phantomhim

Horns remind me of Sock It To Me, not that that's a bad thing. Keep em coming fam.

That's just the orig beat isn't it? Doesn't sound any different apart from the vocals to me? Or am I tripping out?

The MC's tone is good tho, he's got the right voice for it.

Say no more fam, I can dig that. Keep them coming.

Very nice, best track on the frontpage right now as far as I've heard. Fancy letting me have a crack at MCing on this one? Let me know.

Hey, nice track. You got some good elements in here.

If you're going to go this far, you might as well get your tracks sounding right. The chorus is good, but the freestyles in the verse don't cut it. You've got the ability, so might as well do it right.

It's all essential practice g, you've got to start somewhere. Fair play for being honest about it. Anyone can do anything if they put the time and effort in, so don't worry about it. Just be on your game.

You've got some good vocals ideas man, think you just need a little extra instrumentation to bring certain parts of the track out. The Strings in the chorus don't fit in my opinion. Like the idea tho, vox shows the potential.

I've just downloaded this to have a go at some vocals over it, hope you don't mind.

Nice track, very nice. Love the minimal drums, with the arp synth. Goes really well.

Nice, very nice. the only thing I can suggest is maybe an arpeggiated high synth at about 3.15ish, just to bring the track right up and out at the end.

Great stuff tho, fair play to you.

It's not a very good track anyway, but Insane Clown Posse have a song called Toxic Love, it'a about accidentally making love to a barrel of Toxic Waste! : )

Nice choon tho, I doubt anyone really knows about the ICP choon anyway.

Nice work.

Would you be interested in sending me the guitar part for this? Maybe the piano too? I can make a HUGE remix out of this. some of the guitar work is great!

No worries mate, i mean it.

You need to have a little more confidence in your vocal delivery. The melodies are good enough to get radio play, in particular the chorus melody. But you won't get far singing it in such a lack luster way.

Don't be afraid, sing it properly. Unless it's a guide track for the melodies, in which case. Nice melodies!

Your voice/flow is like a cross up of Biggie and B Real, which is a serious combination. With a little G Funk in the chorus. You need somewhere to record your vocals properly G, your better than that recording quality. Be more confident too with your voice too, you got talent.

Keep in touch man.

I'd stick with the first part of this choon and turn into a hip hop choon if I were you. Sounds better before the guitar hit comes in, If you get the EQ right on that guitar and beef up the drums that's a damn good hip hop track waiting to be made.

EDIT: No worries, it really could be an awesome hip hop track. If you want a remix done, let me know. : )

You've got a good ear for chopping up samples man. Keep doing that style man, just needs more time and work but you're on the right track man.

Mate, this is very close to being an amazing track. The guitar loop that you've cut up is really nice and the pizzicato string melody is good, but needs the last few notes changing. If you can change that melody and use the same guitar part with some better drums you've got a really good track there mate.

This is weird mix of Tori Amos and Linkin Park. Which I didn't think was something I'd ever hear. : p

Some nice vocals.

Get back to work! Only kidding. : )

Sounds like an early Necro beat, is it Metal? or Hip Hop? If you want to make it a metal choon I wouldn't have the fast high hat in the verse, I'd make it half time. Bass line reminds me of Metallica, guitar needs to have some EQ too. Try boosting the guitar from 1 to 6 k and giving the bottom end a little lift at 100 - 250 Hz.

Keep up man.

I'd take out the Tabla hit if I were you, doesn't work with the rest of the track. Also the bass part that comes in later is really nice, change it up a little so it's got two parts tho instead of repeating it twice, as that's a good melody you've got going there.

Nice work mate.

EDIT: No worries mate, it's a good track.

It's nice, I"d take out the first line. Wether you meant to do it intentionally or not, and I'm not saying you are because it's happened to me and most other producers too, but. It's a melody from an Eminem track. : )

Apart from that it's coming along man, keep it up.

Really like the second half of this, when the classic sounding dance synth comes in. You got some of your synths sounding huge too. Nice.

Need a copy of this beat, I'm up for having a crack at singing on it. Just listening in headphones and it's really easy to put melodies to. Send me a message with your email if your up for it. Rick.

Interesting beat, some of the sounds have got a real 93 old school hardcore vibe, the drums are 80's futuristic. Fruity Loops?