Yeah mate. I'll probably try my hand at this again, but I don't think that I'll use the same loop. There's actually one that I like more (and think I can do more with) that I'll go with. L&R!
Hi aaz, this was good for a first track. Did you use loops or sequences for the leads (like the one that comes in at about 41 seconds)? If not, amazing job but if so don't worry, i can tell you have a good grasp from whats here and you'll only get better until you can without a problem.
Try leading each new section in with a build up or something. Listen to some trance that you like and just take a note of the structure of it; how they lead onto new parts and what the new parts are doing. This will give you a good idea of how you can improve your track.
Good job anyway!
25th version, wow, thats dedication! I thought it was very good and i think there is only 1 thing missing that would make this top notch... vocals. Either sing on it yourself or get someone else to, thats all i think you need to do to it (well, if you did, you might need to tone down the guitar solos in a couple of places so they don't overpower the vocals). Nice job anyway!
If you aren't happy with certain parts the thing to do (as blakestringer said) would be to think about how you could improve it but apply it in your next tracks. I could go back to my first track (light and dark) and try to improve it with what i know now, but i don't think it would get better than the stuff i'm making now. Overall, i think you had some good ideas in there, it was just a bit hardcore compared with what i'm used to, but thats just my tastes.
Good job, it was pretty interesting, not really heard much like that before. Btw, what was the synth you used that comes in at about 1:57? I like the sound, think it would sound good in some psytrance
Interesting style, i have a friend thats into electro but i've never really listened to it before. Think you did a really good job, the production values are top notch! Nice work mate!
Aw right i shold have mentioned that... it works best with harsh waveforms, like Saws or squares or Sawsines. And i rarely use complex plugins for theese synths.. usually a single saw ocsilation, then in the inserts ill add the lowpass followed by reverb, delay, etc... sometimes distortion before all of this. This doesnt work to well on paddy synths or thick textures.. anyhow... thought id share that thx for the review.
Starts off depressing, but then (like xxyoung said) you killed it off! I've never really used the 3xosc but from hearing this i think i'll have to look into it, cracking job mate!
P.s. What did you use for the strings?
For something you were just messing around with (in 1 day??), i think you did an awesome job. Its nice and relaxed and the roughness of the pad gives it a unique feel, might be interesting to hear it clean though if you do a remix or something
I think you can add industrial to the fusion list too because the beat sounded fairly industrial to me. Amazing how you made it all fit together and work, good job!
Nice track! I like the variety and changes throughout, and the d&b and instrumentals work together excellently. The only criticism i have is that it could be a tiny bit smoother in places when the drums cut back in.
Thank you, I was not familiar with Amethystium so your comment was enlightening. I downloaded three of his albums and can hear what you're referring to. That guy is copying me, ha ha. Seriously, your input is very helpful to everyone here.
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The bass and beat at the start set it up perfectly. The only criticism i have is that you could try varying the main synth a bit later on or adding a layer
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Try leading each new section in with a build up or something. Listen to some trance that you like and just take a note of the structure of it; how they lead onto new parts and what the new parts are doing. This will give you a good idea of how you can improve your track.
Good job anyway!
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