The intro bassline is perfect and cool.Does its job.
Loved the vocals.They are really powerful.Good selection there.The first half is just perfect and as many members mentioned the second half is really a big change.
You should make the first half more fuller and can even make another song from the second half.
Track is well mixed.Perfect for clubs.The track will just uplift with some cool wobbles and more synths.Try to make it more Dub.
I'm glad you think so. The whole track is just loops and samples though. I want to add to it but thus far nothing seems to work.
I'll have another crack at it though as everyone keeps telling me the same lol.
Cheers for dropping in.
FR
WOW this is great...!!!
Flow is good as a Hip-Hop song would be.I mean you have maintained the Hip-Hop/Rap structure here...!!
Really loved those beats.Well programmed.I think you can lower the claps a bit and can add some Reverb to beats.
Those piano variations are addictive and cool.Gives a real feel of Pop/Hip-Hop.
Bass-line is really good.You can tweak it a little bit.I think its sounding more like a Dance or House bass(i think its only for me....don't change those keys,pitch and all....Just tweak it a little bit)
Song is really perfect.You can extend it by 1 Minute..!!
Awesomely produced....!!
Thanks for the feedback, Advait07. I really appreciate it. I still have work to do on it. I will add a little reverb to the drums, I think that is a good idea. I am going to add a bridge I think to compliment the track and see what happens.
This is one of the most annoying things on Looperman that we can't edit our comments and can't add second reply to someone...
Looperman should really improve like MIXPOSURE.Thanks StaticNomad for that site.
Apart from that,I replayed this awesome track for 20 times(was hooked to it) and really noticed those effects you mentioned and started applying those in Ableton.
That octave effect is sooo damn unique.I was goddamn surprised!!.Thanks for replying and mentioning those.Gonna try them out.
And can you please check this track and give me some hints about adding Guitar or vocals or even a new synths in here--
www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/154524
Its like no track is complete here until you give your genius feedback.YOU HAVE AWESOME VISION FOR MUSIC...!!
Totally agree about lack of editing and second replies.
Extremely frustrating and means I have to carefully compose my reply (sometimes in my head when I'm walking about the house doing other stuff) so that I don't forget to answer a question (though I get very few of those) or mention my own point.
That's why I do such long replies but then I also do long reviews. And long tracks so that's just how I am: I have lots to play and lots to say.
I don't really like Mixposure as it's too complicated and awkward to use and you only get 5 tracks with a free account and there are no featured tracks (used not to be here but I think it's great and allows me to follow people and see their progress and not miss their new uploads).
"That octave effect is sooo damn unique"
Not sure what you mean. It's really just adding bass to any audio signal. A cool guitar riff may not need a separate bassline - perhaps just needs to have the low end added to it. That's why I sometimes use it. Gets messy if you add it to chord-based guitar playing but I don't play many chord-based riffs.
"I replayed this awesome track for 20 times(was hooked to it)"
When I upload my tracks, I usually listen to them quite a bit (out of the studio so different perspective) and I also get a bit hooked. Sometimes I just have to listen to the whole thing, even when it's a really long one. I often find each section joins onto the next in such a way that I don't want to press stop (which is exactly my intention).
"Its like no track is complete here until you give your genius feedback."
Glad you appreciate my comments. There have been just one or two people on this site who have not (one twice left insults on this track, see below, the other has been much more unpleasant) but it's best not to worry about them. Perhaps I'm slightly wasting my time giving extensive feedback when most people give very little. But there are a few people who do the same for me and make suggestions and get me thinking about things in a slightly different way.
"YOU HAVE AWESOME VISION FOR MUSIC."
Maybe but I'm really just a music obsessive so have lots to say about it. And, as I love music, make it every day and think about it much more, I don't find it hard to quite quickly say lots of things about a piece of music.
I will comment on the track you suggested as I like it and it has an interesting waveform!
Every track of yours is unique and worth every second.I just love your style of making Music.
I mean you really love to play with it and experiment with it.
Track is perfect.Rising Tempo,Rock Elements,Jazzy,Hip-Hop and much more...!!
The Intro is good.Vibe on the track is really good.Track has some serious and cinematic feel to it.
Bass-line is epic.Saxophone is awesome.Plucked instruments are good.Beats are awesomely programmed.Really loved the breaks and rises in it.
Audio Effects are perfect.
Energetic feel.Awesome Fusion!!
Can you do Indian Fusion in your next tracks....??!!
