AviatOfficial

AviatOfficial

Mumbai, India
Joined : 8th Mar 2014 - 11 years ago
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AviatOfficial 21st Dec 2016 09:28 - 9 years ago

on Here we are by illestbeatz
Liked the intro!

Loved the lush chords. Nice progression.

The main drop is really nice.

I really think you can improve the highs and make the track more clear.

Effects are on point.

Use some more saturation. You can also add some shakers, vocal FX and some percussion effects. They will really uplift the track.

You can layer the last piano melody with delayed guitar. It will be nice subtle touch.

Great work!

Regards.
Aviat
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 15th Oct 2016 14:25 - 9 years ago

on Kodama by lAVel
Ohhh great intro!

Liked the moving arps very much.

Beautiful ambience and delays.

You can add light strings/pads in the background. It will really uplift the track.

You can include some Japanese instruments to increase the feels and add some forest FX for the atmosphere.

For the outro you can automate and increase the echo delay, reverb and stereo separation. It will be a great addition.

Nice work!

I'm a Studio Ghibli fan and Mononoke Princess is my favorite movie!
I really loved the forest spirits and kodama scenes in it!
Hayao Miyazaki is a genius!

Regards.
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 14th Oct 2016 14:24 - 9 years ago

on I 3750 I by lAVel
Beautiful atmosphere!

Great sound designing skills. Really loved all the sound effects and their weird transitions.
Panning, reverb, delays, glitches on point!

Would be a great soundtrack for thriller/horror games, movies.

Loved the haunting pad/string!

That offbeat synth/metal-type hit fits soo well!

Super effective and tranquil ambience!
Great work!
Regards.
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 29th Aug 2016 10:33 - 9 years ago

on Madmen by swindla007
Great groove!

Loved the hard kick and the sick low-end.

Track has lots of energy. Would sound great in a club!

Intro could be changed a little. Maybe filter automation would sound nice. Sort of introducing the main elements.

Loved the synths! Catchy stuff.

More sound fx can be added to take the track to another level.

Nice work!

Regards.
swindla007
swindla007 replied 6th Sep 2016 - 9 years ago
Hey man thanks alot for the ideas, this is actually the first track that i've made that doesnt have that kind of long dark cinematic beginning and sound fx...when i made it i thought of that but then i decided to just throw the listener right onto the track without giving them anytime to breathe or think...its kind of like walking down the road and a truck comes barrelling down on ya ( a funky raging truck maybe lol). Maybe i will alter it a lil bit now that you said that because you gave me more ideas for it ( thats dangerous lol) but right now i have 3 other tracks on the go so it might be awhile to work on this one again...
Thanks again man
AviatOfficial
AMAZING TRACK!

Every second of the track is total eargasm xD

Loved the LFO automations in the drop. Very perfect!

I thought the second drop would be identical to the first but I was wrong.
Second drop was really a twist for me. Nice trap stuff there too!

Amazing work on vocals. Takes the track to another level.

The dreamy synths and leads throughout the track were nice. Nice reverb on them.

Mixing is on point. Great work.

Any tips for making future bass would be helpful.

Regards,
Aviat
sheensheep
sheensheep replied 23rd Aug 2016 - 9 years ago
Haha Thanks for all your points and I'm glad you really liked the song.

By the way I only recently found this out, but the bass on the first drop is barely audible on speakers, but can be heard on earphones and headphones. I wonder if that's a problem I need to look out for next time.

As for tips, I don't really have that many I'm learning as well Haha But for future bass, there's a lot of focus on melody and harmony. Try learning about 7th and 9th chords.

-Sheen
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 15th Aug 2016 16:47 - 9 years ago

on Midnights Travel Original Mix by MisterBloodworth
Hello!

First of all great sounds and ambience!

Loved the moving arps and the sick low ends along with the clear strong kick.[some side-chaining can do wonders for the track]

Nice synths and really digging the melodic transitions.
Breakdown is really cool.

Loved the hats and toms :)

Mixing, mastering is on point!

Great work, Aviat
MisterBloodworth
MisterBloodworth replied 16th Aug 2016 - 9 years ago
Aviat, I really appreciate it! The Arps were really odd for me initially. I almost used a different sounding one, but the results seems to have generally positive views of it. The synths and melodies came together very smoothly for me, and as for the drum patterns, I thought it was executed nicely. Much thanks for your kind words! :)

~GO
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 5th Jun 2016 10:26 - 9 years ago

on Myy Lyyfe by KnightHeir
Nice work!

Drums are on point and loved the groovy bass!

Track need a little bit of technical improvements but apart from that it's uplifting.

Great and meaningful lyrics. Liked them very much.

