Hey man, me again. I'm speaking to TWO on Instagram. He listened to my stuff and wants to do it. If you could, and you want to get involved, would you send me a wav of the piano? I love what you did with it. I really want to collab with both of you. Then we can all share the result on our gram accounts once it's done.
My Instagram is: instagram.com/phantom_him
So, if you're on there get in touch. Otherwise, I can send you my email.
The MIDI would also be cool. I can transpose it or separate with AI, but would be best to get your original file audio or MIDI. Hope you're up for it bru, speak soon.
Melodically, this is legit, could be a releasable record. I'd say stylistically, it's closer to progressive house. If you're up for it, we could try doing something together on this. I think with some work/changes it could really be something.
Regardless, nice work man. Keep it up.
If you want to have a listen to some demos I've got up for reference:
Thanks for the feedback! Much appreciated. Hopefully my new tunes will sound better as I've recently joined up on a course that explains about mixing and mastering. I knew I had to do it on these tracks, but left it as is, so that i can also track my progress by listening to a more 'complete' track later. I will also mix and master these tracks at some point when I'm confident that I know more. At the moment, I'm just learning :)
Thanks for the offer! As far as I'm concerned you can download it here and screw around with it all you want, but it is TWO's song, you need to get with him first.
Thanks for listening! Yeah though atslma is really just a rework of a hard trance song I made like 8 years ago titled After The Fact. I believe this track is actually my 4th rework of this chord progression. And speaking of the chord progression, if you really like it, take a listen to Children by Robert Miles. I tried to recreate the chords from that song.
The sounds in this need replacing with better ones but there's some really huge potential in this track and some of the synth melodies are really excellent imo. Don't let this one go if you've moved on to other tracks, come back at some point and remake it, it's well worth it and could be a far better sounding track.
The bit at 135 and the surrounding melodies really make it, great hook melodies.
I might consider doing another track with better sounds but for now I am kinda getting played out with the dubstep genre so could take some time before you see any track of me that has to do with dubstep intentionally haha
Anyways want to thank you for your comment, thought these sounds were pretty good but if you say they can be better I will try to make/get some better ones ;)
Sorry for the late reply, busy with some other stuff lately ;d
Hey, this is actually a really good track. I imagine you're a fan of The Cure? Not that it rips them off but it really sounds like it's influenced by them. The vocal's letting it down at the moment, having said that the backing vox actually sound really good the melody of the hook's also perfect.
If you're willing to collab, I'd love to have a go at doing a version of this.
Like it, could do with a big string section on the 2nd or 3rd drop so It's not going back to the same level as the first. Just my 2 cents. Check my new one, although the vocal's only rough atm and there's no verse lyrics yet.
Cool track, you put the loops together well. Could maybe use something in the percussion that's constant, just to bring it all together. I do hip hop too, check me out sometime and keep them coming.
I'm interested now, how did you make the sounds on the Gameboy? I'm starting to make some 8 bit myself now, always loved the sound since I grew up playing 8 bit games.
You got some sick bars man, beat is interesting as hell. You got sick flow too, we should collabo sometime star. Check out my tracks when you get a chance and let me know what you think.
EDIT: I can't figure out from your description which part of the track you did man. : )
Like it man, you put it together well. Just need an MC to do something with it. Everything sounds on point. Hit me back with a review sometime fam, I do hip hop too.
thanks man,i really appriciate it,my goal is to one day be a beatmaker or studio dj for a living, thanks for the reiview, this was a very quick project, i have many great beats coming but i take very detailed work into them, ima mlook up your work on your profile, thanks again
Cool beat man, you're on the right track. Just need to make it a little more solid and clean it up a little. Keep them coming fam and drop me a review sometime, I do hip hop too.
Commented on Forever featuring TWO by doofus
Hey man, me again. I'm speaking to TWO on Instagram. He listened to my stuff and wants to do it. If you could, and you want to get involved, would you send me a wav of the piano? I love what you did with it. I really want to collab with both of you. Then we can all share the result on our gram accounts once it's done.
My Instagram is: instagram.com/phantom_him
So, if you're on there get in touch. Otherwise, I can send you my email.
The MIDI would also be cool. I can transpose it or separate with AI, but would be best to get your original file audio or MIDI. Hope you're up for it bru, speak soon.
Commented on Stratocaster by chris4toptunes
Melodically, this is legit, could be a releasable record. I'd say stylistically, it's closer to progressive house. If you're up for it, we could try doing something together on this. I think with some work/changes it could really be something.