Like using Sitar,Sarod,Harmonium,Flute,Dholak,Tabla,Percussion etc
You definitely get the kind of thing I'm into. Thanks for quite a few words about it.
"you really love to play with it and experiment with it"
That truly is all I do - in an admittedly self indulgent sort of way. It's just my belief that any good genre can be mixed with another. But I don't really think of them as genres. I just try out sounds I like that happen to fall in different genres and try to combine them in ways I have never heard before. I think I achieve that though that doesn't necessarily make it amazing music (but definitely interesting).
"Saxophone is awesome"
This is the only proper track I've ever made featuring another musician. Shame that he's not at all interested in the track, though that's something I can't really explain.
"Audio Effects are perfect."
While there are all sorts of effects, check out the guitar in the d'n'b section 2:28 to 3:04. It's very cut up and I very, very carefully automated different delays on the guitar which wasn't very good and I made loads of mistakes so had to piece together all the best bits. It's come out sounding pretty dark and weird so quite unusual.
An effect no one would ever notice is that, 3:36 to 4:27, the only bassline is the metal guitar riff. I just add an octave effect to the guitar part rather than adding another bassline. So, it's 100% tight. Not sure how many people do that but it can be cool.
Ye, I guess I add some Indian fusion. I don't acrually have a clue how to play Indian or Middle Eastern music but I manage to get some of those elements in quite often though I never do full Indian tracks (because I don't know how).
So, my Eastern sections often occur just briefly in my tracks. Would take too long to give you all the time references so will just recommend my following tracks that contain Eastern elements (either instruments or scales/playing or both):
Circular Motion (tambura), Lord Of Misrule, Right Place Wrong Century, An Early Morning Appointment With God, Shapesmith, Immemorialis (sitar), Zero Per Cent Proof (tabla), Fly Yes Land No (tabla), Things That Should Always Be, The Fatness(sitar), Thousand Ball Blues (harmonium), Three Miles Late, A Month Of Mondays (sitar).
I love Indian music and would like to get more of its great instruments into my stuff. But I have big limitations such as only playing a few instruments - mostly guitar, bass and banjo though I sometimes use a sitar sound on my Variax electric guitar eg on the track Immemorialis.
MAN,this is just awesome.The Guitar here is soooo addictive.You really uplifted the track and created a perfect atmosphere.Vibe is chilled,superb and love the effects on the track.Like the singing, real smooth.
You can really improve the mix and also add some more effects...
Perfect track for late night driving....!!!
Awesome work......
Gangsta Rap-The real HIP-HOP!...!!!Its one of my favorite genres.....
The track's very well programmed and really man your beats!!!they just make the your tracks addictive!!!
You can improve the intro and ending too ...make it little bigger.
And can make the piano synths more interesting and do add some variations.
Lyrics are good,okay.
Your raps are awesome.Make some music videos and bang!!!you are the future star!!!
Really addicted to Angel Dust....
And do accept my FaceBook request...
HUGE FAN OF YOURS!
Fantabulous WORK!
man this is just DOPE...!!! subscribed to your Youtube channel.Your voice is amazing and you are awesomely talented.
Soooo addicted to this track's instrumental and those BEATS!!!!!!
Very well programmed and mastered.
This I think is the best track from you and really needs much much more views.....
Can't wait for more man!!!
Can you check up my Hip-Hop/Rnb instrumental and give me some tips...(https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153600)
the point where those claps and snares kicks in....just awesome and those piano variations with delays are truly chilly....
LUVED it and please make it longer....!!!
Take your time and make it fabulous...!!!
holy damn....!!!!
The TUNE on this track is amazing....!!!
the starting is sooo fine!
I just don't know how to say it...fantabulous work and soooo addictive.
PERFECT SUMMER VIBE...!!
Amazing work, Mark! Love this tune! Love every instrument especially the guitar,trumpet and FX used...especially those beach waves and chirping of birds(actually u could lower this fx a bit)....
And as some of the users said u could really fade the beat transition at 1:40..
Track's professionally mastered
Chillout/Ambience fans would love this
fantabulous piece....!!
Maybe u could upload some FX used and help on my track Chillout track....PLZ :-(
Many thanks for your kind comments and for listening to soothing sea. Very much appreciated and would be more than happy to help out on your tracks, drop me an email if you like. Once again many thanks,
WOW..this is amazing....Your voice suites this track very well...!
AND the beat is way toooo sick....actually addicted to it..!!
Chorus is catchy, keep workin at it!
on Lazy featuring Rachel Clark by FreeRadical
The intro bassline is perfect and cool.Does its job.
