phantomhim

phantom him

TOKYO, Japan

Joined : 16th Jan 2009 - 16 years ago

Last Online : 17th Jun 2024 - 1 year ago

phantomhim comments on tracks

phantomhim has posted 565 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments 501 - 525 of 565

phantomhim 25th Jun 2010 12:29 - 15 years ago

on Music Is Like Poison by santiagosky

You've got some good vocals ideas man, think you just need a little extra instrumentation to bring certain parts of the track out. The Strings in the chorus don't fit in my opinion. Like the idea tho, vox shows the potential.

phantomhim 25th Jun 2010 12:27 - 15 years ago

on Freak by centricomen

I've just downloaded this to have a go at some vocals over it, hope you don't mind.

Nice track, very nice. Love the minimal drums, with the arp synth. Goes really well.

centricomen replied Unknown

Lol. I realy don't mind at all and thanks for the review. Check out ROCKING MUSIC and VICIOUS CIRCLE.... commin' soon

Stay creative

Centric out

phantomhim 24th Jun 2010 14:36 - 15 years ago

on air conditioned by NADMS1

Nice, very nice. the only thing I can suggest is maybe an arpeggiated high synth at about 3.15ish, just to bring the track right up and out at the end.

Great stuff tho, fair play to you.

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 23:42 - 15 years ago

on Toxic Love - feat Stephanie Kay by JoyfulWAVE

It's not a very good track anyway, but Insane Clown Posse have a song called Toxic Love, it'a about accidentally making love to a barrel of Toxic Waste! : )

Nice choon tho, I doubt anyone really knows about the ICP choon anyway.

Nice work.

JoyfulWAVE replied Unknown

THX...for your review :)

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 23:28 - 15 years ago

on The Choice We Made by BrianMaiden407

Would you be interested in sending me the guitar part for this? Maybe the piano too? I can make a HUGE remix out of this. some of the guitar work is great!

BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown

Whats happenin guy? thanks for dropping by! let me know which part and i,ll send it a mp3 like a loop!

thanks for the review!

peace

Bm;)

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 20:33 - 15 years ago

on love guitar by bete

No worries mate, i mean it.

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:51 - 15 years ago

on Rewind by Zoiielou

You need to have a little more confidence in your vocal delivery. The melodies are good enough to get radio play, in particular the chorus melody. But you won't get far singing it in such a lack luster way.

Don't be afraid, sing it properly. Unless it's a guide track for the melodies, in which case. Nice melodies!

Zoiielou replied Unknown

Well thanks for even listening :) it was my first time ever in a real studio, and I was kinda embarrassed at first, but yeah I hear you. I'm better now anyways that was last year :)

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:44 - 15 years ago

on Luv Letter To Da West(Beats Antyon) by Keston

Your voice/flow is like a cross up of Biggie and B Real, which is a serious combination. With a little G Funk in the chorus. You need somewhere to record your vocals properly G, your better than that recording quality. Be more confident too with your voice too, you got talent.

Keep in touch man.

Keston replied Unknown

Thanks a million for the review fam. peace I feel the confidence peace. This was free studio time with one take to make it good.

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:21 - 15 years ago

on Kids And Ak-47s by BrianMaiden407

I'd stick with the first part of this choon and turn into a hip hop choon if I were you. Sounds better before the guitar hit comes in, If you get the EQ right on that guitar and beef up the drums that's a damn good hip hop track waiting to be made.

EDIT: No worries, it really could be an awesome hip hop track. If you want a remix done, let me know. : )

BrianMaiden407 replied Unknown

interesting,iam gonna tri out some things after i get some feedback on it, was a experment in the making!
thanks guy!

Bm;)

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:17 - 15 years ago

on Turn it Up by remixme2010

You've got a good ear for chopping up samples man. Keep doing that style man, just needs more time and work but you're on the right track man.

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:12 - 15 years ago

on love guitar by bete

Mate, this is very close to being an amazing track. The guitar loop that you've cut up is really nice and the pizzicato string melody is good, but needs the last few notes changing. If you can change that melody and use the same guitar part with some better drums you've got a really good track there mate.

bete replied Unknown

i will try that...10x for the advice

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 18:08 - 15 years ago

on Temptation by minette

This is weird mix of Tori Amos and Linkin Park. Which I didn't think was something I'd ever hear. : p

Some nice vocals.

