Melodic Dubstep WIP - Need Feedback - Axion

13th Oct 2019 01:09 - 6 years ago
Description : This is an original song I'm working on right now that could use some feedback. Let me know what you think.

Comments (12)

If you have time take a listen and give Axion some feedback.

iamarty
iamarty 23rd Oct 2019 23:18 - 6 years ago
what i mainly was talking about was the background arp throughout the drop, it is a little harsh (not too harsh) but a little harsh :)

have a nice day :)
SikNoiz
SikNoiz 17th Oct 2019 04:10 - 6 years ago
This is actually kinda beautiful. I'm a sucker for this more melodic type of dubstep. As long as you're looking for advice, I'd probably recommend bringing the drums up a little bit. They're serviceable where they are, but they either need to be louder or the rest of the track needs to be sidechained a little more. As it is, they're kinda drowned by the synths, especially the snare.
Axion
Axion replied 20th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Thanks for the kind words. I'll work on the drums for sure.
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx 16th Oct 2019 07:23 - 6 years ago
Hoping for the full release of this one.
Axion
Axion replied 20th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Working on it now. After I fix a few things I think it should be ready.
MichaelSinclair111
MichaelSinclair111 14th Oct 2019 19:35 - 6 years ago
E-mail me! sinclaremichaelatgmail.com
LunnchBoxx
LunnchBoxx 14th Oct 2019 06:09 - 6 years ago
I literally love dubstep but not the riddim one and this track is very very good I like how you introduce your drop in 0:14 and delay at 0:16 that was awesome same with a heavy growl that really gives the track alive. GREATLY DONE.
Axion
Axion replied 20th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it!
Stretchfyb
Stretchfyb 14th Oct 2019 00:53 - 6 years ago
Normally don't listen to dubstep but this I enjoy!
Axion
Axion replied 15th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Glad you like it.
iamarty
iamarty 13th Oct 2019 22:59 - 6 years ago
really nice

mix could use a little work, and the structure could use a little bit of work, but overall it sounds really good

keep it up
Axion
Axion replied 15th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Is there anything in particular about the mix that you noticed could be changed? I definitely need to add more variety to the drop. Thank you for the feedback.
tsochai
tsochai 13th Oct 2019 21:39 - 6 years ago
so awesome!!! great job
-CAP
Axion
Axion replied 15th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Thank you!
Danke
Danke 13th Oct 2019 18:43 - 6 years ago
great snippet...partly agreed with Bear but that wobbles is one of the main character of dubstep...it's cool and hope we could hear the final version...

handshake, Danke
Axion
Axion replied 13th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Thanks for checking it out. I'm hoping to finish the track up in the next week or so. I appreciate the kind words.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 13th Oct 2019 11:41 - 6 years ago
So I am not a fan of dubstep, but if I ignore the stuff I don't like, this song is beautifully done. I also think the section from around :43 on with the piano is about as good as it gets. I understand dubstep, I am like the Deadpool character in that I just don't like those bass wobbles. Production is really solid and the underlying music is a 10/10 (gorgeous chord progressions). Again, I really liked what you did here, but I would love to hear this one without all the glitched bass stuff. But then it would be EDM or pop or something and that would defeat the purpose for you. Anyway, I ramble. Good solid start to what could be a real winner for you. I hope all is well.

Bear
Axion
Axion replied 13th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Thank you for taking the time to listen and provide some feedback. I worked quite a bit to get the mixing and mastering down, so I'm glad you noticed. I'd love to experiment with new genres for this song and see what I can come up with. I can definitely see a chill or a pop version with vocals. Much appreciated.
ClickbaitCabaret
ClickbaitCabaret 13th Oct 2019 03:48 - 6 years ago
Well, it's loud. That's for sure. It sounds clean and professional too. So that's good.
Axion
Axion replied 13th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
The loudness is just part of the genre. There is some compression, equalization, and limiting involved to increase the perceived loudness, but it is all mastered to 0dB. Thanks for taking the time to listen and leave a comment.
skwishfish
skwishfish 13th Oct 2019 01:40 - 6 years ago
WOW!! This is top notch man. Very professional! Nice work!
Axion
Axion replied 13th Oct 2019 - 6 years ago
Thanks for the kind words!

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