Hey man, really cool track. I can hear it as a tight little number as is. Very melodic and easy to listen to and I love the running app synth starting at 1:35. It kinda takes the song home, if you know what I mean.
But reading your description, sounds like you like this as the basis and you want to tweek and expand it. If you do, I can envision this track going from cool to great.
Good luck, I hope you get the track to where you want it and I'm looking forward to hearing it reworked if you get around to it.
Man, too fun! I'm envious of these chiptunes. I so much want to have a go at it one of these days. Excellent work. I've heard a couple of chiptunes on the loop before but not quite like this. The others sounded like the were direct from my Nintendo 64 but this one clashes a bit with other genres. It sounds like a good song (pop?) that's been chiptuned, if that makes sense.
WOAH WOAH wait a minute,this track or melody hasn't been chiptuned from other songs(be it pop or dance).
I created this from scratch in Ableton Live.
Well I don't think it clashes with any other genres.Its basic and pure retro chiptune/8 bit music.Ofcourse there are many genres which use the 4/4 beat dance structure or a pop beat structure in a track to which it doesn't imply that genres have been mixed or clashed.
You can listen some chiptune tracks from SoundCloud or from Youtube to get more idea about this.
And really thanks for listening and favoriting the track.
This has to be good cause I liked it, lol. What I mean by that is I am not a dubstep guy. Nothing against it, just not my thing. But you have some really great sounds going on here with some excellent melodic lines.
I can see why you are proud of this track. You should be. I even like the little note you threw in at the end,lol. Intended or not ;]
Man, I think you're insane....in a good way! This is fun,fun,fun. 5 and half minutes flew by. Not a clue what was going on (the story of my life) but I loved it anyways 0.o
thanks also 4 the compliment !
hahaha , you have to be insane when you use singers like Pennywise , freddy kruger , the Crew of the Enterprise , kate bush , Jim Morrison and The Joker !!!lol
Oh man...where's my razor? Is life worth living anymore?
Haha,kidding. I love this. You should call it Demonic Melodic.
I love lo-fi. That evil baby or whatever that was pretty cool. What's that things problem anyway?? :]
Good work man! Even though I'm very depressed right now, I still faved. Cool track for sure.
RW
Very cool track. Quite different from the others on the loop. It has a big jazz fusion feel. I've been to a few Jazz festivals and I could picture jazz fusion players on stage banging out these sounds.
i seriously appreciate your appreciation Renz. I could visualize the Eastman Jazz Band playing this back in the day when I was a student there. At that time, though, I was deep into classical oboe! look forward to checking out your stuff. regards - Dan
Wow. I associate you with your great voice but you have some serious producing skills too. Loops only come to life when put together skillfully. I really enjoyed this track.
Would be cool to hear your voice worked in, even if it's a small part like you mentioned. If not, it's great as is.
Hey thanks! Yeah I think this will be put on the back burner for now, but thank you for listening and I am glad you liked it :) Hope all is well on your end.
-Charlene
Magnifico! This track moves along perfectly. I'm a minimal fan and this works for me. Good intro, get to the point, short break, back to the heart of the song. Listened to this twice it went by too quick.
Thanks Renz! Happy you liked this one. I agree, leaving them wanting more is always a good thing! Thanks for the kind words and for stopping by, appreciate it! Take care! :)
Some really cool sounds in this track. The intro, builds, stops and starts all sound great and makes the track feel a lot shorter than almost 6 minutes.
Cool track. It has a great sound overall. I admit acid is not what I'm personally into but I like how you used the acid bassline as pretty much a lead instrument when it carries the track for about a minute.
But for sure my favorite part starts at 1:51. Love how you work in all the vocal parts and how they evolve and change as the track moves on.
Thanks friend for taking a few minutes to listen and leave a comment! Acid is definitely an acquired taste, but I was raised on it... and I don't really mean the music genre././. heh... But really I've been listening to acid house and acid techno for quite a while now, and I used to try to make it on Rebirth and MED Soundstudio back in the day. Loving the challenge of creating old school sounding acid lines with new software and samples of vintage gear too, and also trying to update it a little, such as in this song where I bring in some glitch elements to the bass. Yeah, the breakdown part around 1:51 I like too. it wasn't how it was intended though as I completely revamped it before releasing the song- it wasn't breakdownish enough. The vocal parts are definitely the important parts, found some samples I didn't even know I had, and they fit in with the ones I ripped from a vegan brainwashing speech. I appreciate your comment and support!
Wow. I've mentioned before how i love your voice. You bring emotion in your voice. This sounds great. I only wish the lyrics feature was working properly. It brings me to the featured track page when I click it :[
I would love to work with your voice one day. If you are ok with that, that is :/
I like what you did with this track. Worked in the vocals nicely.
Maybe it's just my headphones but the synth chords starting at 1:19 seem really loud and a little distorted. And they get really really loud at 4:35. Maybe you purposely did that, I dont know but it was very noticeable to me.
Man, i really dig where you are coming from. I can tell we like some of the same artists. I love this track. I have a few tracks half done, unfinished, whatever with a similar idea. You get a good sound out of audiotool. I've heard of it but never used it or tried it out.
