No worries, SikNoiz, this is simply an instrumental mix/master. This will not be the same once the vocals are introduced. Already working on them as we speak :)
One thing I noticed is the growls keep switching between being centered and being stereo.
I always try to keep it one or the other just so the listener doesn't get distracted.
I actually love this song!
The only thing I would say is to try to match the notes a little bit better. Some of the different sounds were playing notes that sounded bad with the others that were playing.
The main structure and idea of the track is great!
I also like the drop.
thanks for nice comments. Yes, my focus was on the athmosperics mainly - it's all a Blofeld synthesizer. Making backgrounds busy was one way to push this composition sounding somewhere interesting as I can't contribute too much of anything satysfying in terms of keyboard playing.
I really dig this.
From a production standpoint, I like what you did with the bass. It's not just a simple bassline but has some character in it's construction.
If I could change one this about this song, it'd be the volume of the drums.
They could use a slight boost.
During the drop they're slightly drowned out.
It still works and is more chill this way, but if you're wanting to make something people dance to, I would recommend a shallow sidechain in your synth so your kick can cut through the track and breathe a little.
Just a friendly heads-up, refrain from posting this on your soundcloud.
I had a couple of remixes that I had made posted and I got copyright strikes for them all at once.
One more and they'll remove my account, so I'm being careful now.
lol i know first hand. they terminated my account and i had over 14,000 total plays and 600 followers. Apparently if you label it bootleg it wont be taken down. I did that and i havent had any of my remixes taken down...yet.
Really well done!
I will give you a bit of advice though.
Your main synth during the drop is a little too dry.
The background is really saturated and has great reverb and the dry synth kind stands out a bit.
Just to make it blend a bit better, I would add just a slight amount of reverb to it.
I'm going to have to try it :) I don't have any money for a reward though :3 And I'm running into computer problems. 30 secs after opening one of my previous sessions, the RTAS usage spikes from like 25 pct to 99 pct and my computer just stops functioning - the only way to get out of it is to hard reboot my computer. I will see what I can do about getting separate stems from this song. I appreciate the kind words, it was all based off Xyilent's inspirational piano loop :D
Wow, great atmosphere!
Not horribly scary, but still enjoyable.
21 seconds to about 33 seconds reminds me a lot of a couple modern psych-pop groups. I would definitely try to expand on that style of music if I were you, you're really good at it.
Yeah, I was more going for a Phantom of the Opera style thrill ride, rather than all out scary.
I was thinking about expanding the song into a longer track with more vocals and some guitar work. But it may have to wait as I'm working on 3 other tracks atm. Still trying to find my signature style at the moment. So I'll definitely keep your comment in mind.
on Xyilent - Subconscious Impulse by XyIlent
The vocal shots bring the whole thing together very well.
:)
on Oasis Wonderwall Paulynomial Remix by Paulynomial
An interesting mixture of instruments and their electronic counter-parts.
:)
on My Contest Intrumental - Opinions Needed by BradoSanz
Other than that, simply amazing!
I can't imagine you don't win.
:)
on Battleborn CLIP WIP by MusickOfficial
That was incredible!
Honestly, amazing!
on Nightmare Drop Idea by DeadStarMusic
I always try to keep it one or the other just so the listener doesn't get distracted.
on Evuz - Hi Im Evuz by Evuz
The bassline is too loud in the intro and again after the drop and the drums are slightly too quiet during the drop.
Other than that, you're all good!
on Skifonix Test Zone by ReonN
It's overpowering.
Other than that, good job!
on Ill Mind 1 by IGS
The only thing I would say is to try to match the notes a little bit better. Some of the different sounds were playing notes that sounded bad with the others that were playing.
The main structure and idea of the track is great!
I also like the drop.
:)
on No Name by TinyFinger
on Back Again by Fl4zh
Great job!
on Tony Powell-Strong Enough by TonyPowell
My remix of this.
:)
on Observe feat Hemanifezt - Thank You by Observe
I would only make the vocals a little louder.
You were kind of overpowered by the instrumental.
on Boss Battle by ReonN
You fused the original track with your own style very well.
I wouldn't call this dubstep, though.
It's more of a Drum and Bass song, I think.
on Bereavement by 7venth12
My favorite part, just in technical terms, is the construction of the drum track.
Very well done.
on Swag dark Trap beat by Olega
One of the hardest hitting tracks on LM.
on Trailbazing ft HEMANIFEZT by TeeGee1965
It's always cool to hear someone make a song with a bunch of loops.
on synth X by promenade2239
I love this type of atmospheric music.
Sorry for not writing more, but I don't want to repeat what was already said.
:)
thanks for nice comments. Yes, my focus was on the athmosperics mainly - it's all a Blofeld synthesizer. Making backgrounds busy was one way to push this composition sounding somewhere interesting as I can't contribute too much of anything satysfying in terms of keyboard playing.
Take care,
A.
on High love by DeejayDo
It reminds me of the music played at huge EDM festivals.
Well done!
on Vengeance by Fl4zh
From a production standpoint, I like what you did with the bass. It's not just a simple bassline but has some character in it's construction.
Well done!
I appreciate your kind words.
on Dream by DeejayDo
They could use a slight boost.
During the drop they're slightly drowned out.
It still works and is more chill this way, but if you're wanting to make something people dance to, I would recommend a shallow sidechain in your synth so your kick can cut through the track and breathe a little.
Cheers!
on Katy Perry - Firework - Kaulin Remix by Kaulin
I love a good remix.
Just a friendly heads-up, refrain from posting this on your soundcloud.
I had a couple of remixes that I had made posted and I got copyright strikes for them all at once.
One more and they'll remove my account, so I'm being careful now.
Good luck. :)
on Walking In The Rain by MGproduct
I will give you a bit of advice though.
Your main synth during the drop is a little too dry.
The background is really saturated and has great reverb and the dry synth kind stands out a bit.
Just to make it blend a bit better, I would add just a slight amount of reverb to it.
Other than that, seriously well done!
:)
Thanks For Your Advice , Siknoiz ...
on Beatnik Dream by PDMuzak
A decent combination of instruments and electronic sounds is hard to come by these days.
on Give Me A Chance - Opinions Needed by BradoSanz
It has all the elements of a killer house track.
As for what you have here? Beautiful.
I enjoyed every second. Even the lyrics are well written.
:)
ER
on A Haunting by toastedavalanche
Not horribly scary, but still enjoyable.
21 seconds to about 33 seconds reminds me a lot of a couple modern psych-pop groups. I would definitely try to expand on that style of music if I were you, you're really good at it.
I was thinking about expanding the song into a longer track with more vocals and some guitar work. But it may have to wait as I'm working on 3 other tracks atm. Still trying to find my signature style at the moment. So I'll definitely keep your comment in mind.
Thanks
TA