there are some great ideas here I love that rumble in the intro and that drop around 3 mins is great but my question to you is why didn't you drop it earlier?.. the low end doesn't really fuss me because the track works so well... nice track brother.. keep 'em coming
I really let the tune do it's own thing and tried not to rush it too much. I thought the delayed drop added a little suspense but looking back there is no suspense when people have no idea what's coming, right? One of my biggest weaknesses us sequential flow with my tunes. Without following some sort of template they can get quite hectic. Though I didn't use a template of any sort for this track I think it turned out fairly decent. Thanks for the review bro!!!
there are some great ideas here.. you got that very old skool prodigy sound rocking here which makes it very relevant to the times we find our selves in.. if you were to add reese or two and definitely a sub this tune would really rock for me those missing elements make this tune a nearly tune.. if you know what I mean? anyway keep 'em coming brother
some nice ideas here brother.. love the intro.. nice production the sounds are all great and coming through lovely the track just seem to lack some to give it that edge can quite put my finger one what it is.. maybe a heavy sub would shake it up a bit.. keep 'em coming brother
Thanks, appreciate it!
I think definitely put a thick juicy bass:))) and I made it, but before uploading I decided to remove it, because I somehow did not fit!
but in any case, thanks!
some nice ideas here but some of the levels are just all wrong.. in fact at time it made it quite uncomfortable to listen.. maybe it's a reverb thing.. you seem to have shed loads on that gated snyth... as I say some nice ideas just need a bit more work on the production side.. keep 'em coming brother
I know the levels aren't where they should be. That is why I labeled it Beta. I still haven't mastered it yet. Adjusting the levels is my last step to finishing it. Thank you for taking time to comment.
some nice ideas here .. was waiting for the big bass kick in but it just didn't happen ..some nice production thus far it's just way too short.. let me know when you've finished it.. keep 'em coming brother
some nice idea here brother.. but I have to say I spent the whole track waiting for those phat wobbles and heart shaking sub... I like the draw on early industrial music very ggfh.. great production maybe ease up on the reverb a bit but still I enjoyed it.. keep 'em coming brother
there are some great ideas here.. I would try layering those drums a little bit.. add an extra kick snare loop general most drum and bass loops the snares and kicks are in the same place this would add some thickness to those drums and some power.. really the same goes for the bass it just lacks thickness theres nothing wrong with the tracks structure.. all the drops,vocals,drums and bass are all in the right place the just need that thickness to add power to the sound... having said all that I did enjoy the listen.. keep 'em coming brother
there are some nice ideas here.. the tracks seems to need a bit more speed.. what is the bpm? but seriously hats off to you for trying to sink up vocals in reason I find it totally frustrating.. your wobble seem to be lacking the thickness I would expect of dubstep.. what method are you using? and the sub feels out of time with them.. I sure these are all thing you already know... keep 'em coming brother
yer the bpm is like 135 i fiddled with it for quite a while an decided it was best at 135. its more of a chilled dubstep feel but thanks for the review mate im hoping to get it revamped soon hope you can listen again.
there are some nice ideas here brother.. just is quite repetitive and short.. the production is good it just need a little more love added to it.. nice ideas.. keep 'em coming brother
Hi Numberjack Your track ''Chilli Breeze'' , i used some parts of it is really a good job.And it is an inspiration for this track.We are adding nice sounds together for the ears of universe sons.
Peace and happy weekend my brother.
please tell me you have a label.. my my my this is sick.. proper sick..this is professional stuff brother special ya know? up there with borgore etc.. sir I salute you.. keep 'em coming brother..
Well thanks.. I dont think ive ever had a review so quickly. I havent got a label but I would like to try making some money out of this music lark.. nice to be compared with the likes of borgore thank you. i have to say i think my music has come on leaps and bounds over the last few months. ill check your tracks, try and leave a review im just awful at them which is why i dont much.. thanks again :)
gotta start by saying I'm not a big fan of trance far too happy for my tastes... for me the whole track seems a bit sparse maybe it needs some kinda heavier pad underneath it... because what you've got there at the moment doesn't seem to be covering.. the over all production is nice but needs a little tweaking here and there which I suspect you know that already being as good as you are my friend.. keep 'em coming brother
I see what you mean, definitely. The track being sparse was for the most part intentional. I will take your comments under advisement if I go back and rework this track. I appreciate the honest feedback!