Man, this is messed up. As in the awesome way! I have no idea what you envisioned making this track. Maybe nothing more than putting sounds together. Maybe you tried to paint some picture (thats what I always try with my music. then let it go and people hear or picture in their mind whatever they feel)
So what scares me is I totally had a vision with the song. Some person hectically getting ready for the day, rushing outta the house, then getting on a subway, sitting alone with his thoughts as the the rush of people come in and out, bumping into one another, everyone scrambling along in their day, till the person finally gets off the subway and the dreary mundane walk to the office that ends slumped in an office chair after yet another morning in the rat race.
Other than that, I dont have any comments on the track...
Your half right! I make my music like abstract art. Some people see it and can reflect to it, and some don't. Everyone see it differently as well. Me? I pictured it as... well... abstract art! Its unique to me
on Jason Only Gets Two Hits by Evisma
But reading your description, sounds like you like this as the basis and you want to tweek and expand it. If you do, I can envision this track going from cool to great.
Good luck, I hope you get the track to where you want it and I'm looking forward to hearing it reworked if you get around to it.
Good work man
RW
Evan
on Rising Sinusoidal by AviatOfficial
Love how you did this! Great work. I faved.
RW
I created this from scratch in Ableton Live.
Well I don't think it clashes with any other genres.Its basic and pure retro chiptune/8 bit music.Ofcourse there are many genres which use the 4/4 beat dance structure or a pop beat structure in a track to which it doesn't imply that genres have been mixed or clashed.
You can listen some chiptune tracks from SoundCloud or from Youtube to get more idea about this.
And really thanks for listening and favoriting the track.
on Our Space and Our Time by Livingsoulsdie
I can see why you are proud of this track. You should be. I even like the little note you threw in at the end,lol. Intended or not ;]
Great work man. Keep 'em coming!
RW
on DJ The Observer FT PENNYWISE - CrAzY BallOOns- by djtheobserver01
Bravo!
RW
thanks for listening and your comment !
thanks also 4 the compliment !
hahaha , you have to be insane when you use singers like Pennywise , freddy kruger , the Crew of the Enterprise , kate bush , Jim Morrison and The Joker !!!lol
glad you like it !!
greetzz
on Buffet ft BoleteSoup III Nobody Knows by kittytrillah
Haha,kidding. I love this. You should call it Demonic Melodic.
I love lo-fi. That evil baby or whatever that was pretty cool. What's that things problem anyway?? :]
Good work man! Even though I'm very depressed right now, I still faved. Cool track for sure.
RW
on AZZYKO - MINDBLOW by AZZYKO
Good work man
RW
on endless journey with DesignedImpression by DanGoldstein
Very atmospheric. Great work.
RW
on CommIT to IT by gbaby41
Good work
RW
on Blessings - Ft K19 And Reno Jr - Remix by boycottProductions
RW
Make sure you don't pump this track to loud as I don't want you to get a ticket for noise pollution. :P
Seriously though, thanks for stopping by. I'm going to check out your tunes soon enough.
Peace!
BC
on 2 weeks off by smallpaul
Major props. Great track. I faved.
RW
on Twilight by Cestevens1783
Would be cool to hear your voice worked in, even if it's a small part like you mentioned. If not, it's great as is.
RW
-Charlene
on Masterfuse-Yeldi SAMPLE MIX by masterfuse
good job man
RW
Peace
Jim
on Money by Billydragon1
I faved. Keep it up!
RW
Yup straight to the point, no beating around the bush for me! Take care my brother. Peace.
on Modnex - Shine Bright by Modnex
Really enjoyed this. Good work.
RW
on Miss You - Reworked by steve010101
Good job man.
RW
on Willful Ignorance by Spivkurl
But for sure my favorite part starts at 1:51. Love how you work in all the vocal parts and how they evolve and change as the track moves on.
Good work as usual Spiv!
RW
on Going Home by Cestevens1783
I would love to work with your voice one day. If you are ok with that, that is :/
RW
-Charlene
on Dolls Eyes by DJDomGuy
Good work
RW
on What is love by Oxnitrogen
Maybe it's just my headphones but the synth chords starting at 1:19 seem really loud and a little distorted. And they get really really loud at 4:35. Maybe you purposely did that, I dont know but it was very noticeable to me.
Cool track.
Thanks for the feedback friend
on The Flying Spaghetti Monster Touched Me by glados666
Music theory? If you want to expand your knowledge, sure. But don't let that get in the way of creative freedom, man.
Giorgio said it best..
'Once you free your mind about a concept of harmony and music being correct, you can do whatever you want'
Good stuff
RW
on Syntho by EliRob
Kidding. Really cool track. Simple,straight forward with some really catchy lines. Im digging this. Good work.
RW
on ShortBusMusic vs Magix by beerling1970
Great work
RW
Steve
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on what Are you doing by M8TN
Good work! Keep it up man :)
on Corrupted Files From My Mind by glados666
So what scares me is I totally had a vision with the song. Some person hectically getting ready for the day, rushing outta the house, then getting on a subway, sitting alone with his thoughts as the the rush of people come in and out, bumping into one another, everyone scrambling along in their day, till the person finally gets off the subway and the dreary mundane walk to the office that ends slumped in an office chair after yet another morning in the rat race.
Other than that, I dont have any comments on the track...
Sayonara
RW
Thanks! :)