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 17:55 - 15 years ago

on lets go by bignik

Get back to work! Only kidding. : )

Sounds like an early Necro beat, is it Metal? or Hip Hop? If you want to make it a metal choon I wouldn't have the fast high hat in the verse, I'd make it half time. Bass line reminds me of Metallica, guitar needs to have some EQ too. Try boosting the guitar from 1 to 6 k and giving the bottom end a little lift at 100 - 250 Hz.

Keep up man.

bignik replied Unknown

man i like your style of music take care....bignik!!

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 17:50 - 15 years ago

on Shooken by remixme2010

I'd take out the Tabla hit if I were you, doesn't work with the rest of the track. Also the bass part that comes in later is really nice, change it up a little so it's got two parts tho instead of repeating it twice, as that's a good melody you've got going there.

Nice work mate.

EDIT: No worries mate, it's a good track.

remixme2010 replied Unknown

Thanks for the input and review bro! I liked the way the table hit added to the beat but I hear you on that...I'll try to update this track with my longer version later that has 3 parts to it actually..this was just a sample of the beat. thanks.

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 17:45 - 15 years ago

on gangster piano by cybermixer

It's nice, I"d take out the first line. Wether you meant to do it intentionally or not, and I'm not saying you are because it's happened to me and most other producers too, but. It's a melody from an Eminem track. : )

Apart from that it's coming along man, keep it up.

cybermixer replied Unknown

thx for being honest
but i never new that its an eminem melody
my bad

phantomhim 23rd Jun 2010 14:54 - 15 years ago

on Taxi by DJStratos

Really like the second half of this, when the classic sounding dance synth comes in. You got some of your synths sounding huge too. Nice.

phantomhim 28th Oct 2009 00:49 - 16 years ago

on No title yet I need a singer! by thomass

Need a copy of this beat, I'm up for having a crack at singing on it. Just listening in headphones and it's really easy to put melodies to. Send me a message with your email if your up for it. Rick.

phantomhim 27th Oct 2009 16:18 - 16 years ago

on its a love thang by theduke2248

Interesting beat, some of the sounds have got a real 93 old school hardcore vibe, the drums are 80's futuristic. Fruity Loops?

phantomhim 27th Oct 2009 15:58 - 16 years ago

on parler d'amour by mmmkoba

Very fresh, very funky. I love the loop at the start. Did you play all that?

mmmkoba replied Unknown

Nope, I'm using already-recorded samples... the magic music maker's ones.

phantomhim 27th Oct 2009 15:55 - 16 years ago

on The story of that guy by FrenchKid18

Some really nice guitar work mate, the lyrics and chords remind me of Pete Dochertey "or however you spell that" and the lead part is very tasteful with a good melody.

FrenchKid18 replied Unknown

Thanks.Glad you like the track.I'm going to work on the mix now.
Cheers
French Kid

phantomhim 27th Oct 2009 15:54 - 16 years ago

on the aftermath by beatzbydyn

You got some nice beats fam, keep up the good work.

beatzbydyn replied Unknown

thanks fam

phantomhim 11th Aug 2009 16:15 - 16 years ago

on Finally Calm by Strullu

Really feeling the little pitch bend on this, very nice touch.

phantomhim 2nd Jun 2009 14:12 - 16 years ago

on SCHALL-PLAT-TE feat Igor Penner by dezentral

Nice work, i think the only thing that's not really right yet are the drums. Need some beefing up and are slightly out of time. EVerything else is awesome, nice work.

dezentral replied Unknown

hey, man, thx 4 listening and giving some critical review!! well, i heard thw beat over and over and i think i like this lightly offbeat feeling you speaking of!! thx again for reviewing...peace dizzy

phantomhim 2nd Jun 2009 14:07 - 16 years ago

on Your Natty is your Beauty by jahknow

Nice, pretty different sounding dub. Some interesting sounds in there. Good stuff.

phantomhim 1st Jun 2009 14:56 - 16 years ago

on Real Hott ( 3rd Degree Burn Theme ) by Ashman1

You got a nice sound mate, very phat, very heavy. I like how you cut the samples, reminds me of Jedi Mind Tricks. Also please email me that drum sample, I'll be in your debt forever. : p

Also is your avatar Humberto Ramos "i think thats how you spell it" i had some comics by the same artist a while back but I can't remember his name.

Peace.

Also I'd be up for spitting on this track 2.

Ashman1 replied Unknown

hey thnkx man ! this track was a lot of work 2 put together !
as far as the art work , no not Humberto Ramos , i drew that myself. im a comic book artist by profession , an this thrac was an idea for the theme song that will be on the animated dvd !
and i would LOVE to hear someone flow to this

send me your e-mail address and i'll mail u the sample my e-mail is natej25@verizon.net.

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