some nice ideas here brother.. love that throaty pad as a lead at the start... not sure of the genre but I'm not the genre police so.. ah well!! over all a well produced track would have like a little more speed but I liked it.. keep 'em coming brother
Aha - tempo! Yeah, I think the DnB tends to be quite a bit faster, and yet this is driven really by drums and bass...so I don't know. I might be pushing the generic definition here. In my previous response I said I'm not quite sure about ht tempo either, so I'm glad you called it. Makes me think my impulse is probably correct here. Thanks for the encouragement!
hey brother there are some nice ideas here .. the bass for me is just a little too low on the scale if you pick it up too around f2 it'll sound soooo much better and the kick drum needs to come down in the mix... maybe try some reverb on those drums just an idea... anyway like I said some nice ideas but just needs a little extra work for my tastes.. keep 'em coming brother
oh my... this sounds like like miss piggy on a smack fueled night out.. so dirty.. for me I just wish it was a little longer.. but very nice work.. great production maybe you could do with a little more low end (sub it up) but nice... keep 'em coming brother
yeah your right actually it probably could do with some more sub. And Im intentionally making shorter songs now, because I have a tendancy to go on for ever. And people lose interest that way so, its good that you wanted more. :)
nice.. I love the eastern feel those instruments really get my hairs on the back of my neck up... this track is dub smoking a houkka in Marrakesh brother.. nice I love it.. you work those effects so well beautiful... keep 'em coming brother
Hey Numberjack - cheers again for creating that little game! This is one of my first 3 tracks made in this medium, and probably the one that convinced me to continue doing the "solo" approach. Thanks for the review and encouragement, my UK brother!
this is very kool brother.. got a trippy primal scream feel to it... or early chemical brothers..a solid track with it roots in the 90's electro loved the vocals.. theres some very nice production going on here.. always liked your stuff haven't listened to much since I've been back here on looperman.. gonna check out some more when I get time.. keep 'em coming brother
I wasn't aware you were away, which says something about the volume of traffic here, doesn't it? First, welcome back brother! Second, thanks for the encouraging words on this one, and I look forward to your feedback on others. I'll certainly be visiting your music again, sooner than later! Cheers.
firstly I gotta say trance aint my cup 'o tea but.. I liked this as much as I could trance.. those vocals need that high end trimmed at times they get a little too much also there are a few small timing issues at times... sorry probably not what you wanted to read but I have to be honest cause thats my style .. theres your review brother.. now remember to pass it on.. keep 'em coming
That's exactly what I wanted to read. I love when people can pinpoint problems in the track that I missed. I'll eq the vocals later this week, I didn't even think to do that, and I'll also put a volume automation on them. The timing issues are just lazyness on my part, plain and simple. I didn't want to chop all the vocals apart, so I left them as is and used the bpm from the acapella. Thanks again for the advice!
house step eh? I like it.. but I keep quiet around jahknow dubstep's his baby ya know!! tee hee... this is a nice track .. some of the wobbles are nice but just need a bit of thickness because those vocals are so thick you need some to compliment them.. makes a nice change to hear new refreshing sounds..nice keep 'em coming brother
some nice ideas here brother.. can totally hear those influences creeping in there.. thats about all I can say about it.. its well produced to a point but I can't give you proper feedback or advice if I don't know what your using to make you music.. your profile is empty brother.. try updating it .. maybe add a description to your track if your english aint good then just write it in your mother tongue theres sure to be plenty of people here that speak it.. sorry side tracked.. as I say nice but thats all I can say.. keep 'em coming .. remember you get out what you put in
firstly I have to say trance ain't my thing really.. but having said that I did enjoy listening to this.. that break down at 3:28 ish needs to be longer take it down to the wire then bang knock their heads off you know?... nice track brother well produced for the most part maybe the high end could come down abit but thats just me picking holes.. keep 'em coming brother
wow.. not the hardcore I remember.. was into the whole happy hardcore thing back in the day 88/94.. I do have one question what separates hardcore from trance?.... this track is well produced but screaming out for a vocal.. nice keep 'em coming
thanks for your review..to answer your question, it really does depend on personal enjoyment genre wise, i think what seperates hardcore from trance is that trance is slower, for a start, and has occuring basslines, where as hardcore is much faster and the bassline is just a boing boing appost to a boing b boi b boing boing..if ya follow? lol..
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I think definitely put a thick juicy bass:))) and I made it, but before uploading I decided to remove it, because I somehow did not fit!
but in any case, thanks!
lol!! Now think back to it lol!!
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i modified it and i think it sounds better now
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