BradoSanz

Thanks so much, Brado. So glad you like it. The vocals is our drummer, Scott Burkholder. He can't sing, but he can talk, LOL! Yes, Kenny did a fine job first time with us.

Ciao,
M.

I really appreciate the positive support in your comment! It was a strange song to write and create, but I'm happy with how it turned out. Sorry it took a bit to reply, but I'm glad I have the motive to visit your profile today!

thanks brado , and thanks to Exfain for the keys ;)

Hi. Thx bro.

Hi Brado

Thanks for interesting opinions and nice words! I must say I layered many bass drums and there are also 'ghost' snare drums as well as other drums in the background. Ive put some punchy limiting on many of them - I am sure that if I would continue adding more drum layers with even more compression I could get some more and more of pumping' here. This is something new in my music. The harshness you mentioned is actually a high frequency range you probably do not like but as I said in some comments below I do not use any mainstream electronic styles as an inspiration and I should put simply an 'Electronic' label on this track, not 'House'. There is no filtering and limiting on 'ambient noises' so it is quite natural that at some level the listening experience may be painful.

Oh and regarding to my comment on your track I wasn't very precise with 'harshness' I mentioned. I know it is maybe not a proper place to discuss it but autotune adds sometime a kind of strange rusty and gravelly qualities - especially the very moment when transitioning 'in between' the notes you sing. I played your track only using laptop speakers so maybe that's an irrelevant observation, I do not know. Anyway the proper amount of autotune is always something to consider.

I am glad you liked the hypnotic vibe I created. Thanks again for your comprehensive review.
Alex

yeah, i dont have anything but alicia keys and it sounds odd with plugins working on it. :/

Thank you! will complete it for sure!

Thats the plan, cant say if it will ever happen but its something i would really like to work towards.
Was hopping to go to college this year and build my skills alittle but its looking like that isnt happening but ill keep at it, and you never know :)

cheers brando

"Your skills have improved so much!"

yeah slowly getting better haha, just been working at it. Ever since i started making my own synths its became easier to design a song based on what i have in my head, rather than make it as close to it as i can with presets and stuff, which has been awesome :D

"You nailed it! Great work!"

Thanks brando :)
peace

Hey Man thanks for stooping by and taking a listen. Comments appreciated. I will be over to your stage to take a listen soon. Thanks again! Fiãofsoul!

Thank you! Not a big thing, the acid part brings himself, the other is mostly a few of Evisma's nice guitar loops with some background drums. I were like to add some another guitar track under it for a bit more complex sounding, but can't find suitable loops, so i gives it up. :)

Regards, traz

Hello Brado.
Thanks for your friendly words. I bet Burt enjoys them same as me. Always good to know that we did not disappointed you with our work :)

stay tuned
joe

Hi. Thx.

Hey Brado. glad you enjoyed it. i think the final result is a bit more interesting. the sounds for the most part evolved for the better. thanks for checking it out. best regards - Dan

Hi Brado,

Thanks a lot for your comment. I think the female vocal sounds a bit different because it was recorded in E, while my track is in D. I had yo change a few notes manually, but left the rest as it was intended. I think that might add to the feeling that it's a bit different. And yes, the whistling is authentic. Took it as an acapella from looperman as well. The poster asked not to give credits, so I won't :).

And yes, a few tracks are slightly off key. I pitched the pads and repeated rythmic arp slightly up. The pad is also drifting a bit. And Shamoozey is all over the place as well :). Although I grew up playing the violin and was taught that on-key is the way, I really like the off-key feeling.

Many thanks for your suggestion. For some reason I never thought of having Shamoozey's vocal accompanied with a few changes in the other tracks. I'm sure that will work perfectly and it gives me a new goal for improvement.

Best, Doc

Wow, that's a ton. Thanks for the feedback and I wish you well also!

Uh... yeah... what a weird illusion, right? *sweats nervously*

Many thanks Brado for listening and comment...I'm very glad you liked it !:)

With much appreciation_____Orlando