews it's a little bit mono tone and nothing really happens until well over 4 mins in.. the drum sounds are well produced with need some layering to give you the definition of the kick and snare.. as the other reviews have also said there is a serious lackage of sub here which would again give you definition... quite unlike you brother.. nevermind.. keep 'em coming
I listened 1st then read the reviews u already had and Nick is spot on. The basis of a good track is in there but it sounds kinda hollow at the minute and needs beefed up and filled out.
Intro is strong; I like the cymbal that keeps beat. Phasers are pretty solid, but it is a bit slow to start. I'm guessing it will pick up soon.
Build with the cymbal ring into a drop fits well, although the sound seems a bit emptier than I expected it to. Once the tempo doubles up the first time, I'm getting ready to go, but the sound still seems a bit slower than I expect.
It continues building nicely through the faster drum pattern expositions. The cymbal that's used before you go into the next section is great for adding to a build. The changed drums at ~1:50 work pretty well, and the volume of the background noises fits.
The high pitched sample at 2:45ish is great, it has me ready to take off with the song. I like the changes to the background noise; i'm not sure if it's a filter or a melody change, but it sounds good.
The slow down at 3:15 is a bit abrupt. It could use a large noise with a lot of reverb or something similar to bring it down more evenly. Unless you're opening up a DJ to bring in their own sounds by playing on the cross fader, the song might need something else to carry through this section.
At 4:30, the beeping type sound is a good way to bring it back; I like it.
I've been waiting for the drums to really take off. At around 5:00, it's still a bit less drum and bass-y than I expected. It might be my setup, but I'm still noticing the bass is somewhat empty.
The song kind of drags toward the end. I think it needs something else to tie it together for it to really feel complete to me.
Thanks for sharing. I hope this "this is what I was thinking while listening to your track" was useful. If not, ignore the parts that suck and take the parts that don't. Thanks for sharing.
Very useful, actually. I went back and fixed up most of what you have said here, but I've also been slack in updating the track. Waiting for that upload to finish is always a killer for me. :p
I did manage to upload a new track though, which also took your review into consideration. If you have time, I'd love for you to give that one a listen so I could get some more criticism from you. :D
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Intro is strong; I like the cymbal that keeps beat. Phasers are pretty solid, but it is a bit slow to start. I'm guessing it will pick up soon.
Build with the cymbal ring into a drop fits well, although the sound seems a bit emptier than I expected it to. Once the tempo doubles up the first time, I'm getting ready to go, but the sound still seems a bit slower than I expect.
It continues building nicely through the faster drum pattern expositions. The cymbal that's used before you go into the next section is great for adding to a build. The changed drums at ~1:50 work pretty well, and the volume of the background noises fits.
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The slow down at 3:15 is a bit abrupt. It could use a large noise with a lot of reverb or something similar to bring it down more evenly. Unless you're opening up a DJ to bring in their own sounds by playing on the cross fader, the song might need something else to carry through this section.
At 4:30, the beeping type sound is a good way to bring it back; I like it.
I've been waiting for the drums to really take off. At around 5:00, it's still a bit less drum and bass-y than I expected. It might be my setup, but I'm still noticing the bass is somewhat empty.
The song kind of drags toward the end. I think it needs something else to tie it together for it to really feel complete to me.
Thanks for sharing. I hope this "this is what I was thinking while listening to your track" was useful. If not, ignore the parts that suck and take the parts that don't. Thanks for sharing.
I did manage to upload a new track though, which also took your review into consideration. If you have time, I'd love for you to give that one a listen so I could get some more criticism from you. :D