SikNoiz

It sounds really good!
The only thing I would say is that there isn't really enough low end. It feels like you threw a highpass on the track and cut out the bass.

If you're actually looking to colab on this, I could do something with you.
Just let me know if you're interested.

This is actually kinda beautiful. I'm a sucker for this more melodic type of dubstep. As long as you're looking for advice, I'd probably recommend bringing the drums up a little bit. They're serviceable where they are, but they either need to be louder or the rest of the track needs to be sidechained a little more. As it is, they're kinda drowned by the synths, especially the snare.

Really solid construction! Probably not enough bass for a "dubstep" song, but I like it otherwise.

Just a piece of constructive criticism, just because a song is clipping doesn't mean it's banging. As deadmau5 once put it, "You've got a volume knob for a reason."
Give the song some headroom in the mix and let it breathe a little bit. Having a giant sausage of waveform is fine, but you're losing a good portion of the information in your song because it's being mixed poorly.

I love melodic dubstep! Reminds me of some of the first songs that ever got me into electronic music in the first place.
Great song!

Really fantastic production on this!
JackLake is right though, reference tracks will take you far when it comes to making "cinematic" music.

Good stuff, man!
I would only recommend adding a compressor onto the vocal track so they pop out more.

This is really good
Digging your flow quite a lot!

This reminds me of the sort of music that first inspired me to make my own tracks.
Melodic dubstep is extremely difficult to pull of properly, but I'm very happy to see that you managed to pull it off!
Also, great taste in anime.

This is exactly the kind of song that's built to relax you and make you forget about the world.

Instrumental is chill as hell and a great flow on top.

You have no right to be criticizing yourself over a track like this.
It's fantastic!

This is one of the most atmospheric things I've heard in a long time.
It's been a while since I've been on this website, but songs like this remind me of why I used to love it!
Creativity is everywhere and you get to hear amazing songs like this.

Really fucking intense!
Feels like something that would play during a car chase.

Good job!
The only thing I would change is the stereo balance.
It's a little off to the right imo.

Good job finding loops that compliment each other!

The vocals are a bit too loud imo.
Try to center your song a bit more, keeping stuff like drums and vocals in the middle.

Feels very real.
What I mean is that it doesn't smack you in the face with sounds that feel empty and cold but instead provides a familiar warmth.
It's rare for music to have that anymore.
Well done!

The mono aspect of the main drop is really appealing to me.
It sounds more focused and concentrated than a usual drop would.
Pretty good, man!

:)

Why did you post this as a track?

You're probably the best "real" musician on LM.
Seriously.
Everytime I listen to something of yours I'm utterly blown away at the quality of it.

Also, your brother is a great singer!
:)

Much better than before.
The only thing I can hear that should probably be fixed now that you've corrected the volume of the sub, is that the notes aren't quite right with it.

Check the notes your sub bass is hitting during the drop, because they're slightly incorrect.
Whether they're too low or too high, I can't tell.
But it's definitely audible.

I hear one of my loops in there.
Sounds really good, man!

:)

Lower the volume of the bass, and bring the vocals up.