Flatline - Kazm

there are some really nice ideas here brother.. just for me the beep over takes everything in the track i get that you want it to be a focal point but it's just a little too high in the mix.. ya bass line all though deep and wobbly as it should be.. is a little muddy maybe it's because you using effects on your sub(something jahknow taught me you shouldn't do... he really is quite a knowledgeable fellow ) or maybe it's that your just too low on the scale I don't know for sure.. the drum track is a good mix of sounds perhaps need a touch less low end cause remember anything in that low end is going to take away from ya sub.. having said all that I don't dislike the track.. these aren't criticisms they're just suggestions for a few little tweaks...

keep 'em coming brother