Regardless, nice work man. Keep it up.
If you want to have a listen to some demos I've got up for reference:
instagram.com/phantom_him
Commented on Forever featuring TWO by doofus
I'd collaborate with you guys on this to make an electronic version with that piano and the vocals. Let me know if you're up for it! Thanks.
You can check out some stuff here to see what you think:
instagram.com/phantom_him
Commented on And Then She Left Me Again Trance Edit by ApolloForce
Hey man is And Then She Left Me Again your track originally? I like the melodies. Nice stuff. Cool progression throughout.
Commented on ballad of an asshole by xstokes
I'd try adding some strings to spice the progression up a little bru. Nice, melodic piece.
Commented on Untitled by SpeakUpProd
Solid. Sounds like something Immortal Technique would have gone over back in the day.
Nice.
Commented on Summer Nights by Jaboy87
Good melody. Lyrics could use some work though. Melody is very strong. Interested in this track. Are the synths sampled or all original? Thanks.
Commented on Deep jungle walk by sirefox
Nice. Peaceful. Like the selections in this.
Commented on St James Infirmary ft Jack Teagarden by Zootman
Like that. Easy on the ears in a good way. Not harsh sounding at all. Soothing.
Commented on Voidable by victorhaaning
That's a nice track. You've got a good ear for production.
Commented on Silent Embers by Tiltedbeats
Yo, same Butcha that was on here in 09 making hip hop?
Commented on Eaten alive by johnnyproducing
The sounds in this need replacing with better ones but there's some really huge potential in this track and some of the synth melodies are really excellent imo. Don't let this one go if you've moved on to other tracks, come back at some point and remake it, it's well worth it and could be a far better sounding track.
The bit at 135 and the surrounding melodies really make it, great hook melodies.
Commented on Always Now by Maffin159
Hey, this is actually a really good track. I imagine you're a fan of The Cure? Not that it rips them off but it really sounds like it's influenced by them. The vocal's letting it down at the moment, having said that the backing vox actually sound really good the melody of the hook's also perfect.
If you're willing to collab, I'd love to have a go at doing a version of this.
Did you write the whole track?
Commented on The Golden Cage by Spidey77
Like it, could do with a big string section on the 2nd or 3rd drop so It's not going back to the same level as the first. Just my 2 cents. Check my new one, although the vocal's only rough atm and there's no verse lyrics yet.
Keep going.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/151331
Commented on Modnex - Sunny Life by Modnex
Keep going man, got some nice melodies in there. Washes over you, I like it.
Commented on Enough ft Farisha by Tiltedbeats
Fresh, like that one. Nice drums and piano, Farisha's good as always.
Commented on New up to date beat by TreP
Feeling that fam, just need to get an MC on it. Fav.
Commented on Butchaa PRESENTS (WELCOME TO THE HOOD NATION) by yeshintae
Fresh track rude boys, like it.
Commented on My Boo by MissMekaProductions
Cool track, you put the loops together well. Could maybe use something in the percussion that's constant, just to bring it all together. I do hip hop too, check me out sometime and keep them coming.
Commented on chiptune song needs a vocalist by dylanbrochill
I'm interested now, how did you make the sounds on the Gameboy? I'm starting to make some 8 bit myself now, always loved the sound since I grew up playing 8 bit games.
Commented on The Symphony Of Grime (Uk Garage Grimey Mix) by GrimalBeatz
Like the idea man, grimey with a classical music feel! That's fresh.
Commented on i want that lacksadayscycle mix by lacksadayscycle
Like your name fam.
You got some sick bars man, beat is interesting as hell. You got sick flow too, we should collabo sometime star. Check out my tracks when you get a chance and let me know what you think.
EDIT: I can't figure out from your description which part of the track you did man. : )
let me know.
Commented on Ridin it by PaNeGyRiZe
Like it man, you put it together well. Just need an MC to do something with it. Everything sounds on point. Hit me back with a review sometime fam, I do hip hop too.
Commented on Me Vs One by SHPInc
Cool track man, like the synth and the drums. Sounds dope, maybe switch up that trumpet, but that's just me. : )
Drop me a review sometime fam, I do hip hop too.
Commented on Boyss feat thenapoleoncomplex- I Want That by bojanboyss
Cool beat man, you're on the right track. Just need to make it a little more solid and clean it up a little. Keep them coming fam and drop me a review sometime, I do hip hop too.