Loved the vocals.They are really powerful.Good selection there.The first half is just perfect and as many members mentioned the second half is really a big change.
You should make the first half more fuller and can even make another song from the second half.
Track is well mixed.Perfect for clubs.The track will just uplift with some cool wobbles and more synths.Try to make it more Dub.
Really cool pack and good investment though.
And could you check my track here - https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/156302
I'll have another crack at it though as everyone keeps telling me the same lol.
Cheers for dropping in.
FR
on Fired Up feat Monkeyman by Leverett
Fabulous work....!!
That MonkeyMan Acapella was a good choice....!!
Liked the different synths used here...
And the main synth is hell catchy....
Introduction of strings at 3.20 is good.Liked that very much.
Bass-line is awesome.
Beats are good and keeps the listener involved...
Well produced and addictive....
AWESOME WORK!!!
And Could you help me in this classic DNB track-
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/154830
on a look at hip hop by ronabo
Flow is good as a Hip-Hop song would be.I mean you have maintained the Hip-Hop/Rap structure here...!!
Really loved those beats.Well programmed.I think you can lower the claps a bit and can add some Reverb to beats.
Those piano variations are addictive and cool.Gives a real feel of Pop/Hip-Hop.
Bass-line is really good.You can tweak it a little bit.I think its sounding more like a Dance or House bass(i think its only for me....don't change those keys,pitch and all....Just tweak it a little bit)
Song is really perfect.You can extend it by 1 Minute..!!
Awesomely produced....!!
Ronabo
on Way Beyond Wrong by StaticNomad
Looperman should really improve like MIXPOSURE.Thanks StaticNomad for that site.
Apart from that,I replayed this awesome track for 20 times(was hooked to it) and really noticed those effects you mentioned and started applying those in Ableton.
That octave effect is sooo damn unique.I was goddamn surprised!!.Thanks for replying and mentioning those.Gonna try them out.
And can you please check this track and give me some hints about adding Guitar or vocals or even a new synths in here--
www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/154524
Its like no track is complete here until you give your genius feedback.YOU HAVE AWESOME VISION FOR MUSIC...!!
DAMN GOOD...!!!
Extremely frustrating and means I have to carefully compose my reply (sometimes in my head when I'm walking about the house doing other stuff) so that I don't forget to answer a question (though I get very few of those) or mention my own point.
That's why I do such long replies but then I also do long reviews. And long tracks so that's just how I am: I have lots to play and lots to say.
I don't really like Mixposure as it's too complicated and awkward to use and you only get 5 tracks with a free account and there are no featured tracks (used not to be here but I think it's great and allows me to follow people and see their progress and not miss their new uploads).
"That octave effect is sooo damn unique"
Not sure what you mean. It's really just adding bass to any audio signal. A cool guitar riff may not need a separate bassline - perhaps just needs to have the low end added to it. That's why I sometimes use it. Gets messy if you add it to chord-based guitar playing but I don't play many chord-based riffs.
"I replayed this awesome track for 20 times(was hooked to it)"
When I upload my tracks, I usually listen to them quite a bit (out of the studio so different perspective) and I also get a bit hooked. Sometimes I just have to listen to the whole thing, even when it's a really long one. I often find each section joins onto the next in such a way that I don't want to press stop (which is exactly my intention).
"Its like no track is complete here until you give your genius feedback."
Glad you appreciate my comments. There have been just one or two people on this site who have not (one twice left insults on this track, see below, the other has been much more unpleasant) but it's best not to worry about them. Perhaps I'm slightly wasting my time giving extensive feedback when most people give very little. But there are a few people who do the same for me and make suggestions and get me thinking about things in a slightly different way.
"YOU HAVE AWESOME VISION FOR MUSIC."
Maybe but I'm really just a music obsessive so have lots to say about it. And, as I love music, make it every day and think about it much more, I don't find it hard to quite quickly say lots of things about a piece of music.
I will comment on the track you suggested as I like it and it has an interesting waveform!
on Way Beyond Wrong by StaticNomad
Every track of yours is unique and worth every second.I just love your style of making Music.
I mean you really love to play with it and experiment with it.
Track is perfect.Rising Tempo,Rock Elements,Jazzy,Hip-Hop and much more...!!
The Intro is good.Vibe on the track is really good.Track has some serious and cinematic feel to it.
Bass-line is epic.Saxophone is awesome.Plucked instruments are good.Beats are awesomely programmed.Really loved the breaks and rises in it.