Your vocal flow is soo great!
Keep working on your vocals. As others said you really got a great natural flow. Keep practicing. It will be great.

Please extend the track. Regards :)
KnightHeir
KnightHeir replied 1st Mar 2020 - 5 years ago
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AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 29th Apr 2016 16:49 - 9 years ago

on Xyilent - Showtime by XyIlent
Great work as always!

Your melodies are really inspiring.

Love your synth and rhythmic elements.Very groovy!
I liked the vocal sample.Sort of provides contrast to the track which feels nice.

You can actually fill the ambience/spectrum more by adding some atmospheric effects.

Transitions are very well laid.

Nice work. Regards.
XyIlent
XyIlent replied 29th Apr 2016 - 9 years ago
"Great work as always!"

thanks aviat! :)

"You can actually fill the ambience/spectrum more by adding some atmospheric effects"

yeah was thinking of adding some real world ambiance at around 1:16 but in the end didnt think it fit the track well, i ended up going for more of a subtle breathing sound that fits better i think.

"Nice work. Regards."

Thanks aviat thanks for the listen and comment
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 7th Apr 2016 10:06 - 9 years ago

on In The Grip Of Himalaya by Orlando51
OMG this is soo perfect.Amazing ambience!!!

I live in India and I have never been to Himalayas :( but this track took me over to the Himalayan Journey.
I was completely immersed in the track since the beginning.

Moving textures,beautiful ambience,epic synths and pads.Sound design at it's best!

This will really suit for a movie background score.

Which libraries and VSTs do you use for your ambience music?

I'm in love with this perfection!

Great great work!
Regards,
Aviat
Orlando51
Orlando51 replied 7th Apr 2016 - 9 years ago
Hello my friend ! I'm truly honoured for such favourable
and generous review and the fact that you live in India
gives me even more recognition! Yes, I really had it in mind as a movie background score. I'm really glad you found it so convincing!:) I use many different vst's depending on what kind of ambience I want to create. For this one I used
CrX4, Lush-101 and Alchemy. For the next one there will be probably different set of vst's.

Thank you so much again for all those kind words and the 'fav' ofcourse ...means the world!:)

With much appreciation_____Orlando
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 5th Apr 2016 15:04 - 9 years ago

on Suspense by YogeshST
First of all awesome track!

The intro was epic. Great piano work. Loved the moving melodies and the strings are absolute pleasure.

The drums are well programmed. Nice kick!

Loved the flute-synth melody during the second section of the track. Very catchy.

Amazing track. Great hip-hop orchestral track :)
YogeshST
YogeshST replied 6th Apr 2016 - 9 years ago
Thanks AviatOfficial :)
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 3rd Apr 2016 19:03 - 9 years ago

on Xyilent - Wandering by XyIlent
Hey!

Long time since I heard some chip-tunes.
Great work!

The vibe of the track is really amazing and really does fit the video game environment.

Loved the main melody hook and the ambience.

The drums are groovy and tight. Liked those hats xD

Lower bass parts are crystal clear.

Awesome work!
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 5th Nov 2015 16:01 - 10 years ago

on The Darkness ft SkwishFish by MisterBloodworth
Intro is great!

Loved the pads and piano very much.
Great melodies and leads.Great synths :)

Liked the beats.Groovy and does nice job in the track.
Loved the variation on those hi-hats.

Bass is nice.

Overall great track!
Liked it very much.
MisterBloodworth
MisterBloodworth replied 6th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Much appreciated man! Thanks! Like I said, I consider this one of my best! :)

~GO
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 18th May 2015 08:34 - 10 years ago

on Stealth Matriculation Vocal Mix by Spivkurl
Hey!! That intro works just perfectly!

Loved the bassline very much.Very groovy and tight.

Beats are nice and does their job.Very snappy.

Loved the various lead synths and the melodic content.

Vocals fit well in the song and nice chip sounds too!!

Awesome energetic song.Loved it.
Spivkurl
Spivkurl replied 29th May 2015 - 10 years ago
Hey Aviat I totally appreciate your comment! I'm pleased with how it turned out, and with the reaction to it (considering it's the most played electronic track on Looperman now!). Controlling my modular with MIDI is so fun, especially for bass lines... so I'm glad you liked that part. I've always gotten into snappy beats, and I'm glad this fits the bill. The lyrics were written after the arrangement was composed, so I'm glad the vocals fit in. I wanted it to be an uplifting melodic feel, as opposed to the stuff on my last album... seems like I nailed that part of it. Thank you so much for listening!
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 18th May 2015 08:24 - 10 years ago

on Light by Alec64
Nice chords.

Well the intro can be changed a lot.This track can perfectly made into a tropical house type.

