theHumps

I like the effort you put into the vocal track, very creative and raw, nice layering of the tracks. NV can put a rocker together and the vocals seem to fit the music.

Just a suggestion on the mix, go for clearity in the mixing of the track over volume. I think if you brought the volume down a bit, the individual tracks will have more dynamics and impact, right now they are all at 11 on the scale, fighting for who will be the loudest in the song. I had to turn the vol down to about 60% and lost the feel and impact of the song. Maybe check your compression levels too, if your mix is good you shouldn't have to add much compression. Hopefully you take this as constructive criticism as it was meant. :)

Wayne

I think you did alright on this track. You need to keep working and working at it and things will keep improving, that rule applies to everyone including me. You have your own style and approach to lyrics, some people may criticise you but keep expanding and working on your style.

The music, vocals and mix were decent, you should be proud of what you've done here!!

Happy holidays, doughi boy!

Wayne

Nice voice, pretty song! I think you could have the vocals out front a little more or the piano back a little more in the mix. Not much though but I just wanted to hear your voice louder because is was just right!!

Wayne

You certainly set a dark mood and tone with the music and at the same time made the vocals just as dark by adding the effects.

I like the idea, your wife has a great voice! I look forward to hearing what you do to this!

Wayne

Cool, sounds great and the tracks are creatively put together. Good luck with the ep!

Nice mix, that's the first thing I noticed, sounds great. I like what you did with the vocals, extreme but still understandable. Liked the lead section of the song, the two instrument parts worked great together. Nice snappy beat, cool track K.

Wayne

Wow, Allen V is so cool, he can play great and feel out a song and play the right thing all the time! I think this is nicely constructed and a catchy song, the flute was awesome!! Nice track Vicen!

Wayne

Wow, this is raw, from the mix right down to the individual tracks. Crazy azz singing and loud guitars, that's what real good rock music should have. Well that's coming from an old school guy.

Gave this a few listens, pretty good intensity, the guitars really set the tone and sound great.

Wayne

Very nice composition, dramatic. It's very well thought out and cleaverly put together. Maybe lower the little compression just a little, sounds a bit hot. Cool track though, I enjoyed it!

Wayne

It feels like 60' psychodellic music done with todays trance instruments. Great first effort and welcome to the loop! Sounds like the drums could come up a bit in the mix, just to give more impact and maybe widen them a bit so they fill more of the space. Interesting track though and I enjoyed it.

Wayne

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Ya, a bowl or four alway helps!!haha

What I meant by widening is that the drums sound like the drum instruments could be individually panned little wider. They are a bit I guess, just my own picky opinion, that's all, haha, no biggie!! Thanks for swinging by my site, cheers!

Yup, that sounds better!!!!!!

I liked the guitar riffs playing thru it. Nice song, thought the vocal choir pads were fitting. This really needs some vocals, I think that would complete this. Nice to see you mixing things up, this is different than some of the music I've listened to of yours. Keep up the great work Waper!!!

Ya, this is nice, a great original christmas track. I thought the music was upbeat and snappy and the vocals were great all around. Nice job on this collab Waper, what a sweet track!

Wayne

I've loved this song the first time I heard Marcy Plaground play it and you did an interesting remix. The vocals were great. Nice tempo change from the original. Creative track!

Wayne

Man, you come from the other side of the street with your musical thoughts, haha. I don't really think I could produce something like this, I just don't think this way, ha. It's very creative with a cool intro. Nice breaks and the intro and voice samples in the track worked nicely with this. Your synths are too cool. The arrangement is well thought out and interesting for sure.

I don't isten to much music like this but this was a treat!

Great job D!!

Wayne

This is pretty good, the drums rocked!! Dnb is something I've been trying to listen to a little more. There are some cinematic aspects to this song and some nice changes. Lot's of energy, this got me going this morning, my first track of the day, I'm awake now. Thanks!

Wayne

I like reggae that expresses the maker's personality and is different from other more mainstream reggae. Your track is different and was alright. Keep working it out, look forward to more tracks, keep going!

Wayne

Wow, some nice synth work in this one, thelead synth was great. Pretty solid track, nice mix, lots to keep my ears happy. Great club track!

Wayne

Dang this is cool!! I liked the vocals/singing a lot, worked perfectly with the beat. At first wasn't sure about the beginning but I soon realized you were bringing it up, it worked ok. Catchy track, I liked it, nice pella too!

Wayne

Dang, this is nice, great buildup of instruments. The keys sounded cool and I'm always up for some tamborine! Nice melody through the whole song. I like the track overall, I listened to it several times. Nice bass sound.

Wayne

This has a Neil Young feel to it. I'm diggin' the harmonica lately, may have to get a few. Nice chord progressions and you played a great bass line. You need to sing, c'mon!

Great track, gonna dl and fav, thanks! Very cool Sylvestre!

Wayne

Well done D! This was great, the length was perfect and there were nice changes through the whole song. This is a tough genre and you did a nice job. The description put me in the right frame of mind to listen to this and get into it! Very cool!

Wayne

I liked the song idea, but I think things got a little loud on the change in the middle and through the end. Just a little level checking, a little hiss reduction maybe. The whole beginning part was very cool I thought. Mixing's tough, no one said it was easy, especially with live tracks. Be patient with it, it will get better as you go!!

Wayne

Very cool beat, rollerskating music from back in the 70's!! I like percussion so the congas caught my ear right away. Nicely put together, some good changes and really nice sounding production, not cluttered but plenty going on.

Maybe funk, i dunno, it's pretty funky.

Wayne

Nicely done, there are some very cool effects on the music and vocal tracks and was a great listen to the end. Not usually my type of music but this was good enough to let ya know I liked it! I gave this a few listens, pop for sure, very good pop!

Wayne

Nice vocals, so beautiful and emotional! Great piece, the piano was nice, dramatic and full of tension. Strings or a cello would sound nice to give a little low end but real nice the way it is. Look forward to more tracks!

Wayne