Audio Effects are perfect.
Energetic feel.Awesome Fusion!!
Can you do Indian Fusion in your next tracks....??!!
Like using Sitar,Sarod,Harmonium,Flute,Dholak,Tabla,Percussion etc
I would love to listen it
Proud Fan of yours...!!!
"you really love to play with it and experiment with it"
That truly is all I do - in an admittedly self indulgent sort of way. It's just my belief that any good genre can be mixed with another. But I don't really think of them as genres. I just try out sounds I like that happen to fall in different genres and try to combine them in ways I have never heard before. I think I achieve that though that doesn't necessarily make it amazing music (but definitely interesting).
"Saxophone is awesome"
This is the only proper track I've ever made featuring another musician. Shame that he's not at all interested in the track, though that's something I can't really explain.
"Audio Effects are perfect."
While there are all sorts of effects, check out the guitar in the d'n'b section 2:28 to 3:04. It's very cut up and I very, very carefully automated different delays on the guitar which wasn't very good and I made loads of mistakes so had to piece together all the best bits. It's come out sounding pretty dark and weird so quite unusual.
An effect no one would ever notice is that, 3:36 to 4:27, the only bassline is the metal guitar riff. I just add an octave effect to the guitar part rather than adding another bassline. So, it's 100% tight. Not sure how many people do that but it can be cool.
Ye, I guess I add some Indian fusion. I don't acrually have a clue how to play Indian or Middle Eastern music but I manage to get some of those elements in quite often though I never do full Indian tracks (because I don't know how).
So, my Eastern sections often occur just briefly in my tracks. Would take too long to give you all the time references so will just recommend my following tracks that contain Eastern elements (either instruments or scales/playing or both):
Circular Motion (tambura), Lord Of Misrule, Right Place Wrong Century, An Early Morning Appointment With God, Shapesmith, Immemorialis (sitar), Zero Per Cent Proof (tabla), Fly Yes Land No (tabla), Things That Should Always Be, The Fatness(sitar), Thousand Ball Blues (harmonium), Three Miles Late, A Month Of Mondays (sitar).
I love Indian music and would like to get more of its great instruments into my stuff. But I have big limitations such as only playing a few instruments - mostly guitar, bass and banjo though I sometimes use a sitar sound on my Variax electric guitar eg on the track Immemorialis.
Thanks again for your thoughts.
on UrLuvGetzMeHi by TuneDef
You can really improve the mix and also add some more effects...
Perfect track for late night driving....!!!
Awesome work......
Tune D
on Sik Style - The New King by SikStyle1
The track's very well programmed and really man your beats!!!they just make the your tracks addictive!!!
You can improve the intro and ending too ...make it little bigger.
And can make the piano synths more interesting and do add some variations.
Lyrics are good,okay.
Your raps are awesome.Make some music videos and bang!!!you are the future star!!!
Really addicted to Angel Dust....
And do accept my FaceBook request...
HUGE FAN OF YOURS!
on Sik Style - Angel Dust by SikStyle1
man this is just DOPE...!!! subscribed to your Youtube channel.Your voice is amazing and you are awesomely talented.
Soooo addicted to this track's instrumental and those BEATS!!!!!!
Very well programmed and mastered.
This I think is the best track from you and really needs much much more views.....
Can't wait for more man!!!
Can you check up my Hip-Hop/Rnb instrumental and give me some tips...(https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153600)
on falling for by GalanticMusic
LUVED it and please make it longer....!!!
Take your time and make it fabulous...!!!
on Soundrise by Leverett
The TUNE on this track is amazing....!!!
the starting is sooo fine!
I just don't know how to say it...fantabulous work and soooo addictive.
PERFECT SUMMER VIBE...!!
Started following you on soundcloud...
on Alone feat KnowKontrol by Leverett
LUV each songs of yours....
on Soothing Sea Larry Wiggles aka Mark Jeffries by larrywiggles1
And as some of the users said u could really fade the beat transition at 1:40..
Track's professionally mastered
Chillout/Ambience fans would love this
fantabulous piece....!!
Maybe u could upload some FX used and help on my track Chillout track....PLZ :-(
Many thanks for your kind comments and for listening to soothing sea. Very much appreciated and would be more than happy to help out on your tracks, drop me an email if you like. Once again many thanks,
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on Forever Alone - Finished by Nikonthaicon
AND the beat is way toooo sick....actually addicted to it..!!
Chorus is catchy, keep workin at it!