Description : This is an original song I'm working on right now that could use some feedback. Let me know what you think.

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  1. iamarty
    iamarty on Wed 23rd Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    what i mainly was talking about was the background arp throughout the drop, it is a little harsh (not too harsh) but a little harsh :)

    have a nice day :)

  2. SikNoiz
    SikNoiz on Thu 17th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    This is actually kinda beautiful. I'm a sucker for this more melodic type of dubstep. As long as you're looking for advice, I'd probably recommend bringing the drums up a little bit. They're serviceable where they are, but they either need to be louder or the rest of the track needs to be sidechained a little more. As it is, they're kinda drowned by the synths, especially the snare.

    Reply by Axion

    Thanks for the kind words. I'll work on the drums for sure.

  3. LunnchBoxx
    LunnchBoxx on Wed 16th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    Hoping for the full release of this one.

    Reply by Axion

    Working on it now. After I fix a few things I think it should be ready.

  4. MichaelSinclair111
    MichaelSinclair111 on Mon 14th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    E-mail me!

  5. LunnchBoxx
    LunnchBoxx on Mon 14th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    I literally love dubstep but not the riddim one and this track is very very good I like how you introduce your drop in 0:14 and delay at 0:16 that was awesome same with a heavy growl that really gives the track alive. GREATLY DONE.

    Reply by Axion

    Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it!

  6. Stretchfyb
    Stretchfyb on Mon 14th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    Normally don't listen to dubstep but this I enjoy!

    Reply by Axion

    Glad you like it.

  7. iamarty
    iamarty on Sun 13th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    really nice

    mix could use a little work, and the structure could use a little bit of work, but overall it sounds really good

    keep it up

    Reply by Axion

    Is there anything in particular about the mix that you noticed could be changed? I definitely need to add more variety to the drop. Thank you for the feedback.

  8. tsochai
    tsochai on Sun 13th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    so awesome!!! great job

    Reply by Axion

    Thank you!

  9. danke
    danke on Sun 13th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    great snippet...partly agreed with Bear but that wobbles is one of the main character of's cool and hope we could hear the final version...

    handshake, Danke

    Reply by Axion

    Thanks for checking it out. I'm hoping to finish the track up in the next week or so. I appreciate the kind words.

  10. ShortBusMusic
    ShortBusMusic on Sun 13th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    So I am not a fan of dubstep, but if I ignore the stuff I don't like, this song is beautifully done. I also think the section from around :43 on with the piano is about as good as it gets. I understand dubstep, I am like the Deadpool character in that I just don't like those bass wobbles. Production is really solid and the underlying music is a 10/10 (gorgeous chord progressions). Again, I really liked what you did here, but I would love to hear this one without all the glitched bass stuff. But then it would be EDM or pop or something and that would defeat the purpose for you. Anyway, I ramble. Good solid start to what could be a real winner for you. I hope all is well.


    Reply by Axion

    Thank you for taking the time to listen and provide some feedback. I worked quite a bit to get the mixing and mastering down, so I'm glad you noticed. I'd love to experiment with new genres for this song and see what I can come up with. I can definitely see a chill or a pop version with vocals. Much appreciated.

  11. ClickbaitCabaret
    ClickbaitCabaret on Sun 13th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    Well, it's loud. That's for sure. It sounds clean and professional too. So that's good.

    Reply by Axion

    The loudness is just part of the genre. There is some compression, equalization, and limiting involved to increase the perceived loudness, but it is all mastered to 0dB. Thanks for taking the time to listen and leave a comment.

  12. skwishfish
    skwishfish on Sun 13th Oct 2019 - 1 year ago

    WOW!! This is top notch man. Very professional! Nice work!

    Reply by Axion

    Thanks for the kind words!

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