theHumps

Nice track man, this rocked!! Mix was pretty good and I liked the sound of your guitar. I could hear Dave Grohl singing over this. Well done!

Wayne

The acoustic guitar was great in this. Now that you sent me all those video links I can see where you are coming from with your music. This is just a little different than your other tracks, kinda rockin on this one Vicen, I like it a lot!

Wayne

This is nice, great recording! A nice track to just chillout to and it put me in a happy mood, very uplifting. Nice job with this!

Wayne

Cool track, great synths, pretty intense track you have here. The bass synth was hard hitting and the bells and circus sounds added a lot to the track. Nicely done!

Wayne

Nice, has a Fisherman's Blues feel to it by the Waterboys. The slide sound great, so many things I like about this! Would love to hear some vocals on it. The change to the Am is great, love it, classic blues progression!!

Wayne

The mixing and mastering is nice on this. You are using the whole stereo field, the mix is wide, so nice and it seperates the instruments nicely.

Here is a tip. In Audition, use the chorus(in the modulation tab) to spread each track out even more. Push all the sliders on top to the left except spread. If you do that and adjust the controls at the bottom part of the plugin you can widen or narrow the guitars(vocals, bass...) and if they are panned left and right you will make them fill the space even more. Experiment with this, it's a great way to make things sound big and full, especialy if you only use a couple instruments.

Nice job, with this!

Wayne

I like the effort you put into the vocal track, very creative and raw, nice layering of the tracks. NV can put a rocker together and the vocals seem to fit the music.

Just a suggestion on the mix, go for clearity in the mixing of the track over volume. I think if you brought the volume down a bit, the individual tracks will have more dynamics and impact, right now they are all at 11 on the scale, fighting for who will be the loudest in the song. I had to turn the vol down to about 60% and lost the feel and impact of the song. Maybe check your compression levels too, if your mix is good you shouldn't have to add much compression. Hopefully you take this as constructive criticism as it was meant. :)

Wayne

I think you did alright on this track. You need to keep working and working at it and things will keep improving, that rule applies to everyone including me. You have your own style and approach to lyrics, some people may criticise you but keep expanding and working on your style.

The music, vocals and mix were decent, you should be proud of what you've done here!!

Happy holidays, doughi boy!

Wayne

Nice voice, pretty song! I think you could have the vocals out front a little more or the piano back a little more in the mix. Not much though but I just wanted to hear your voice louder because is was just right!!

Wayne

You certainly set a dark mood and tone with the music and at the same time made the vocals just as dark by adding the effects.

I like the idea, your wife has a great voice! I look forward to hearing what you do to this!

Wayne

Cool, sounds great and the tracks are creatively put together. Good luck with the ep!

Nice mix, that's the first thing I noticed, sounds great. I like what you did with the vocals, extreme but still understandable. Liked the lead section of the song, the two instrument parts worked great together. Nice snappy beat, cool track K.

Wayne

Wow, Allen V is so cool, he can play great and feel out a song and play the right thing all the time! I think this is nicely constructed and a catchy song, the flute was awesome!! Nice track Vicen!

Wayne

Wow, this is raw, from the mix right down to the individual tracks. Crazy azz singing and loud guitars, that's what real good rock music should have. Well that's coming from an old school guy.

Gave this a few listens, pretty good intensity, the guitars really set the tone and sound great.

Wayne

Very nice composition, dramatic. It's very well thought out and cleaverly put together. Maybe lower the little compression just a little, sounds a bit hot. Cool track though, I enjoyed it!

Wayne

It feels like 60' psychodellic music done with todays trance instruments. Great first effort and welcome to the loop! Sounds like the drums could come up a bit in the mix, just to give more impact and maybe widen them a bit so they fill more of the space. Interesting track though and I enjoyed it.

Wayne

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Ya, a bowl or four alway helps!!haha

What I meant by widening is that the drums sound like the drum instruments could be individually panned little wider. They are a bit I guess, just my own picky opinion, that's all, haha, no biggie!! Thanks for swinging by my site, cheers!

Yup, that sounds better!!!!!!

I liked the guitar riffs playing thru it. Nice song, thought the vocal choir pads were fitting. This really needs some vocals, I think that would complete this. Nice to see you mixing things up, this is different than some of the music I've listened to of yours. Keep up the great work Waper!!!

Ya, this is nice, a great original christmas track. I thought the music was upbeat and snappy and the vocals were great all around. Nice job on this collab Waper, what a sweet track!

Wayne

I've loved this song the first time I heard Marcy Plaground play it and you did an interesting remix. The vocals were great. Nice tempo change from the original. Creative track!

Wayne

Man, you come from the other side of the street with your musical thoughts, haha. I don't really think I could produce something like this, I just don't think this way, ha. It's very creative with a cool intro. Nice breaks and the intro and voice samples in the track worked nicely with this. Your synths are too cool. The arrangement is well thought out and interesting for sure.

I don't isten to much music like this but this was a treat!

Great job D!!

Wayne

This is pretty good, the drums rocked!! Dnb is something I've been trying to listen to a little more. There are some cinematic aspects to this song and some nice changes. Lot's of energy, this got me going this morning, my first track of the day, I'm awake now. Thanks!

Wayne

I like reggae that expresses the maker's personality and is different from other more mainstream reggae. Your track is different and was alright. Keep working it out, look forward to more tracks, keep going!

Wayne

Wow, some nice synth work in this one, thelead synth was great. Pretty solid track, nice mix, lots to keep my ears happy. Great club track!

Wayne

Dang this is cool!! I liked the vocals/singing a lot, worked perfectly with the beat. At first wasn't sure about the beginning but I soon realized you were bringing it up, it worked ok. Catchy track, I liked it, nice pella too!

Wayne

Dang, this is nice, great buildup of instruments. The keys sounded cool and I'm always up for some tamborine! Nice melody through the whole song. I like the track overall, I listened to it several times. Nice bass sound.

Wayne