the string lead was really moving, not many tracks on this site are produced with this much professionalism. The progression is a classic, used by pink floyd and many other greats (Including The Doors, ironically enough). And you have executed it brilliantly! and finally, that main synth lead, WOW! so nice!
Wow this track is really nice, with an awesome flow to it! except, wouldnt this be like hip hop or something? not hardcore? well its a nice track, keep it up!
Its a fairly good tune man, with plenty of heavy distortion on the lead synth saw which gives it a nice dirty feel. Im not sure how you managed the variable lead ossicilation, but it gave the track a good ammount of vareity as well! has a good change at about 2.50. However if i could change something i would turn down the main lead a little bit, and i think thats about it. Nicley done. check out my tracks sometime?
Dj Somnium
Heh thanks. So you think the main leads too loud? I do try and get the synths as loud as i possibly can without blocking out the drums or anything else in the song. And i really wanted it to hit quite hard when it came in so.
But thanks for your review, its nice to have some good constructive critisism. And i'll hava listen now! :)
Nice, i like it! a driving mixture of tight beats and sounds, with a great choppy vocal range happening! this would go down heaps well in a club! nice work!
Hi
Thanks for reviewing my track Im glad you enjoyed it. I will check out what you have been up to soon Ive been finding it difficult to get some spare time lately but anyway thanks again.
Regards
Krook
Hey, thanks man! This is to date one of my favourite songs, it IS chill, and yet hard at the same time. Tha Cheese sent me his raps via e-mail from Japan!
Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review!
Sounds really nice and original! nice work! i think the end of the loop needs to be synced exactly in time. the vocals however are really nice and it has a nostalgic feel to the whole song. really really nice job!
WOW!! this track sounded really professional and had a great flowing and devoloping melody! really nice arpeggiated leads, a great digital monosynth sound, doubled up with some awesome stacked pad layers, for a nice epic sound! only thing i woul d change would be to make the bass louder! NICE JOB! check out some of my tracks sometime?
thanks for ur review, i really cool to see that people enjoyed ur work. and thnks for your constructive criticism re: the bass (i thing u meant the bass arp?) it should be brought up a bit. good ears:)
Hey man, i like your sound! when the second beat comes in, the beatmatching is a tiny bit off, but then it gets better. I like the usage of the dark synths, and there are heaps of sweet changes that keep it intresting. nice work man!
NICE!! seriously, this is like a really awesome hardstyle track! i dont know if i like the sound of the melody that much, it sounds kinda happy. but it ended going great with the beat. The beat should of carried on longer though! nice one! check out my tracks sometime?
Lorin - DjSomnium
Nice! How mellow and relaxing! nice guitar playing, you have the potential to become famous witha voice like that! I was also suprised that you faved one of my tracks as well lol, didnt really seem like your style?
Well, keep it up!
Lorin
Ah, well I don't tend to listen to hardcore music... but I DID leave a review too. Seems the gremlins were at work yesterday because more than one comment I'd made went missing. I may not listen to a certain style as a rule of thumb but if I like a track enough to go back and listen, I fave it. Thanks for listening, glad you liked this :)
Hey, you have a great beat here, very strong! a nice melody as well! I would say that you need to add in an aftertone after every beat to give it more energy, and a strong driving lead melody. Overall a good track though! check out some more hardcore tracks and emulate the techniques that they employ there!
Btw, i have made a few hardcore tracks, stop by my profile and tell me what you think?
HEY!!! there are not that many hardcore DJ's on the site, and im really glad your here!! User Paul is another one, and there is me of course, and i dont think there are any others.
Well, i think this track has a sweet structure, a nice intro, a great bridge, and a nice punchy aftertone. I think the things that could be improved are, the main lead is too weak, I would reduce the attack completly, stack a few more saw leads ontop of it, and add some more reverb, and possibly add in another lead up a fifth, for more depth. I would also add in an independant bassline.
The beat is really good, and i love the buildup's and the breakdowns, it really gets u energised!! awesome track! i cant wait to see more of ur stuff! im finishing off another hardcore track at the moment so i will post it up when im done! maybe check out one of my hardcore tracks tell me what you think sometime?
I have to say mate, i am quite a perfectionist when it comes to music that i like, and like to listen to, bnut i have to say here, this would be a peice that i might accually listen to, by free will, and thats saying a lot! The first half of the track was AMAZING, boomy bass, tight effects, went along SO WELL. i did not like the change at about 3 min, but when the drums came back in again it was awesome. This is a really great track
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Thank you so much, mad respecvt to you as well... This track took some time, it was plaing with my mind alot. it kept drifting and evolving. Funny how music does that some times.
Nice choppy beat, has a natural style and flow to it, quite original! real nice work man. Breakbeat!
Also, start to give your tracks real names, not just numbers! really makes them stand out, be more noticable and noteworthy, adds some spirit into them, your own personal touch!
nice!! im lovin this track! i think it would be deep house, progressive house, or some sort of progressive, i like it! i think it just needs a little more energy, maybe after a while it breaks down into this massive awesome beat and the melody gets stronger, that would be cool!
I have just made my first house track, its called 'True Sin Feat. EVRiM' check it out on my profile, tell us what you think!
Sickkkk heavy solid bassline goin on there, could do with a little bridge, then a change around the beginning, with a progressive bassline coming in. ace!
Dj Somnium
Check out my tracks sometime?
haha this is a nice track, heaps of energy, and a FAT beat!!! fucki awesome house track!! i think it does get a little repetitive though, but the change at around 3.50 keeps it intresting! Nice job!
I have made my first electro-house track using the same vocals! check it out here:
Thx for the nice review :)) not loops, samples, all of the musical instruments(bass, lead, pads,...) are played by me ;) Percussion and voice is sampled from the Vengeance Sample Pack
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But thanks for your review, its nice to have some good constructive critisism. And i'll hava listen now! :)
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Krook
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Well, keep it up!
Lorin
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Btw, i have made a few hardcore tracks, stop by my profile and tell me what you think?
I hope to improve this song someday... someday, when I will learn more about hardcore/hardstyle producing .. :)
going to check your tracks, and gonna try to learn something new ;)
Cheers!
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Well, i think this track has a sweet structure, a nice intro, a great bridge, and a nice punchy aftertone. I think the things that could be improved are, the main lead is too weak, I would reduce the attack completly, stack a few more saw leads ontop of it, and add some more reverb, and possibly add in another lead up a fifth, for more depth. I would also add in an independant bassline.
The beat is really good, and i love the buildup's and the breakdowns, it really gets u energised!! awesome track! i cant wait to see more of ur stuff! im finishing off another hardcore track at the moment so i will post it up when im done! maybe check out one of my hardcore tracks tell me what you think sometime?
nice job, and welcome!
Lorin- Dj Somnium
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thanks again for your review,
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Also, start to give your tracks real names, not just numbers! really makes them stand out, be more noticable and noteworthy, adds some spirit into them, your own personal touch!
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I have just made my first house track, its called 'True Sin Feat. EVRiM' check it out on my profile, tell us what you think!
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Dj Somnium
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I have made my first electro-house track using the same vocals! check it out here:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/31761
Also, its good to feature the users name in the title, or the description, just beacuse vocals feature so strongly in the track.
great work, keep it up!
Dj Somnium
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