phantomhim

Nice intro on this track, the drums weren't what I was expecting, but they work. The flute is awesome too.

I like this, solid production, nice ideas. Heavy.

Hey nice track, I'm feeling this one. I think you should make the drums stand out a little more and put a little more variation in them. The synth work is great also.

The note selection is very nice in this, the melody is perfect for this type of DnB. Nice work.

Very nice, i can see a few influences in here. Are you a Dillinja fan? Anyway, one of the best produced tracks I've heard on here.

EDIT: Nah it's not that obvious, I've listened to a fair bit of DnB in my time. : )

This is the best DnB track I've heard on here, The melody moving with the drums sounds great. I'd love to remix this. What do you say? Up for a little collabo?

What's with the Lamb Of God reference? Good track anyway.

Loving that horn line, very nice work mate. Would you allow me to make a remix with those horns? If not, no worries. But I had to ask on this one. : )

Cool stuff anyway, nice to see someone just doing what they love, it's infectious.

I'm feeling this, it feels authentically old-school. Very nice.

The main melody is a little similar to Robert Mile's Children, apart from that it's cool. Nice work.

Nice work g.

Nice, when you say Roland drums do you mean a TD kit or somthing? Safe anyway.

Nice one.

Heavy beat, I'd murder a remix of this. What do you say g? If you got the separate parts that is.

Nice work either way.

Nice work mate.

Nice work, some really nice licks in this.

I'll make the vocals sound a little better if you send me the two separate tracks. up to you anyway.

Cool track. Keep it up.

I'm guessing by the title you're a fan of Bill Cooper or David Icke? You got some good choons btw.

Nice, keep going g.

Sounds nice, you need to bring the drums out a little more tho. Not enough thud in the kick yet.
Nice tho.

Sounding nice, vocals need to come up a bit tho.

Nice, i like it.

I'm getting the feeling from what you wrote about your track that your fairly new to production "this isn't your first song : p' and worried about people not liking your stuff.

I have to say tho, it's really nice. You've got the right idea and obviously have a musical ear. So don't worry, just keep at it, the harder you work the better you'll get and quicker too.

Few things I'd do to improve it:

Vary your snare drum pattern a little more, throw in a couple of extra notes and push the odd note VERY slightly out of time to add feeling. Push it backwards if you want to slow the track down in feel for a second, or forwards to make it sound snappy for a second. Depending on which sounds better at the point in the beat you're working on.

Expand either the piano or the vocal with a different melody. Could just be something simple around the end or middle of the verse or wherever fits.

Try chopping the elements up a little more, cutting elements out of the beat every now and then, it can make a big difference to break up the track just cutting the odd little bit and piece out.

Keep up the good work anyway mate.

Rick.

This sounds like a Dupstep version of DJ Shadow Organ Grinder.

It's interesting, the bassline is well done, the drums need more movement. I have to say tho mate, it's a bold move and I've not seen anyone else go in this direction.

So fair play and good luck sir.