Loved the synth and percussion there.

Needs some variation and new melodies in the middle(add some new pads and also layer the piano chords) and perhaps a more nicer breakdown.

Nice work.Mastering needs some work too :)
Alec64
Alec64 replied 18th May 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks and yeah i was kinda going for that tropical house feel. Still needs a lot of work though i agree
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 17th May 2015 14:16 - 10 years ago

on Yellow Flowers On The Sky by DFletcher
Awesome work.

Beats are damn snappy and tight.Liked them very much.

Bass-line is awesomely groovy and catchy.

Loved the melodic plucks,piano and minimal synths the most.Very addictive.

Breaks in between the track are perfect and provide good variation.

Nice ambiance and great mix/mastering.

Loved it very much!!
DFletcher
DFletcher replied 20th May 2015 - 10 years ago
Thank you very much. I appreciate these words from the talented man like you.

Thomas Flek
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AviatOfficial 14th Oct 2014 06:16 - 11 years ago

on Mosso demo - W Torley by Diese
WOW!
The starting is something too cool!

Loved the vibe of this track!

The piano melodies and variations are really wonderful.

Loved those synths.Truly awesome!

Bass is groovy and does its job!

The combination Of Saxo with those synth stabs and piano was epic!
SO loved that transition.

Beats are so well programmed.
Liked those panning of percussion drums.

This track really does suit for an old-school/retro adventure-arcade video game.

Loved it!
Fantastic work!
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 6th Aug 2014 08:17 - 11 years ago

on Enlightenment by Livingsoulsdie
THIS IS AWESOME...!!!

The darker intro was really something...Superb!

The melodies are really crafted well.Loved the different soft synths used.

The structure of the song is nice and variations keep coming up.

The drops are awesome and loved those sqare/harsh synths.LFO Rates are synced nicely.Awesome!
Its one of the hardest thing to modulate them in Dubstep genre.

About the drops and buildup they can be made more intense with percussive elements and different FX.Search them up.

Beats are nice but can be more punchier.Do add more percussion.

Mastering and Mixing is really nice.Liked it!

And you already got an awesome detailed feedback from ValVedriVer which pretty much explains everything.

Good Job!
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 5th Aug 2014 15:11 - 11 years ago

on AZZYKO - IN YOUR FACE by AZZYKO
WoW...!!
This is AWESOME...!!

The starting is nice and directly tells the listener what the track is about.Its really good.
Loved all your synths.

The Vocal FX is cool.Good chops there!

The drop is nice.Loved the sqaure/raw synth there.Its good but I think it can be made a little harsher or add a saturation/overdrive there.

The beats are programmed well.Loved the hard kick and claps.
I think you can add some more percussion and some more cool FX.

Mastering and Mixing is nice.
GOOD job!

And could you give a listen to my new Progressive/House uploads-Connection and Vintage.You will love them for sure.
Can we collaborate or something(specially for Electro House)..??
AZZYKO
AZZYKO replied 5th Aug 2014 - 11 years ago
Thank you for pleasant comment! I'm going to check your tracks right now ;) About a collab, I'll contact you on your fb page, and we will see what we can do, OK? :) Thank you for leaving comment, it's much appreciated!
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 1st Aug 2014 16:02 - 11 years ago

on Organon ft McJonny by RealProblemShuckers
The starting is nice.Liked it soo much.

Loved the bassline.Its definitely crafted well and does the job.

The organ is soo funky and catchy.Loved it!

The piano chords and melody variation is really nice.Lot of creative-ness there.

The trumpet is also cool.

The beats are programmed well and loved the percussion soo much.The tambourine in the right is nice and bongo was a pleasure.

The mastering is good but can be better.Add some more dynamics and EQ.

Do improve the FX samples and add reverb and delays on it.

Awesome work...!!!
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 13th Jul 2014 13:25 - 11 years ago

on Down that Road by Ensam
OMG...!! THIS TRACK IS SO CHILLED and REVITALIZING.

Those VOCALS are sooo touching and soo good.The lyrics are good and awesome song name..!!

The intro is amazing.

The pads are superb.Those piano variation is soo melodious.The Guitar melody is just out of the world..!!

Beats are programmed well.Beat Breaks are awesome.The percussion is damn fine.

Track planning is good and beautiful atmosphere.

Mastering and mixing is perfect.

Thanks for sharing Veela pack information.Gonna download that.

OO GOD i sooo love this track...!!
Its gonna be on the listening list for many days..!!
SUPERB!!!
Ensam
Ensam replied 13th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks man, I think that this is the most intense comments I've had on any of my tracks, thank you so much, I am really pleased you liked it.

The sample pack is called 'Siren' and it is released by 'Black Octopuss', you can find it on their site. I bought it from someone like Loopmasters at a reduced price. Sorry I can't be more specific but it was a couple of years ago and I can't remember who I bought it from but like I said there is a free stripped down demo pack available if you look around.

Thanks again

Simon
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AviatOfficial 12th Jul 2014 13:00 - 11 years ago

on instru mental by FreeRadical
Intro is damn cool.

Loved the bassline.It's really nice.

The vocal chops and FX are just perfect and awesomely mixed.

The main synth is really catchy.

Is a new track being mixed or added at 3.15 because there's no need for stretching the tracks(cuz lately in your single upload there are 3-4 songs mixed after 3 mins or soo.Seriously there's no need for that)

I really don't get the transition there but apart from that everything's properly mastered and mixed.

Loved the FX.Can you give me the sample pack's name or so?

Awesome work!!
FreeRadical
FreeRadical replied 12th Jul 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks, i'm glad you could stop by and comment. There's three tracks here rolled into one. I want to do a bit more with the last track as i think it needs something.
The sample packs i used were "the sound of hotmouth" from prime loops "Ultimate house" from loopmasters "Bass addict from prime loops" "vintage movie samples 2" from loopmasters and there's a few more but the names escape me right now. Too many to remember.
Cheers again for checking it out.
FR
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 11th Jun 2014 12:22 - 11 years ago

on Sunset Blues - I know - cheesy title by DrvanLansberg
Really loved the title.

Wow the atmosphere is sooo damn perfect.

The piano melody is immense pleasure.

Synths used are very perfect and takes the track to another level.

The reverbed Beats are very well programmed.

Loved the percussion very much.

The vocal acapella is fitting very well.

Track is produced and mastered very awesomely.

Great job.Damn good..!!
DrvanLansberg
DrvanLansberg replied 11th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago
Hi Advait,

Many thanks for listening. Actually the beat was the easiest part of this track. It is not more than a deep kick and a reverbed snare indeed. Some parts a bit addition from delayed shakers and the percussion. However, the percussion it also just one 32 beats loop (I am getting a bit lazy :)).

And yes, the acpella. Shamoozey is amazing isn't he. So atmospheric. Just added some reverb and a stereo delay. That's all.

The hardest part for was to align the different synths to support the melody but not to overdo it, so no synth with the same notes at the same time too much.

Anyway, thanks for your great comments, motivates me for the next track again.

Best, Doc
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 6th Jun 2014 15:08 - 11 years ago

on AZZYKO - WAKE UP by AZZYKO
Damn that starting is very cool and epic..!!

The synths are perfect and really loved them.Which VSTs did you use or how did you tweak them..??Plz Mention them.

The beats are nice and very well programmed.
Damn nice..!!

The drop is good and and perfect.

The high-pitched synth really adds some flavor to the ending.

Damn Awesome..!!
Really loved it...
AZZYKO
AZZYKO replied 6th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks man, I don't know how, but I can make nice melody in a second, and I think it's very important ability in this genre. For sidechained synths I used Nexus2. Thanks for leaving comment, I really appreciate that :)
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 5th Jun 2014 14:07 - 11 years ago

on Get Loose by RoyaleMuzik
Starting is epic just EPIC...!!!

The beats are just perfect and very well programmed.

Really loved the transitions between different genres..!!
Fell in love with the genre switch at 1.35.
Addition of Tabla there at 2.16 was very unique and cool.

The mains synth is really awesome..!!
Other synths are nice and does their jobs..!!

Very well produced track and really addicted to it..!!
Good mixing and mastering....

AWESOME..!!
Plz make such fusions in future.Maybe you can add some Indian elements in your future tracks.
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik replied 5th Jun 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey Advait07, thanks a lot for the listen and excellent review my friend...much appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed the array of sounds incorporated throughout this track....I had fun creating it! I would love to incorporate Indian elements in one of my tracks...I just may come up with something soon lol, thanks for the idea!-Dave
AviatOfficial
AviatOfficial 27th May 2014 11:37 - 11 years ago

on promise me by domr30
Holydamn this is soooo perfect.

The Guitar is just out of the world.Its very very superb.Very powerful,very fuller and soothing.

The instruments used are damn nice and they mesh with each other.

Really loved the pads here.

That saxo synth is just another perfect thing.Loved the chorus part.

Really chilled and smooth track.Damn nice.

Would really love a classic drum beats just to take it to another level.Classic country song beats would just fit in.

Mixing is good.Awesome track...!!
domr30
domr30 replied 31st May 2014 - 11 years ago
merci pour l attention de ce morceau domr
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